Dont Take It for Granted

toinedog · 11-17-2006, 05:53 AM

I never thought i would had such an hard and difficult week
my dad died and tears rolled down my cheek

He was my strength, my guidance, my friend, now my angel
2 days later asked god why give me such an difficult angle

My best friends mom died, She was a great woman and my role model
I was devestated, crushed wanted to grab my favorite bottle

Grey Goose or Crown Royal just wanted to escape and think
In one week, how can the titantic of my heart sink

Reflecting back..they both contributed to my growth and evolution as a man
I prayed and talked to god.. and wanted to start a new revolution and a new plan

Be Real, Don't be afraid to tell others how your feeling
Life is too short, appreciate it stay strong and keep it lord willing

When Its all said and done our afterlife is nothing like this planet
Live it up, respect each other, love each other and never take life for granted!

R.I.P Dad.. thanks for being my shoulder to cry on..my best friend..always there for me in time of need

R.I.P Sister Roberson.. you showed me how to care, forgive and love other people..gave me my first bible.. Introduced me to the lord and the christian lifestyle.. Even through good and really bad times with your family.. u still cared about me and still loved me..ill never forget u..

toinedog · 11-17-2006, 05:56 AM

P.S. this came straight from the heart and my brain..i typed excatly how i felt.. i hope many people read this

[.::.Raider.::.] · 11-21-2006, 12:19 AM

ay nigga that was some real shit i culd tell u wer spittin 4rm the heart good shit

08HipHopisAlive08 · 11-21-2006, 01:02 AM

This was pretty good..Emotional Product 7/10

lil rich · 11-21-2006, 01:03 AM

that wus pretty good, ill give that a 8.5/10

toinedog · 11-22-2006, 06:22 AM

thanks for the feedback fellaz..

11-17-2006, 05:53 AM	#1
toinedog senior member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 740 Repped: 261 Repped 277 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Dont Take It for Granted Dont Take It for Granted I never thought i would had such an hard and difficult week my dad died and tears rolled down my cheek He was my strength, my guidance, my friend, now my angel 2 days later asked god why give me such an difficult angle My best friends mom died, She was a great woman and my role model I was devestated, crushed wanted to grab my favorite bottle Grey Goose or Crown Royal just wanted to escape and think In one week, how can the titantic of my heart sink Reflecting back..they both contributed to my growth and evolution as a man I prayed and talked to god.. and wanted to start a new revolution and a new plan Be Real, Don't be afraid to tell others how your feeling Life is too short, appreciate it stay strong and keep it lord willing When Its all said and done our afterlife is nothing like this planet Live it up, respect each other, love each other and never take life for granted! R.I.P Dad.. thanks for being my shoulder to cry on..my best friend..always there for me in time of need R.I.P Sister Roberson.. you showed me how to care, forgive and love other people..gave me my first bible.. Introduced me to the lord and the christian lifestyle.. Even through good and really bad times with your family.. u still cared about me and still loved me..ill never forget u..

11-21-2006, 12:19 AM	#3
[.::.Raider.::.] ..305.. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: 305 MIA Posts: 673 Repped: 177 Repped 212 Times in 44 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ay nigga that was some real shit i culd tell u wer spittin 4rm the heart good shit __________________ "The deeper the scars, the worst is the history God you ain't gotta forgive me, just don't forget me" - Proof...R.I.P Proof

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11-17-2006, 05:56 AM	#2
toinedog senior member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 740 Repped: 261 Repped 277 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	P.S. this came straight from the heart and my brain..i typed excatly how i felt.. i hope many people read this

11-21-2006, 01:02 AM	#4
08HipHopisAlive08 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 6 Repped: 1 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This was pretty good..Emotional Product 7/10

11-21-2006, 01:03 AM	#5
lil rich Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: coquitlam:right by vancouver Posts: 485 Repped: 10 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	that wus pretty good, ill give that a 8.5/10

11-22-2006, 06:22 AM	#6
toinedog senior member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 740 Repped: 261 Repped 277 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for the feedback fellaz..