Bread (Money) (Cash)

Pineapple · 11-18-2006, 10:27 PM

anythin i want i go out n buy it
but dese other niggaz aint got no bread like da carbon diet
cuz every time i hit da strip i start a riot
feinz kno i got da best dope n dey wana try it
but lets go back 2 da cash
money b 4 da ass
lips stealed if da fedz ask
how i get my stacks
cocaine maryjuana crack
meth dust n lead bust
da projects da slumz da ghetto da hood
money if u get it u gon b good
cuz time dont wait
dess y im out tryna get paid
b 4 i get slaid
but 4 now im thinkin bout new wayz of makin cream while twistin haze
...............................

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 11-18-2006, 10:38 PM

ya shit was elementary

it's good if dis is ya first shot at rappin

ya got da basic "shit must rhyme" concept down

but now try some multies

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 11-18-2006, 10:39 PM

also work on uppin ya shit a lil bit more vocabularically

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 11-18-2006, 10:39 PM

in other words,

Get some bigger and better words

It'll help ya out a lot

thanx fo doin dis cuz i just got my 500th post cuzza you

propz man

11-18-2006, 10:27 PM	#1
Pineapple Complex Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 2,938 Repped: 1,221 Repped 2,319 Times in 707 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	Bread (Money) (Cash) Bread (Money) (Cash) anythin i want i go out n buy it but dese other niggaz aint got no bread like da carbon diet cuz every time i hit da strip i start a riot feinz kno i got da best dope n dey wana try it but lets go back 2 da cash money b 4 da ass lips stealed if da fedz ask how i get my stacks cocaine maryjuana crack meth dust n lead bust da projects da slumz da ghetto da hood money if u get it u gon b good cuz time dont wait dess y im out tryna get paid b 4 i get slaid but 4 now im thinkin bout new wayz of makin cream while twistin haze ...............................

11-18-2006, 10:38 PM	#2
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	ya shit was elementary it's good if dis is ya first shot at rappin ya got da basic "shit must rhyme" concept down but now try some multies __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

11-18-2006, 10:39 PM	#3
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	also work on uppin ya shit a lil bit more vocabularically __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

11-18-2006, 10:39 PM	#4
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	in other words, Get some bigger and better words It'll help ya out a lot thanx fo doin dis cuz i just got my 500th post cuzza you propz man __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

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