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Join Date: Oct 2006
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Blue Alacrity gritty poetry to cold I’m ice out your sanctuary.
No one safe in this t-dot city, My venom marks proof for her hickey. Rock no rocks cause I’m a living blue gitty, Garroting you is when you try to wear this jewelry. I wrote my story pungent in smoke like biplane engine choke. The sky looked cooked when I meteor smash all these hating folks. I don’t care which snitch croaking cause I’m fill their holes with caulking. So nuin of that irrigate my bricks. Unlike your crib flooding cause no diaper on for your scared gates. I’m fashionably late for your funeral, cause I gotta look good for god’s only mistake. I ain’t with da flicks these movies producers create. I follow my own stake, not even they can judge me when I get to da pearly gates. I ain’t with da chronic but I’m high enough for her mechanical fix She get low an spill my oil all over making her look like a dirty mechanic. You all sick of my flow, I’m giving flu shots just to get your temperature vex. See I’m so fly for da witches hex, you need a spell book to check with my dick. You got a magic wand making babies appear only with mother in da pic. This town mess up cause I never seen a father in da family. Cause they commit da crimes but I can compare you to my similes. I’m covered in blue chinchilla I’m eating all your doe like cookie monster. I’m clean, mean, inferred beam targeted da glossy face in magazine. This a blue writing fiend, I team words like it’s on Hennessey seen. It’s gunna get you tipsy, I spit at her making her mind pregnant birth to queen. They love me cause this teen means different with green. You through da gutter dream, I’m spray reality as it was whip cream. Fool you got nothing to prove beside da dog shit under your shoes. Keep making stupid moves, your lungs jus bruise with water while I cruise. Bottle popped loose under so many grooves, next bottle cap you see is blood ooze. My security fool proof, I laugh cause I’m smooth like Santa dropping through da roof. Everyone was calm when I was gone from writing another long song. Now you so shaken your shivering got your balls moving like ping pong. I’m sweating your fat out till you like a skinny thong, I’m grasp you as if my hand size King Kong. I’m da cake visiting da jewelry store I come out finished so icy. You all now wish it was your birthday now but I’m no freebie I’m just pricey. I think in a jiffy an react instantly to all this villainy. Sadistically back you down da ally da darkness for hero to play dramatically. To bad I’m injected neutrally I feel no jealously so I don’t cloud my judgment emotionally. Einstein your angles rationally mathematically so equal sign can equally out da acute view gradually. My rhymes go with anything like Heinz ketchup and French fries, I punch it an taste so prime. My punch lines oversaturated with crime, guess every bar I stop on you is a parking lot fine. They see me grime like I have no time on my hands, it because da bling covering up all da shine. You all yelling ballin tell you hit on her an she kick your balls, da pimp falls. I ain’t with da phone for no doll, cause I’m da puppeteer who string da calls. Hit da club with your pal he pull out a 40 cal on you an just like that you newspaper fatal. My style cheated death five times cause you all too stupid to file guile. I don’t know how you so close an can’t do head shot your accuracy forever in denial. I’m not complaining cause now you did when I defile you like sidewalk played with school girl. Smile is vile, these actions mistaken for evil. Cause young’ns kill with gats, killin adults like they pedophiles. Everyone on a ego blast, trust you ain’t all that to me when it all it takes is one empty gat. I swing these hits away out my stadium, I smashed you with a bat an all you do is watch me walk home. Don’t need fake friends, they jus patron you till you broke an expressionless like home gnomes. This no nice poem, but I wrote 99 so far an this is 100 of em. I keep my thing moving you depleting exhausting faster than da dead in da coffin. You haters don’t get me starting cause when I go off popping. You all gunna be some new face in front of the door known as orphan. You think you thug’in, but fronting in da bathroom. Even mirror gunna slap your own image, an you were excepting you hugging. You don’t even like what you doing, so do me a favor an stop existing. I’m too graphic for da screen, da skipping rate on video game start glitching. Now I’m falling through walls like my appearance missing. I’m phantom on da beat, massacre da whole stadium. You all scared white like cranium, oh I miss you cause it’s yellow pee I’m witnessing. Wanna see me exploit my talent shitted all over your get up. I clean it spinning when I dunk it in toilet. Treat you to a kings gauntlet when you drink water with me. Cause you gunna see I’m blue tee for life, my soul decree. If I was a drink I be your last enjoyment before you hit bereavement. Follower I plant your head in cement an you now act sentient that hell was basement. Now I got your body in retirement to showcase for museum enjoyment. My mind militant, I counter with protected plans, like iniquity to da cross pendant. I hunt all my bounty who terrorize my country an politics ain’t my ******. But I’m knife you six way to Sunday like da super continent like Pangaea. She unzip me an took my whole load now mouth loaded like my backpack. I’m disturbance in da residence I distort static through da radio waves to feel my presence. I disturb all her pain I’m da new period in her life sentence, drive her crazy with da distance. These feet don’t dance to a tune, cause I music only da lyricism for realism. But these new raps ain’t authentic; they ghost written like cemetery head stones. I’m da king of da libretto. My throne sat my predecessors like they just came out da ghetto. I’m get that quick doe, my brothers have to watch their toes. Alacrity so focused you can see every wrinkle on da old. So blue out da brown mold, I put color in like kool-aid when da water flow. I’ll BBQ your body, compact you in like tuna in da stove. Busting out da anger now, da steam is what I whisper for. Now imagine what happen when I talk, it’s gunna be out of