jes a couple lines

2pac1971 - 1996 · 11-12-2006, 11:30 PM

wen i hear hands up frm tha god damn cops
wut i have to do is pull out the goddamn glock
click click clack clack its a gunfight
click click clack clack noe they runnin fer they life
go against me nd i'll be tha winna
leave ur brains leakin then go eat mi dinner
yep im sick in the head so u betta fallback
or ima shoot lights out like mi homie tmac-

2pac1971 - 1996 · 11-13-2006, 03:33 AM

uppin im jes gettin started first free on dis forum

NevaBpeace · 11-13-2006, 05:03 PM

I havnt dropped at all on this forum yet..so i guess u wont take offense wen i say..

Go to another forum while u practise to stop the other ppl from readin eye sores

NevaBpeace · 11-13-2006, 05:06 PM

BUT...seen as it isnt easy startin off i wont be mean..YET

So...

Work on ya vocab coz ur rhymin wiv plain words..Nd jus add bigger more effective words

Make it... a lil longer?

Nd i will give more info wen u complete the above :)

B Dope · 11-13-2006, 10:40 PM

You gotta add punches and multies your vocab is aight it will catch on.

-SS-12345 · 11-13-2006, 10:48 PM

it was aight man keep practisin an you'll get betta stay up man

2pac1971 - 1996 · 11-16-2006, 12:26 PM

thx fer fa feedback

11-12-2006, 11:30 PM	#1
2pac1971 - 1996 Banned Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,749 Repped: 128 Repped 101 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	jes a couple lines jes a couple lines wen i hear hands up frm tha god damn cops wut i have to do is pull out the goddamn glock click click clack clack its a gunfight click click clack clack noe they runnin fer they life go against me nd i'll be tha winna leave ur brains leakin then go eat mi dinner yep im sick in the head so u betta fallback or ima shoot lights out like mi homie tmac-

11-13-2006, 10:48 PM	#6
-SS-12345 ~Grimy~Lyrical~Kingz~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 858 Repped: 34 Repped 14 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	it was aight man keep practisin an you'll get betta stay up man __________________ Shud i Come Back Hmm....Ur ChoiCe

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11-13-2006, 03:33 AM	#2
2pac1971 - 1996 Banned Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,749 Repped: 128 Repped 101 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin im jes gettin started first free on dis forum

11-13-2006, 05:03 PM	#3
NevaBpeace Die For What Is Yours Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 37 Repped: 1 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I havnt dropped at all on this forum yet..so i guess u wont take offense wen i say.. Go to another forum while u practise to stop the other ppl from readin eye sores

11-13-2006, 05:06 PM	#4
NevaBpeace Die For What Is Yours Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 37 Repped: 1 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	BUT...seen as it isnt easy startin off i wont be mean..YET So... Work on ya vocab coz ur rhymin wiv plain words..Nd jus add bigger more effective words Make it... a lil longer? Nd i will give more info wen u complete the above :)

11-13-2006, 10:40 PM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	You gotta add punches and multies your vocab is aight it will catch on.

11-16-2006, 12:26 PM	#7
2pac1971 - 1996 Banned Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,749 Repped: 128 Repped 101 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx fer fa feedback