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Old 12-07-2006, 10:38 PM   #1
 
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(Hook)
Hit Mob rockin them bandannas
got more crack than Juelz Santana
Keep big boy toyz that need them bananas
in the winter got ur block hot as the suvana
(x2)

(Verse 1)

Contemplating n debating weather or not to get this cake
will fuck up ya concentration n lead to mistakes ya make
If this is sumn u cant handle u betta get out the game in a hurry
b4 u get lit up like a candle, n get yaself buried
See I don’t have this issue cuz im built for this lifestyle
*Click PAP* ya fam will miss u, aint nobody gonna smile
N the feds cant touch this, im on that MC Hammer
while boyz get lost in the abyss, yea im talking bout the slammer
See I aint sum fake punk that says they been through it
if I say im gon do sumn then im gon do it
So if the moneys lookin low I got to get back out on the grind
if that don’t work then im cocking back the nine
Stick up ya boy then im takin his shines
dont fuck w/ me man cuz im losin my mind
Ill leave u in an alley all bloody n dyin
so go n try ya luck if u think that im lyin

(Hook)
Hit Mob rockin them bandannas
got more crack than Juelz Santana
Keep big boy toyz that need them bananas
in the winter got ur block hot as the suvana
(x2)
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Old 12-08-2006, 12:22 AM   #2
 
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C'mon yall...gimme sum feed on this!!!
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Old 12-08-2006, 01:26 AM   #3
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damn dat pretty hot i like tha hook and the verse had good rhyming and shit i rate this one a 9/10 keep that shit up

since i left feed can ya please vote on this battle thanks
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Old 12-08-2006, 07:41 AM   #4
 
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^ yu yup, good looks...cmon, need moreee feed!!!
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Old 12-08-2006, 07:58 AM   #5
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your vocab is very limited, rhyme scheme basic, no multies, no wordplay, no creativity, flow was the only thing that was half decent.
you may think im hating but a dude who has seen 2 billion frees about how much they 'grind' and 'cock back the nine'...yea sure you do buddy. Im sure ull improve though.
Thats real feedback
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Old 12-08-2006, 01:29 PM   #6
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^^^ that's kinda what I was going to say, it had cool flow but the same ol' concepts
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Old 12-08-2006, 04:35 PM   #7
 
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^ Thanx for the feed, good, bad, or ugly i dont care...i just wanna improve so w/e u tell me can help...Need more feed!!!
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Old 12-10-2006, 01:38 AM   #8
 
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Need More Feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed!!!
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Old 12-10-2006, 11:35 PM   #9
 
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uppin for feed!!!
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Old 12-11-2006, 11:50 PM   #10
 
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c'mon yall i neeeeeeeeed feed!!!
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Old 12-12-2006, 09:58 PM   #11
 
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damn it soo hard to get a lil feed on here
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Old 12-13-2006, 11:00 PM   #12
 
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Old 12-14-2006, 11:28 PM   #13
 
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when people dont leave feed after the 5th time u up...its time to stop

this was wack
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Old 12-15-2006, 12:01 AM   #15
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Naw this was crack def. a good post
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Old 12-15-2006, 01:00 AM   #16
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damn dis nigga eager lol...

shit's not bad, u got potential..ya multies aint all da way there yet, but @ least it rhymes...up ya lyrics (add sum punches, metas) and keep droppin, u'll get betta
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Old 12-16-2006, 12:43 AM   #17
 
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finally!!! lol...propzzz yall, thanx for the advice
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