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Old 11-15-2006, 04:21 PM   #1
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this is a Public service annocement Young Cyssero is ''The Best Rapper alive"
and'Punchline King' dont play look im sorry but im back

Good morning Columbus( Hay Hay Hay)
Good afternoon Philly
Good Evening New York
Good Night AMERICA

chrous-show me what u pop lil dady(show em what u got)
i know u need to stop the hatin Franky(show em what u got)
Ill show u what i got Hov & weezy(show em what u got)
bitch im paid im paid im paid(show em what u got)

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Young Cyss Make the Rubberburn
Gave led to ur boss time to give ur workers some
now its ur blocks turn
Young cyss is the coldest-like dry-ice
so if i touch u U might get frost bite
The Bol neva lost a battle right
If im wrong correct me dont diss respect me
or
U goin be tossed in a casket in Loneliness
Too complacated wit the flow dont clone the shit
so if they Lebron and Jordan
I must be a cross between D.wade and Kobe-A
so im a King ya got applaude him
my guns clap like an addiance


Hey hey hey hey
Notice what i got Soljah
Notice them mulites Cana
Killin them Punchlines N.streetz
Topklass/Touchmonry gang bang Bang bang

Verse 2
so let em Kno exactly what i mean
ur the supervisor im the adminastrator of this thing
Matter fact the Young CEO
Kill u 5 miles away thats-rifle-range
i dont care bout the price of thang
I just pick it up and go wit
Its it beef better have pro-tection
befo i draw my weapon dont wanna hear no retro-spective
Im makin endz on my begining
Ya hatin bitches mad cause im winnin


shit ill give the real one played wit this but let it be known
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Old 11-15-2006, 07:23 PM   #2
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ur right...it was da 'weak version'
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Old 11-15-2006, 07:41 PM   #3
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i know had some boring shit goin on so it dont matter i kno im hot i got writers block and plus ppl helpin me im waitin to study all the shit and learn some more
so wait ya u goin get a hot joint from me
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Old 11-15-2006, 07:53 PM   #4
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dammit @ gunna....always taking my funnies....
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Old 11-16-2006, 03:00 AM   #5
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Lfmaoooooooooo You Aint Down With Topklass Or Touchmoney
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Old 11-16-2006, 06:02 PM   #6
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how u goin tell me nigga i basically knew everybody

Pook papers
Reed dollaz
Eddie morris
Frank wit the grippaz
NH
Kaboom
MI
Young Hot
reeserman

alot more niggas

and they beefin wit Go-gettas and Headshot and Ovaseers man
come on dude dont do that shit

they was on 2 raw for the streetz shit too they the one who got me to rap
and gave some advice i be gon easy on ya

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Old 11-16-2006, 06:05 PM   #7
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I aint down wit em but i talk to em on the Myspace all the time they give me advice and they said im they little goon
and shit man No diss man i aint down im affliated wit them
and i kno some mixtapes too I was born out in Columbus but went back and forth through philly and coulmbus in the summer
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Old 11-16-2006, 06:27 PM   #8
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son you do know that now Reed and Jihad are cool?? they doin a tape with Cyss called 3 Kings..........smh i know bout Philly rap......i bump most them heavy

what you know bout thaaat

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Old 11-16-2006, 06:32 PM   #9
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Oh Yeah nigga well to me it seemded they was still goin at it but i respect u
u got me right there
but Philly is were i got my style from man heavy influence on u too
am i correct cause if u bump it as heavy as i do we Philly influence-heavy
cause i listen to everybody from out there except
D.JONES CHIC RAW um itches and magic K.DOT hard as fuck to
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Old 11-16-2006, 06:34 PM   #10
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Cyss need to make a mixtape wit cassidy when he out the hospital
and just calm down im mean ain no real beef but it would be worth listenin to
Beasty as fuck Cyss my nigga so is cass Both Beast
i dont beef i do for HIP_HOP
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i listen to tons of philly ice.......from Ice City to Schoolly D to Spittage to Chic Raw(who is the only hope of philly blowin up)
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Old 11-16-2006, 06:37 PM   #12
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a i think the nigga Eddie goin be first but i though Jihad was signed he hot to
but thats fuck up that spittage is dead RIP SPITTAGE
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Old 11-16-2006, 07:02 PM   #13
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ayo me and u should hook up on a collab some time when im better and we can show em some philly shit real talk man

Philly Phinest maybe if u down holla
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Old 11-16-2006, 09:20 PM   #14
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I would go as far as callin it "weak",it could be better cause it aint really all rhymin,but it aint that bad

For example :so let em Kno exactly what i mean
ur the supervisor im the adminastrator of this thing
Matter fact the Young CEO


the idea is there,it just that execution could be better,but it aint all bad,probably like 3 outta 5
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Old 11-16-2006, 09:56 PM   #15
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lmao @ this dude acting like he know philly shit, get em' bhob
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Old 11-16-2006, 10:02 PM   #16
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lmao @ this dude acting like he know philly shit, get em' bhob
why u even talkin bout that,comment on this nigga writings........Like I did......At his age he need support u know
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i'd rather not comment on how wack this is, n lol i dont give a fuck wat age he is n SMH why would he come on the internet for support??...thats sum lame ass shit, so shut tha fuck up = )
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i'd rather not comment on how wack this is, n lol i dont give a fuck wat age he is n SMH why would he come on the internet for support??...thats sum lame ass shit, so shut tha fuck up = )
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i feel tha burn...good 1
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Old 11-17-2006, 12:21 AM   #20
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I didnt come on the internet for support i came to show what i can do
as u read the title it says WEAK VERSION it was neva the real one i did
i played wit this cause i was bored
Im only 13 to and i know about Philly rap how u goin tell me dude
as u can see me and the nigga cafe chopped it up about it so chill man
and thanks Ryder Bompton my nigga shout out to u
im usin alll the time i got to get better
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