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Old 12-06-2006, 10:17 PM   #1
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BRINGIN IT TO YA AGAIN!!!
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havent u heard i'm the first one to blast in all kinda hearse//
how many niggaz failed tryna find a verse, walk into my thread you'll "see more stars" than astronomers!!//
ima leader not a follower, nigga the time's clocking//
we're all watching ima bit rough you'll "get stuffed" like stockings//
dont bring the glocks in, or you'll be pushin me nerd//
watch u rookies get served, i came onto this site and "saw more pussy" than pervs//
worryin's worse, this forum would be blessed if it banned you//
im the best in the land duke, yall more 'herb' than the essences shampoo!!//
teach yall lessons; command you, the way i expertly stoke the flames//
most of yall is "blind to your flops" call it the progression of poker games!!//
this loc's insane- i'll be damned if u dont think that this man's hard//
wit tha grand ball, i'll get ya "eatin slugs" like we was in france dawg//
aint no way that my plan's flawed, my verses is long and heavy//
tha girls twirkin it wit they jelly, meanwhile "i aint talk to them" sluts like i was workin in Tom and Jerry//
im perfect and yall its scary how my chain always get the glow yall fallin wit tha snow//
listen hoe the bitches know im the sickest yo picture dough the way im livin oh//
im finna blow and while u you shits slumped i caress the flames//
i serve what the kids want, come to my hood you'll "get jumped" like a CHECKER GAME!!//

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^^ KEYED THAT IN 4 MINUTES AND 12 SECONDS..YALL DO THE MATH..IM SICK!! GET ME IN YO CREW NOW!!!!
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Old 12-06-2006, 10:22 PM   #2
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Old 12-06-2006, 11:33 PM   #3
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Old 12-07-2006, 01:36 AM   #4
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FEED DAMNIT :p and any crew hit me up
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Old 12-07-2006, 02:23 AM   #5
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Boooooo!!! Shut Up And Stop Bumpin!!!!
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Old 12-07-2006, 01:41 PM   #6
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You Have Caught Me On A Bad Day...Therfore I Shall Be Mean

Retract Ya Body Organs..Ya Lungs Tossed, U Play BBall But I Bet Ya Cant Catch Ya Breath
Talk Shit On Tha Net But I Cant See..Or Hear U, Its Like..Im Already Talkin To Ya Death


Now My Last Line Means Ur A Ghost...Nobody Can See You, Therfore U Wouldnt Be Wanted In A Crew
My First Line Was Jus For Fun Bcoz I Was Bored, And This Line > Ur BBall Line (The Last Line)

So...Overall, 2 Lines, Less Than A Min Thinkin > Ur '4 Min' (2 day) Thinkin For A Spit

G'day..And Your 'Deathwish' Has Officially Been Granted
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Old 12-07-2006, 06:20 PM   #7
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You Have Caught Me On A Bad Day...Therfore I Shall Be Mean

Retract Ya Body Organs..Ya Lungs Tossed, U Play BBall But I Bet Ya Cant Catch Ya Breath
Talk Shit On Tha Net But I Cant See..Or Hear U, Its Like..Im Already Talkin To Ya Death


Now My Last Line Means Ur A Ghost...Nobody Can See You, Therfore U Wouldnt Be Wanted In A Crew
My First Line Was Jus For Fun Bcoz I Was Bored, And This Line > Ur BBall Line (The Last Line)

So...Overall, 2 Lines, Less Than A Min Thinkin > Ur '4 Min' (2 day) Thinkin For A Spit

G'day..And Your 'Deathwish' Has Officially Been Granted

^^ lol..homo hahaha gets at me wit wack bars..doint even bother..and to the otha dude- yea bumping gets annoying but i just want some feed
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Old 12-07-2006, 06:53 PM   #8
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your other flow was better
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Old 12-07-2006, 07:12 PM   #9
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thankx man for the feed..criticism is good (long as its not hatin)
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Old 12-08-2006, 12:28 PM   #10
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LOL! If u read wot i wrote...Firstly it said less than a minute...And if u read the bars PROPERLY...They actually have more meaning than the whole of ur verse

AND > Anyfin u will drop from now till...christmas '09

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