Thoughts Of An Unborn 5eed

*Danja* · 11-17-2006, 10:56 PM

Thoughts Run Through My Unfinished Brain As I Sit In The Womb
Hopin For Greatness….But My Life’s Path Is Already Destined For Doom
Already Thinkin, How Im Gonna Keep The Smith And Wessons Consumed
Maybe In The Diaper…Aha…..Yea…….Thas Wut I’ll Do
The First Nigga Try To Test Me….Gon Be Made An Example..Witout Choice
Everybody Askin Me…”Why Dint U Try To Talk It Out?”….
.......................................Kuz I Didn’t Wanna Hear The Sound Of His Voice….
Maybe I’m Goin A Lil Far, Puttin The “Clocks Behind Me” And Getting “Ahead Of My Time”
But Maybe I’m Not…
Everybody’s Afraid Of Their Destiny But I’m Just Awaitin And Ready For Mine
Haters And Doubters Gon Try To “Knock Me Off Track” Like “Cheatin Olympians”
But I’m Gonna Come Back All Beaten And Limpin In
Wut You Think I’m Gon Lay Down Flat .And Let You Run All On Top Of Me
Nah….Like A “Angry Door” I Just Wanna Know….WHY THE FUCK ARE YALL “KNOCKIN ME!?”
Then Turn Around And Start Jockin Me…Start Pitchin Rocks To The Forlorn Feins
Hol’Up…Ya Kno Wut?,. Thas Not My Life….Thas Just The Thoughts Of An Unborn Seed!

LethalIsILL · 11-17-2006, 11:02 PM

good flow, and topic nice drop keep it up

Tom Chambers · 11-17-2006, 11:04 PM

punches was decent.....a couple played....but i liked the content of this....it reminds me alot of a wayne song.....decent shit duke 7/10

~Menace~ · 11-17-2006, 11:04 PM

tha flow seemed off; i liked some of the wordplay u had, it went along well wit the rest of this written, it wasnt no random ass shit...it was good overall, stay up

Da Dynasty · 11-17-2006, 11:06 PM

This Was Nice Danja, I Liked It

Haters And Doubters Gon Try To “Knock Me Off Track” Like “Cheatin Olympians”

*Danja* · 11-17-2006, 11:17 PM

Good Lookin On Da Feed....this verse is madd old tho..it was a collabo verse wit nite

JR-One · 11-17-2006, 11:20 PM

Shit's Wack.. .. Get The Phuck Out This Site, Newbie.. .. I'm The Best Around.. .. Don't Talk Shit And You Won't Get Ripped.. ..

*Danja* · 11-17-2006, 11:48 PM

i aint even gon 5paz on dude....but me...a newbie?? LOL...R u 5erious?

11-17-2006, 10:56 PM	#1
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thoughts Of An Unborn 5eed Thoughts Of An Unborn 5eed Thoughts Run Through My Unfinished Brain As I Sit In The Womb Hopin For Greatness….But My Life’s Path Is Already Destined For Doom Already Thinkin, How Im Gonna Keep The Smith And Wessons Consumed Maybe In The Diaper…Aha…..Yea…….Thas Wut I’ll Do The First Nigga Try To Test Me….Gon Be Made An Example..Witout Choice Everybody Askin Me…”Why Dint U Try To Talk It Out?”…. .......................................Kuz I Didn’t Wanna Hear The Sound Of His Voice…. Maybe I’m Goin A Lil Far, Puttin The “Clocks Behind Me” And Getting “Ahead Of My Time” But Maybe I’m Not… Everybody’s Afraid Of Their Destiny But I’m Just Awaitin And Ready For Mine Haters And Doubters Gon Try To “Knock Me Off Track” Like “Cheatin Olympians” But I’m Gonna Come Back All Beaten And Limpin In Wut You Think I’m Gon Lay Down Flat .And Let You Run All On Top Of Me Nah….Like A “Angry Door” I Just Wanna Know….WHY THE FUCK ARE YALL “KNOCKIN ME!?” Then Turn Around And Start Jockin Me…Start Pitchin Rocks To The Forlorn Feins Hol’Up…Ya Kno Wut?,. Thas Not My Life….Thas Just The Thoughts Of An Unborn Seed!

11-17-2006, 11:02 PM	#2
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,013 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	good flow, and topic nice drop keep it up __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

11-17-2006, 11:04 PM	#4
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,753 Repped: 116 Repped 38 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	tha flow seemed off; i liked some of the wordplay u had, it went along well wit the rest of this written, it wasnt no random ass shit...it was good overall, stay up __________________ William Shaftner

11-17-2006, 11:20 PM	#7
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Shit's Wack.. .. Get The Phuck Out This Site, Newbie.. .. I'm The Best Around.. .. Don't Talk Shit And You Won't Get Ripped.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

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11-17-2006, 11:04 PM	#3
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	punches was decent.....a couple played....but i liked the content of this....it reminds me alot of a wayne song.....decent shit duke 7/10

11-17-2006, 11:06 PM	#5
Da Dynasty Stop Learned Helplessness Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Mississippi Posts: 11,936 Repped: 6,018 Repped 1,248 Times in 441 Posts Neg Reps: 53 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	This Was Nice Danja, I Liked It Haters And Doubters Gon Try To “Knock Me Off Track” Like “Cheatin Olympians”

11-17-2006, 11:17 PM	#6
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good Lookin On Da Feed....this verse is madd old tho..it was a collabo verse wit nite

11-17-2006, 11:48 PM	#8
Danja Dont Get Mad....Get Swag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: 2 Up,2 Down..Suffland, VA bitches Posts: 197 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i aint even gon 5paz on dude....but me...a newbie?? LOL...R u 5erious?