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Old 11-18-2006, 10:27 PM   #1
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Arrow Bread (Money) (Cash)

Bread (Money) (Cash)

anythin i want i go out n buy it
but dese other niggaz aint got no bread like da carbon diet
cuz every time i hit da strip i start a riot
feinz kno i got da best dope n dey wana try it
but lets go back 2 da cash
money b 4 da ass
lips stealed if da fedz ask
how i get my stacks
cocaine maryjuana crack
meth dust n lead bust
da projects da slumz da ghetto da hood
money if u get it u gon b good
cuz time dont wait
dess y im out tryna get paid
b 4 i get slaid
but 4 now im thinkin bout new wayz of makin cream while twistin haze
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Old 11-18-2006, 10:38 PM   #2
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ya shit was elementary

it's good if dis is ya first shot at rappin

ya got da basic "shit must rhyme" concept down

but now try some multies
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Old 11-18-2006, 10:39 PM   #3
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also work on uppin ya shit a lil bit more vocabularically
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in other words,

Get some bigger and better words

It'll help ya out a lot

thanx fo doin dis cuz i just got my 500th post cuzza you

propz man
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