control. This kettle cooking your fluids in, pour it in da cup an I ain’t thirsty for your crap. Your importance to me is like da small dot on da map Best thing to happen since my birth mishap. Now I feel pressure like her big bum on my lap. Hit your head with da strength of rum, stab your self with your own dick to get that maple sap. One kick all I need to wrap you to a stretcher, delivered you fast when stocking wings flap. You one dummy I didn’t even start cussing yet funny. Look that diss was corny for you to steal my honey. Stupid leave trail for my bee stinger to poke ya dizzy. When you in my house. I put a rule in it, your feet up on da couch. Cause my rules put scare on you like when you see mouse. You bored of life to get high like da bush hair for da only louse. I’m soak you better than any summing suit. My roots step da animal up in me, like them furry boots. Hurry don’t let me in da coupe. Cause I’m switch hydraulics to jump, your heads be da new bumps on its roof. My names resolute as if no eraser marks seen on da paper, cause I been phtotshopped. Treasure map been mark cause snitch went to da cop to bark. Dark hits an their lights flashing sparking my ignition. Cause I spell danger operations when interrogation don’t make me talk. Follow me an get clapped into a frame, see if you smiling like da Mona Lisa picture. Fixed up by da trigger will put a fracture in your structure, You can’t treasure moment like how you use to forever. Cause getting drunk is shrinking your storage like it was your liver Together you all can utter fronting me, but time to set da battle frontier. An you now quiver alone, cause your army was seen camouflaged to scatter. It’s easy to disperse kill all over your persona in one verse. But what fun is that when I can curse you like lady has so much pocket change in her purse. Now I hit adulthood, now I begin to notice all da freaks in my hood. They like seagulls picking anything even vomit to admit anything that could. I pack fetid heat below my waist be careful when you blow my lid. Cause safety off on your guts filling da bucket. I swing hatchet now you in small pieces for my pockets. You need blaze 10 dymes to level mines. My lines shovel you with one rhyme. I speak ghastly about your kind, and you still like my lines. In my prime, I’m heard every hour like clock chime. I’m so flashy with my ice you just millimeters from liquor from falling into seizure. You won’t get me out your dreams, I nightmare asthma with puffer. I was born foul, while you window shop vowels of TV like its wheel of fortune. I’m big blue like Neptune, it take you years to fill this space gap with your tune. Them old prunes upset my stomach with it’s nasty fumes. That’s how ugly my life tasted goon. You petrified that cobwebs keeping another one born in my room. I’m finish this with a boom like da tension snaps when divorce papers mailed to groom. I’m so fast for da police my after images left behind da dust and they trying hand cuffs. I define my hood like diamond in da ruff. Cause these street edges ain’t smoothed nice like da 50ies. We all plain rude after da loot we kill for an item that’s worth 5 pennies. You know da deal, it don’t matter which town you from around. Cause clowns kill if you ain’t got one ounce of seriousness in your sound. I hold my ground since day one on gods domicile. So don’t hound my existence, or I’ll drop a bar to hang you like a sick icicle. I’m bound to no lady cause I’m with da simplicity to put bookmark when moment got star twinkle. These beautiful moment you flash camera on is a handful for my image. Cause it’s when I’m by my self feels wonderful, it’s hard to trust a trustful out da window hull. Who’s grateful cause you making life hell, I’m a soldier who shoot a bullet graceful. And you now spiting me hatful, like you don’t know da meaning of karma. I take vacations in da Bahamas cause my house full blue away from your camera. Coat so blue you brush me on da street, and you gunna be seeing an whole new C note. I can change her feeling for me when I flick da remote. My dagger understood all it can do is poke you to death till you spilt blood like waterfall over boat. I’m splinter all over the dance floor, that’s what happens when you get in da ring with my foot. I don’t care how I shut you out off my life, just be luckily you got out alive. These parasites use you for money, because you being used like any website, Attend school for knowledge, cause drop out will look like minimum wage when I spray pesticide. Cause my diction just grew when I added homicide, when I kicked your dick and die. I ride to da death, you complain about your verve, your UV rays off my eyes. It pries me when people say life is too short, then how come they still living to cry. I’m just another guy not different from the mistakes when human first try to fly. Time to put down these weights; I’m leave your clothes line on da hook for my bait. Best way to describe my perfect date is my birthday; she has to be born in my fate. Born year of da dragon, I’m cracking fire to hot to touch da handle on da wagon. Before I bag them, I’m vivid their dream of seeing a magnum. I can do this in my sleeping ambition I make a lazy situation look like I got an ounce of aggression. Cause when I wake up from daydreaming this work out will get you vomit craven. Cause I’m that sick, you won’t stomach me for a few days in da washroom. You come out in starvation cause your ego hungry again to revenge upon my till I trick you to levitation. So this is it for da year, take these days to rest me off your shoulder like airport luggage full of bomb fear. This workout got me exhausted, feel like mail man posted da whole neighbor hood in one letter. (ye yeah ) |
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T T T TOTALLY DOOD!
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Inside Your Girlfriend
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too long and by the looks of the first few lines too wack
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: coquitlam:right by vancouver
Posts: 485
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HOLLLY FUCK THAT IS SOME LONG ASS SHIT,how can that be part 3 thats practically 2 songs right there..ill rate this 4/10 it was pretty wack
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