Nightmare

MannY · 11-19-2006, 01:21 PM

Ayo,

Apartment rusty wit' paint peelin', homicide n' blood scenes/
My eye shines, gleams, reacts and scratches dreams/
No less, Finesse I confess n' bless mad activities/
This cold-blooded will-in-me expressin' themes differently/
Fatigue fitted, stained brim that stays tilted/
The 59' is itchin' at mind within' a distance/
Resistin' to inhale, buddha cloggin' up my lungs/*cough*
A young adolescent bangin' wit' his gun like a drum/
Scuffed sneakers, a prophet drownin' in his Sony Speakers/
The type to thrust his knife at an ill-willed teacher/
Betta' believe his mind's set, Champagne in Corvettes/
Chains lightin' up his neck, E-Lex Wit' TV-Decks/
Facade..items n' paper, a Don, crime creator/
Persona's n' Aliases.. Corona n' Schaefer/
Blasphemy, crooked figures always tryna' blast at me/
I guarantee my knee'll buckle, concrete scars'll double/
Line the 9', now he's bustin' up his back like a turnbuckle/
To say the least, this motherfucker's in trouble/
The siren's risin' like the ashes burnin' up in rubble/
...
Scan the block.. bodega's, n' corner shops is dim/
Wit'-skin blown upon the brim of my Navy blue fitted/
Quick decision ta' grip the steering column' till collision/
Cuz' Wisdom'll wrap the cops, cornered n' buckin' shots/
A Screwed n' chopped corpse thrown in an empty Brooklyn lot/
Heart pacin' n' mind racin', my arm's bracin' steel/
Flip the switch, then' upshift ta' steady the wheel/
My mind's buggin', fuck a cop confrontation or a run-in/
Should I scheme at the warehouse up in Corona, Queens?/
Infested wit' fiends fightin' under fucked-up lightin'/
N' trapped by white lines like a Tennessee Titan/
Express through long writin' in his home environment/
His mom givin' head n' she's never retiring!/
He's THIS close to dieing, a bullet won't do shit/
He was born dead..like a homebred basehead/
But ahead of the rest, so instead he bled rhymes/
A gunshot from outside put off this dream another time/

LadyValentine · 11-19-2006, 01:36 PM

WOAH

Very Graphic, The Imagery Was Very Vivid

I Wish There Would Of Been Some Nice Metas In Their Tho, Just To Put The Icing On The Cake

Overall: 8.5

You Came Nice Son

Tom Chambers · 11-20-2006, 12:18 AM

manny...:-(....................wud up duke.......long time....this was sick fam.....def 9/10....good to see a "manny drop"

!{THR!LLZ}! · 11-20-2006, 01:34 AM

GoOs ShIt FaMo...HaVeN't TaLk To u In A MiNuTe...8/10...StAy uP...{321}

A.T.I. · 11-20-2006, 01:45 AM

nice drop...original with some nice wordplay

11-19-2006, 01:21 PM	#1
MannY Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Miramar, FL Posts: 580 Repped: 1 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nightmare Nightmare Ayo, Apartment rusty wit' paint peelin', homicide n' blood scenes/ My eye shines, gleams, reacts and scratches dreams/ No less, Finesse I confess n' bless mad activities/ This cold-blooded will-in-me expressin' themes differently/ Fatigue fitted, stained brim that stays tilted/ The 59' is itchin' at mind within' a distance/ Resistin' to inhale, buddha cloggin' up my lungs/cough A young adolescent bangin' wit' his gun like a drum/ Scuffed sneakers, a prophet drownin' in his Sony Speakers/ The type to thrust his knife at an ill-willed teacher/ Betta' believe his mind's set, Champagne in Corvettes/ Chains lightin' up his neck, E-Lex Wit' TV-Decks/ Facade..items n' paper, a Don, crime creator/ Persona's n' Aliases.. Corona n' Schaefer/ Blasphemy, crooked figures always tryna' blast at me/ I guarantee my knee'll buckle, concrete scars'll double/ Line the 9', now he's bustin' up his back like a turnbuckle/ To say the least, this motherfucker's in trouble/ The siren's risin' like the ashes burnin' up in rubble/ ... Scan the block.. bodega's, n' corner shops is dim/ Wit'-skin blown upon the brim of my Navy blue fitted/ Quick decision ta' grip the steering column' till collision/ Cuz' Wisdom'll wrap the cops, cornered n' buckin' shots/ A Screwed n' chopped corpse thrown in an empty Brooklyn lot/ Heart pacin' n' mind racin', my arm's bracin' steel/ Flip the switch, then' upshift ta' steady the wheel/ My mind's buggin', fuck a cop confrontation or a run-in/ Should I scheme at the warehouse up in Corona, Queens?/ Infested wit' fiends fightin' under fucked-up lightin'/ N' trapped by white lines like a Tennessee Titan/ Express through long writin' in his home environment/ His mom givin' head n' she's never retiring!/ He's THIS close to dieing, a bullet won't do shit/ He was born dead..like a homebred basehead/ But ahead of the rest, so instead he bled rhymes/ A gunshot from outside put off this dream another time/

11-19-2006, 01:36 PM	#2
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	WOAH Very Graphic, The Imagery Was Very Vivid I Wish There Would Of Been Some Nice Metas In Their Tho, Just To Put The Icing On The Cake Overall: 8.5 You Came Nice Son __________________ Why In The Hell Would You Let Your Fingers Type Such Absurdity? - Me

11-20-2006, 01:34 AM	#4
!{THR!LLZ}! {NJ}-W's 45~2 L's- Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: {CMD} -NJ- Posts: 3,713 Repped: 13 Repped 14 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	GoOs ShIt FaMo...HaVeN't TaLk To u In A MiNuTe...8/10...StAy uP...{321} __________________ {NJ THRILLA THE KILLA}{THRILLZ}{05-07} {SOLO KILL COUNT}{W'S 45 - 3 L'S}{{321}} {RHYME REF}{VET SLAYA}{G-WORLD'S MINE}

11-20-2006, 01:45 AM	#5
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,600 Repped: 1,376 Repped 2,041 Times in 718 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 162 Times in 129 Posts	nice drop...original with some nice wordplay __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

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11-20-2006, 12:18 AM	#3
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	manny...:-(....................wud up duke.......long time....this was sick fam.....def 9/10....good to see a "manny drop"