Hurricane Katrina Victim(keystyle)

~Young Gunna~ · 12-06-2006, 10:14 PM

keystyle....was in da thread n i saw dose's topics...n i jus wrote dis quick..good looks to dose tho for da topic

katrina destorys as i was walkin on ma roof
da city n citizens dying...im talkin on da truth
evil is rising as da deadly force is showing
dead bodys in da river n da corpse is flowing
'HK' was unstoppable lik immortals in from hong kong
waitin for help but da planes to freedom wer long gone
she slaughters foes..as her deadly water flows
hard work ammounted to nothin ma father knows
shes blowin livers..as dead bodys flow in rivers
im scared to die..n i cant control the shivers
but i gotta try to overcome my fears and stay strong
bring hope back to da faimily..as we all sat down n prayed long
trynna stay awake befor katrina leaves me slain in da night
dont need these tragedys,i already got enouph pain in ma life
evry1 was fast asleep..still on da roof n it past a week
felt flat n weak..i was ready to giv up n face a wrath defeat
it was a shame than..der was a miracle as i seen a plane land
my brain jammed..den i got past da tragedys as a changed man

Shogun · 12-06-2006, 11:34 PM

I don't think any man who has been on the brink of "a wrath defeat" has left the situation the same man...sure he'll look the same, but inside it's all changed; brain cells numbed, faith in humanity jaded...praise the Lord for abortion clinics.

~Young Gunna~ · 12-07-2006, 07:59 PM

thx for da feed...uppin

-C.C- · 12-07-2006, 07:59 PM

didnt seem like u put too much effort into it...or text emotion lol....ill go in depth later if i feel like it....like a 6/10 normal.....7/10 topical

sofis2cated · 12-07-2006, 08:30 PM

4 sho nice drop, but like CC said could've expressed more emotion

JR-One · 12-07-2006, 09:59 PM

Wow.. .. Gunna Is Horrible At Topicals.. .. Thanks For Ruining My Idea.. ..

12-06-2006, 10:14 PM	#1
~Young Gunna~ Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Gs Us Posts: 10,870 Repped: 156 Repped 574 Times in 243 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Hurricane Katrina Victim(keystyle) Hurricane Katrina Victim(keystyle) keystyle....was in da thread n i saw dose's topics...n i jus wrote dis quick..good looks to dose tho for da topic katrina destorys as i was walkin on ma roof da city n citizens dying...im talkin on da truth evil is rising as da deadly force is showing dead bodys in da river n da corpse is flowing 'HK' was unstoppable lik immortals in from hong kong waitin for help but da planes to freedom wer long gone she slaughters foes..as her deadly water flows hard work ammounted to nothin ma father knows shes blowin livers..as dead bodys flow in rivers im scared to die..n i cant control the shivers but i gotta try to overcome my fears and stay strong bring hope back to da faimily..as we all sat down n prayed long trynna stay awake befor katrina leaves me slain in da night dont need these tragedys,i already got enouph pain in ma life evry1 was fast asleep..still on da roof n it past a week felt flat n weak..i was ready to giv up n face a wrath defeat it was a shame than..der was a miracle as i seen a plane land my brain jammed..den i got past da tragedys as a changed man

12-07-2006, 09:59 PM	#6
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Wow.. .. Gunna Is Horrible At Topicals.. .. Thanks For Ruining My Idea.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

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12-06-2006, 11:34 PM	#2
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	I don't think any man who has been on the brink of "a wrath defeat" has left the situation the same man...sure he'll look the same, but inside it's all changed; brain cells numbed, faith in humanity jaded...praise the Lord for abortion clinics.

12-07-2006, 07:59 PM	#3
~Young Gunna~ Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Gs Us Posts: 10,870 Repped: 156 Repped 574 Times in 243 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	thx for da feed...uppin

12-07-2006, 07:59 PM	#4
-C.C- Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: To The 5 Boroughs And Beyond Posts: 1,334 Repped: 82 Repped 189 Times in 39 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	didnt seem like u put too much effort into it...or text emotion lol....ill go in depth later if i feel like it....like a 6/10 normal.....7/10 topical

12-07-2006, 08:30 PM	#5
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	4 sho nice drop, but like CC said could've expressed more emotion