Hello New World

Sniper Locs · 11-11-2006, 07:30 PM

Hello new world im comin for the title
black suit n black guns yeah im suicidal
still the king with the crown,u get killed over brown
in the lost and found.or dumped in a ghost town
killin these dudes makin them and bitches frown
white tee with some house shoes shooting on the porch
money money money buidlin bricks witha fort
i got a spoon while u eatin soup with a fork
and the only city u know from hip hop is new york
cuz thats where it started?.yeah right doc dre had these emcees departed(to LA)
got guns out in the black market,moving white cuz the storm make my rhymes retarded
look out world im on my way,str8 up out the hood night n day
bape rappers get clapped when they step to this
if they make a move,they be like N.O wet like this
i rip the scene,makin cameos on everysong bitches throwin all they thongs
bitches insert my dick into spoken words mom,and drop bombs when i hit da bong

Sniper Locs · 11-11-2006, 09:54 PM

feed please constructive

M. Daddy Dollars · 11-11-2006, 10:19 PM

its okay....but alot of your rhymes don't make any sense......

Sniper Locs · 11-11-2006, 10:21 PM

aight thanks homie bump

Early · 11-11-2006, 11:02 PM

that shit iz some ass i can rap better than that in my sleep

Sniper Locs · 11-11-2006, 11:03 PM

who r u to talk? your mom is ass and she ain't even some!

Early · 11-11-2006, 11:45 PM

im talkin 2 u bitch

Sniper Locs · 11-11-2006, 11:52 PM

you been online for two hours loser

ThaMenace · 11-12-2006, 12:47 AM

i got a spoon while u eatin soup with a fork.

dont spit anything like that ever again. thats just.....way to corny

Sniper Locs · 11-12-2006, 12:57 AM

That Was Classic Menace =(

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 11-12-2006, 01:11 AM

was the title of this referring to u hopping the border?

or did u jack it from little mermaid?

Sniper Locs · 11-12-2006, 02:17 AM

the clipse and pharrel lol

MiSs CaSsiDy · 11-12-2006, 05:26 AM

Hello new world im comin for the title
black suit n black guns yeah im suicidal

thats scary to be suicidal lol

this was real basic need alot of work u need to work on ya punches and flow and creativity theyll def get u where u need to be trust me but keep doing what u do ill be sure to check out ur next drop holla keep rapping im Meeka

Sniper Locs · 11-14-2006, 12:19 PM

k meeka thanks for the advice

11-11-2006, 07:30 PM	#1
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hello New World Hello New World Hello new world im comin for the title black suit n black guns yeah im suicidal still the king with the crown,u get killed over brown in the lost and found.or dumped in a ghost town killin these dudes makin them and bitches frown white tee with some house shoes shooting on the porch money money money buidlin bricks witha fort i got a spoon while u eatin soup with a fork and the only city u know from hip hop is new york cuz thats where it started?.yeah right doc dre had these emcees departed(to LA) got guns out in the black market,moving white cuz the storm make my rhymes retarded look out world im on my way,str8 up out the hood night n day bape rappers get clapped when they step to this if they make a move,they be like N.O wet like this i rip the scene,makin cameos on everysong bitches throwin all they thongs bitches insert my dick into spoken words mom,and drop bombs when i hit da bong

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11-11-2006, 09:54 PM	#2
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	feed please constructive

11-11-2006, 10:19 PM	#3
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 1,920 Repped: 332 Repped 213 Times in 103 Posts Neg Reps: 273 Neg Repped at 131 Times in 75 Posts	its okay....but alot of your rhymes don't make any sense......

11-11-2006, 10:21 PM	#4
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight thanks homie bump

11-11-2006, 11:02 PM	#5
Early Jon Bruh Lee Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 575 Repped: 8 Repped 337 Times in 48 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	that shit iz some ass i can rap better than that in my sleep

11-11-2006, 11:03 PM	#6
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	who r u to talk? your mom is ass and she ain't even some!

11-11-2006, 11:45 PM	#7
Early Jon Bruh Lee Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 575 Repped: 8 Repped 337 Times in 48 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	im talkin 2 u bitch

11-11-2006, 11:52 PM	#8
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	you been online for two hours loser

11-12-2006, 12:47 AM	#9
ThaMenace The KingPriest Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Jersey Posts: 466 Repped: 9 Repped 13 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	i got a spoon while u eatin soup with a fork. dont spit anything like that ever again. thats just.....way to corny

11-12-2006, 12:57 AM	#10
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	That Was Classic Menace =(

11-12-2006, 01:11 AM	#11
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	was the title of this referring to u hopping the border? or did u jack it from little mermaid?

11-12-2006, 02:17 AM	#12
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	the clipse and pharrel lol

11-12-2006, 05:26 AM	#13
MiSs CaSsiDy QUEEN OF HORRORCORE RAP Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: HELL Posts: 1,263 Repped: 9 Repped 31 Times in 13 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hello new world im comin for the title black suit n black guns yeah im suicidal thats scary to be suicidal lol this was real basic need alot of work u need to work on ya punches and flow and creativity theyll def get u where u need to be trust me but keep doing what u do ill be sure to check out ur next drop holla keep rapping im Meeka

11-14-2006, 12:19 PM	#14
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	k meeka thanks for the advice