In The Chat Section I Attempted 100 Bars, but ended at 50+..check this

InsertNameHere · 11-14-2006, 07:06 PM

Check this and tell me what you think..

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*Beat - We Stay Fly (BALLIN!! lmfao)

Im The Voice of T.Dot, on your mind like a Jays Fitted//
Its These Bars I Write and Into Verses they Become Knitted//
Spittin' Raw Lyrics, Make you Take Another Look at the Kid//
Call me Bob Barker, they tryna sign me, i'll take highest bid//
But forget the money, its all about speakin' the truth//
Tell the DJ to flip up the beat and still i'll tear up the booth//
I'll switch up the flow and throw these bricks right at you//
Nah, not them albums that flop, it's them heavy lyrics i drop//
Where your standing, it aint safe you can call it Hiroshima//
Drop some bombs on your ass, leave you spittin' hard til you catch emphysima// 10 Bars In
The rest of your lyrics stay stuck in your lungs like chronic smoke//
You tryna spit the rest at the mic, but all you do is choke//
But away from the battle raps, I'll educate the weak minded//
So right now i need to switch up the beat and heal the blinded//

*Beat - Get By (Talib Kweli)

Now i pour my heart and my soul to make sure they feel my presence//
For this rap game, i spit raw, a taste of the essence//
Of this real shit apart from the fake rap acts//
Say they pop guns but its reality they lack//
I get by the pain by letting my true feeling's out//
On these rap bars I spit real, there ain't no doubts// 20 Bars In
Not a reasonable doubt to say that i ain't goin' nowhere//
Reanalyze the situation and try to listen with care//
Cause if anything im goin' to the top of the hill//
Yell my name out, let it be heard, fuck gettin' a deal//
Spread the word, hip hop is comin' back like Cooked Crack//
No Santana, s'all respect but I'm aimin' to bring it back//
Back to a time when we was just kickin' these rhymes//
Nowadays it's all about committin' these crimes//
But i think the message across, i'll let the choir take you to church//
And as for me, i'll keep spittin' cause these rhymes i keep on bringin'// 30 Bars In

Beat - Nothin' But A G Thang (Dr. Dre and Snoop Dogg)

Now i still got alot of time left, just sit back and chill//
My raps be just like a G Chord, the sounds i make, they shrill//
Flow's so sick, its like it goes one ear, comes out the other//
Fuck around with my raps and i'll son you just like your mother//
But like i said, just chill, there ain't no need for battle raps//
Cause you like dice, and everything you spit is crap//
Im tired of riding flawless over this beat//
Get the DJ To switch up this beat and ill show you some heat//

Beat - Church For Thugs (The Game)

Now im tellin you the kid, hes been packin' this heat//
Only 13 but it seems like hes been ridin this beat// 40 Bars In
Forever, as long as i remember//
Ive been watchin Big spittin rhymes from January to September//
Can't forget about Pac, dude was dope, he spit the real//
Inspiration for them other rappers that finally got they deal//
Made it out the struggle, listen to words from a wise man//
It's hard not to relate, he gave sight to the blind man//
Hope to the hopeless, strength to the weak//
Even when it felt like all prospects were bleak//
They stood at the top, rose to fame, not for personal gain//
ust to help the imprisoned minds break out their shackles and chains// 50 Bars In
But the struggle ain't over, so in Hip Hop we trust//
Only thing we can do is blaze through these beats like Just//
Speakin' of Just, i think it's time to write a letter//
Start off with Dear Summer, show you no one can do it better//

Beat - Dear Summer (Jay-Z)

Now i ain't done, just halfway, still got a way to go//
This some mad science shit, my bars got a rate of flow//
I'm flowing over this beat ever so fluently//
Got them hater's mad wonderin' what they tryna do to me//
So i go softer, ain't need to switch the flow up//
Cause they need all the support they can get like Double D Cups// 60 Bars In
But I ain't pullin' off no Game when i tell you It's Okay//
Cause im ridin' over these tracks, Get It Poppin' Everyday//
Now let's cut the letter short i still gotta talk to y'all//
It's time to switch the flow up and i'll be sure not to drop the ball//

dammit..writers block..shit if i can get anymore ideas, ill put them up here..

dafuckiswrongwitdissite · 11-15-2006, 10:58 AM

alot of lazy niggas on da site so writn somfin dis long is prably a waste of time. but i managed to read to the talib part which was aight just try to make it a bit deeper. but it was good still. >1<

Shogun · 11-15-2006, 02:20 PM

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Originally Posted by NovaCaine

Check this and tell me what you think..

...you're a fucking loser.

Wack, too.

-K.P- · 11-15-2006, 04:31 PM

wasnt feelin most of it sorry

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11-15-2006, 10:58 AM	#2
dafuckiswrongwitdissite souf of da brder repn e.z Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 151 Repped: 9 Repped 7 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	alot of lazy niggas on da site so writn somfin dis long is prably a waste of time. but i managed to read to the talib part which was aight just try to make it a bit deeper. but it was good still. >1<

11-15-2006, 04:31 PM	#4
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	wasnt feelin most of it sorry