No Offence HOV, but ATI killed you on your own shit

A.T.I. · 11-15-2006, 12:48 AM

Lost Ones Part II (Verse 3)

You better believe my soul awoken when they said the "heart beat found"
But the second time the meds failed my grandma, my heart beat down//
The tears of my moms real, we heard the heart beat sound//
And I felt the same pain, cause with us our heart beat's bound
Like one, unity, for once the fam has no drama//
Cause as a whole, we goin through the pain of losing our mama
Petty differences aside, we all feel the same way//
So things will never be the same after that same day
So now, we the lost ones because we've just lost one//
Now i want the feeling of my homie who found his lost son
Because he lost the gun, but not the treasure of life//
And grieving may not be easy, but tonight it be right
Soul shattered for now, and the mend takes its time//
But i remember her face from when she talked through her signs//
Not the hospital bed, unlucky the graveyard stays far
From where I lay, but in the sky, remembrance seen in the stars

A.T.I. · 11-15-2006, 04:23 PM

bumpp....lookin for some feedback

H.O.V.A. · 11-16-2006, 08:51 PM

flow wasnt great, pretty nice tho

11-15-2006, 12:48 AM	#1
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,600 Repped: 1,376 Repped 2,041 Times in 718 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 162 Times in 129 Posts	No Offence HOV, but ATI killed you on your own shit No Offence HOV, but ATI killed you on your own shit Lost Ones Part II (Verse 3) You better believe my soul awoken when they said the "heart beat found" But the second time the meds failed my grandma, my heart beat down// The tears of my moms real, we heard the heart beat sound// And I felt the same pain, cause with us our heart beat's bound Like one, unity, for once the fam has no drama// Cause as a whole, we goin through the pain of losing our mama Petty differences aside, we all feel the same way// So things will never be the same after that same day So now, we the lost ones because we've just lost one// Now i want the feeling of my homie who found his lost son Because he lost the gun, but not the treasure of life// And grieving may not be easy, but tonight it be right Soul shattered for now, and the mend takes its time// But i remember her face from when she talked through her signs// Not the hospital bed, unlucky the graveyard stays far From where I lay, but in the sky, remembrance seen in the stars __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

11-15-2006, 04:23 PM	#2
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,600 Repped: 1,376 Repped 2,041 Times in 718 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 162 Times in 129 Posts	bumpp....lookin for some feedback __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

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11-16-2006, 08:51 PM	#3
H.O.V.A. Banned Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: LI Posts: 4,564 Repped: 102 Repped 293 Times in 39 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	flow wasnt great, pretty nice tho