Lyrical Exercise Pt. 4 (A Nice Quick 3 Bar Read)

Antidote · 11-12-2006, 02:43 AM

The Niggas Who Love They Life Put they Cash in My Hand Today/
Or I'm Adrenilin1 Pumpin The 12 Gage I named Just Blaze Cuz It "Produce" Smoke From Ya Chest LIke Purple Haze/
I Aint Snoop But RUn If U See Me, Or Call The LAPD/
That's Why I'Ll Send Ya Shell Times THreee So Stop Pretendin To Be A G/
Niggaz Is Always pussy When I Hold A Check that's Why I cAll Them Nike When I Collect They Checks/
Bring Ya Whole Set I'll Leave The Pavement Wet, I Aint See Shit That Red Shit Is Some....Amazin....Sweat/

[Outro}

OKKKK I JUST KEEP SPITTIN SHIT DAMN OKKKKK THIS AN EXERCISE HOMIE NEW FREE IN PROGRESS TOMMAROW ANTIDOTE/FACE OF LA MAKIN MOVES IN THE FREESTYLE SECTION im out 1

MiSs CaSsiDy · 11-12-2006, 05:22 AM

Niggaz Is Always pussy When I Hold A Check that's Why I cAll Them Nike When I Collect They Checks/
Bring Ya Whole Set I'll Leave The Pavement Wet, I Aint See Shit That Red Shit Is Some....Amazin....Sweat/

this is the nicest bar out of the whole drop because ur other bars are to long u need to check up on them and think of more words that rhyme with the other words that was bit of a problem youll get there it though keep doing what u doing ill be sure to check it out holla

Lyrical Coqui · 11-12-2006, 05:54 AM

140k Tha First Week........UHHHHHHHHHHHH

Antidote · 11-12-2006, 12:25 PM

thx miss cassidy for the feed...answer my pm ooo

and kir sry about my album sales...my album leaked.....

KiLLa_CuM-FoO · 11-12-2006, 02:00 PM

how iz diz a lyricul exercise wen u onli rite 3 barz?

Antidote · 11-12-2006, 02:07 PM

im quite lazy is how it was supposed to be 10 but i was like "fuck it"

red eye · 11-12-2006, 03:26 PM

it was decent

make ya lines the same length

Antidote · 11-12-2006, 03:59 PM

Thx For Feed fam

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 11-12-2006, 04:36 PM

ur flow was fucked....but other than that it was nice...

stay up

11-12-2006, 02:43 AM	#1
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Lyrical Exercise Pt. 4 (A Nice Quick 3 Bar Read) Lyrical Exercise Pt. 4 (A Nice Quick 3 Bar Read) The Niggas Who Love They Life Put they Cash in My Hand Today/ Or I'm Adrenilin1 Pumpin The 12 Gage I named Just Blaze Cuz It "Produce" Smoke From Ya Chest LIke Purple Haze/ I Aint Snoop But RUn If U See Me, Or Call The LAPD/ That's Why I'Ll Send Ya Shell Times THreee So Stop Pretendin To Be A G/ Niggaz Is Always pussy When I Hold A Check that's Why I cAll Them Nike When I Collect They Checks/ Bring Ya Whole Set I'll Leave The Pavement Wet, I Aint See Shit That Red Shit Is Some....Amazin....Sweat/ [Outro} OKKKK I JUST KEEP SPITTIN SHIT DAMN OKKKKK THIS AN EXERCISE HOMIE NEW FREE IN PROGRESS TOMMAROW ANTIDOTE/FACE OF LA MAKIN MOVES IN THE FREESTYLE SECTION im out 1

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11-12-2006, 05:22 AM	#2
MiSs CaSsiDy QUEEN OF HORRORCORE RAP Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: HELL Posts: 1,263 Repped: 9 Repped 31 Times in 13 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Niggaz Is Always pussy When I Hold A Check that's Why I cAll Them Nike When I Collect They Checks/ Bring Ya Whole Set I'll Leave The Pavement Wet, I Aint See Shit That Red Shit Is Some....Amazin....Sweat/ this is the nicest bar out of the whole drop because ur other bars are to long u need to check up on them and think of more words that rhyme with the other words that was bit of a problem youll get there it though keep doing what u doing ill be sure to check it out holla

11-12-2006, 05:54 AM	#3
Lyrical Coqui Lyrically Sick Rican Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: 254 Texas Posts: 514 Repped: 16 Repped 48 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	140k Tha First Week........UHHHHHHHHHHHH

11-12-2006, 12:25 PM	#4
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	thx miss cassidy for the feed...answer my pm ooo and kir sry about my album sales...my album leaked.....

11-12-2006, 02:00 PM	#5
KiLLa_CuM-FoO it's me snitchessssss Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Poco Loco Street Posts: 787 Repped: 123 Repped 773 Times in 204 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	how iz diz a lyricul exercise wen u onli rite 3 barz?

11-12-2006, 02:07 PM	#6
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	im quite lazy is how it was supposed to be 10 but i was like "fuck it"

11-12-2006, 03:26 PM	#7
red eye Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIA Posts: 1,070 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	it was decent make ya lines the same length

11-12-2006, 03:59 PM	#8
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Thx For Feed fam

11-12-2006, 04:36 PM	#9
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	ur flow was fucked....but other than that it was nice... stay up