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A.T.I. · 11-20-2006, 01:42 AM

Rap Poetry (3rd verse)

I craft soulful words cause they made easy to swallow
Even with complexity, my rhymes are easy to follow//
Represent for the rich and the poor, theyres common pain
Of having life close doors, forcing you out in rain//
Either in reality or symbolic of the struggle
So I keep my rhymes slick and solid to press through the tussle//
Of a 9 to 5, or a day rockin the streets
This was a dream of mine, my heart knew of the feat//
Ahead of my eyes, unclear in the early days
But ahead they're were signs, but blocked by the suns rays//
So realize we're equal, and we're here for more than profit
Religion close to my words, cause that'd be wanted by the prophets//
Who said to strive for good, so lets not cheat our brothers
And instead just do what we should to ensure our fam don't suffer//
Staying alive's harder for some, but the struggle only benefits
For those who work through it, after that, life's definite

A.T.I. · 11-20-2006, 05:27 PM

bump.....feedback peoples

11-20-2006, 01:42 AM	#1
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,600 Repped: 1,376 Repped 2,046 Times in 720 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 163 Times in 130 Posts	Rap Poetry (3rd verse)>>Leave Feedback Rap Poetry (3rd verse)>>Leave Feedback Rap Poetry (3rd verse) I craft soulful words cause they made easy to swallow Even with complexity, my rhymes are easy to follow// Represent for the rich and the poor, theyres common pain Of having life close doors, forcing you out in rain// Either in reality or symbolic of the struggle So I keep my rhymes slick and solid to press through the tussle// Of a 9 to 5, or a day rockin the streets This was a dream of mine, my heart knew of the feat// Ahead of my eyes, unclear in the early days But ahead they're were signs, but blocked by the suns rays// So realize we're equal, and we're here for more than profit Religion close to my words, cause that'd be wanted by the prophets// Who said to strive for good, so lets not cheat our brothers And instead just do what we should to ensure our fam don't suffer// Staying alive's harder for some, but the struggle only benefits For those who work through it, after that, life's definite __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

11-20-2006, 05:27 PM	#2
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,600 Repped: 1,376 Repped 2,046 Times in 720 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 163 Times in 130 Posts	bump.....feedback peoples __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

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