KP - New Freestyle - 7 Bars

-K.P- · 10-23-2006, 07:51 AM

i get fed up with these faggots tryna start shit i call it "e-beef"
come to my block and thats where you' gonna see-beef
im writin this free-style, whilst in the mean-while........
to get money im slangin drugs and making fiends smile, crack viles
the crib's so run down - tore up carpets and cracked tiles
but you gotta walk miles...to get some-one with rhymes so versatile
im only fifteen, but i run a rap crew and i make bitches scream
my city sees more guns and casualties than the army marines
i spit fire like it was in my genes, fame still far away like in my dreams
i see through fakes like an x-ray machine..."get jumped" like a trampoiline
and fuck the haters, my rhymes rip them apart like the jaws of aligators
im loyal, i don't like the traitors, to me you the cheese and i am the grator
fuck with me ima lyrically leave you on the other side of the equator
im a metaphor creator, arguer or debator, hood dictator, slayer of hater

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 10-23-2006, 08:18 AM

Decent stuff, use harder punches next time tho it will make shit more entertaining.

-Rep Me-

Props

-K.P- · 10-23-2006, 11:35 AM

aight thanks uppin

єяіс є · 10-23-2006, 12:01 PM

this was tight kp

-K.P- · 10-23-2006, 12:02 PM

thanks man keep it comin

-K.P- · 10-23-2006, 12:13 PM

uppin for feed

Nature's Prophecy · 10-23-2006, 12:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by OhboyJ

Decent stuff, use harder punches next time tho it will make shit more entertaining.

-Rep Me-

Props

Lol at askin to be repped fo tht 'feed'..

Anyway.. I thought it was.. i dno.. It would suite more of an audio type, coz text needs.. to be more complex.. if ya know..
Nd alot of ppl read texts like they are audio (OhBoy) wen they r totally diff things.. so they end up gettin rated.. wot they shouldnt be

Ya had sum nice lines in ther tho nd i guess ya flow was pretty nice.. StAy Up

-K.P- · 10-23-2006, 12:30 PM

aight thanks for feed, yeh im kinda used to audio now^props

-K.P- · 10-23-2006, 12:53 PM

uppin..............

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 10-23-2006, 03:47 PM

definetly more audio oriented....but still it was nice

-K.P- · 10-24-2006, 07:24 AM

thanks uppin

ReFleXiOn · 10-24-2006, 11:53 AM

"my city sees more guns and casualties than the army marines"

"i see through fakes like an x-ray machine..."get jumped" like a trampoiline"

favorite 2 lines...last line killed the flow though, other than that shiz seemed pretty good and on point. 1

10-23-2006, 07:51 AM	#1
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	KP - New Freestyle - 7 Bars KP - New Freestyle - 7 Bars i get fed up with these faggots tryna start shit i call it "e-beef" come to my block and thats where you' gonna see-beef im writin this free-style, whilst in the mean-while........ to get money im slangin drugs and making fiends smile, crack viles the crib's so run down - tore up carpets and cracked tiles but you gotta walk miles...to get some-one with rhymes so versatile im only fifteen, but i run a rap crew and i make bitches scream my city sees more guns and casualties than the army marines i spit fire like it was in my genes, fame still far away like in my dreams i see through fakes like an x-ray machine..."get jumped" like a trampoiline and fuck the haters, my rhymes rip them apart like the jaws of aligators im loyal, i don't like the traitors, to me you the cheese and i am the grator fuck with me ima lyrically leave you on the other side of the equator im a metaphor creator, arguer or debator, hood dictator, slayer of hater

10-24-2006, 11:53 AM	#12
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	"my city sees more guns and casualties than the army marines" "i see through fakes like an x-ray machine..."get jumped" like a trampoiline" favorite 2 lines...last line killed the flow though, other than that shiz seemed pretty good and on point. 1 __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

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10-23-2006, 08:18 AM	#2
<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' The Element Of Surprise Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Trinidad Posts: 9,312 Repped: 131 Repped 157 Times in 45 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Decent stuff, use harder punches next time tho it will make shit more entertaining. -Rep Me- Props

10-23-2006, 11:35 AM	#3
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight thanks uppin

10-23-2006, 12:01 PM	#4
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was tight kp

10-23-2006, 12:02 PM	#5
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks man keep it comin

10-23-2006, 12:13 PM	#6
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin for feed

10-23-2006, 12:30 PM	#8
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight thanks for feed, yeh im kinda used to audio now^props

10-23-2006, 12:53 PM	#9
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin..............

10-23-2006, 03:47 PM	#10
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	definetly more audio oriented....but still it was nice

10-24-2006, 07:24 AM	#11
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks uppin