Must see!!!

B Dope · 10-21-2006, 11:57 PM

This is my battle verse against c money just want to know what you think. I got no hate for him though. Like to know which lines are good and bad so I can imporve thanks.

This boys hero is anyone who hustles n respects-the-hood//
I think he's misunderstood cause thats me, I reject-the-good//

If I could I would run up on this fool livin-in-Bean-Town//
But where does he rome he has 2 homes givin-mean-frowns//

What fo though he's got more dough than a hood-rat-hoe//
He's just so so, I'm fo sho on the go when high of the endo, but he should-rap-though?//
The flow is more played out than regular nintendo, he an upstood-crack-sicko//
Just a warning bro cause I'm starving more than a hungry hippo//

He's more bitch than Sherill Swoops when playing hoops, get no collabs-duke//
How can he shoot he's a fluke, needs to eat cambell soup to get McNabb-Jukes//
Probably wishing for coupes while sittin on his stoop, more fruity than Loops//

So pick up a clip, find a prick, then make em strip, that's cash-quick//
When Jakes come don't trip by opening your lip, cats-stash-brick//

Fucking with me is an ooz that leaves bullet wounds, tombs, and nicely decorated-rooms//
Family feels depressed n doomed in cancun eating shrooms thinking of being ecarcerated-soon//***

Don't fuck with me dunn just ask someone, have ya runnin faster than Ben-John-son//****
I clap Mc's for fun but I won't make ya run cause you been-forgot-on//

Killing-this-clown while chilling-this-sound is like crushing tin, that-weak-n-thin//
Ready to put down a W for murking you, right now changing it into my stat-cheat-wins//

*His profile says he lives in florida and boston
**The swoops line is because he says he plays varsity ball
*** Shrooms and weed are a big thing in cancun. Also many murders.
****Ben johnson was a olympic runner that won gold medals but got caught using roids.

єяіс є · 10-21-2006, 11:59 PM

this was all heat yo...ALL HEAT!

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 12:11 AM

thanks left ya rep.

Tom Chambers · 10-22-2006, 12:11 AM

hey kid......you got aim or msn???

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 12:19 AM

nah^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Tom Chambers · 10-22-2006, 12:25 AM

^you should d/l one :-)...cuz lotus wants to holla @ you bout something.....(no homo)

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 12:32 AM

aight then give me a few.

Tom Chambers · 10-22-2006, 12:34 AM

well when you do...
lotus5388-AIM
lotus5388@hotmail.com-MSN

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 01:24 AM

I will be on msn in 15 minutes. cool.

Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga · 10-22-2006, 01:42 AM

damn balla u improved ya shit

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 01:50 AM

thanks man. Thats what I can do when i take a little time I guess.

DJ 57 · 10-22-2006, 02:30 AM

That was some good rhymes but you should try to make your lines the same lenght

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 02:32 AM

If ya make your lines the same length it sounds the same doesnt switch up the flow. thanks though.

DJ 57 · 10-22-2006, 02:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by #1 baller

If ya make your lines the same length it sounds the same doesnt switch up the flow. thanks though.

True but some of your rhymes were to long

2 For Da Money · 10-22-2006, 02:44 AM

alright nice lines man and thanks for the feed on mine
favorite line
Probably wishing for coupes while sittin on his stoop, more fruity than Loops//<---funny

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 02:57 AM

thanks.........

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 02:58 AM

Check out the battle now.

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 10-22-2006, 10:06 AM

this wouldve been so much better if u have gotten c-moneys myspace from me....personal city right there

but otherwise....it was much better multies sounded less forced......but regarding your flow....make your lines the same amount of SYLLABLES.....NOT length.....itll help a lot

B Dope · 10-22-2006, 11:28 AM

thanks cc.

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 10-22-2006, 11:30 AM

it helps....trust me on that

B Dope · 10-23-2006, 03:01 PM

bump.......

B Dope · 10-23-2006, 08:38 PM

bump...........

B Dope · 10-24-2006, 10:01 AM

bump...........

-K.P- · 10-24-2006, 10:02 AM

yeh shit was pretty tight baller, u free agent? and leve some feed on my latest free "some new heat"

ReFleXiOn · 10-24-2006, 12:05 PM

pretty good...1

10-22-2006, 02:30 AM	#12
DJ 57 G-Unit!!!!!!!! Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: San Diego Posts: 19 Repped: 5 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: That was some good rhymes but you should try to make your lines the same lenght

10-24-2006, 12:05 PM	#25
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	pretty good...1 __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

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10-21-2006, 11:57 PM	#1
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Must see!!! Must see!!! This is my battle verse against c money just want to know what you think. I got no hate for him though. Like to know which lines are good and bad so I can imporve thanks. This boys hero is anyone who hustles n respects-the-hood// I think he's misunderstood cause thats me, I reject-the-good// If I could I would run up on this fool livin-in-Bean-Town// But where does he rome he has 2 homes givin-mean-frowns// What fo though he's got more dough than a hood-rat-hoe// He's just so so, I'm fo sho on the go when high of the endo, but he should-rap-though?// The flow is more played out than regular nintendo, he an upstood-crack-sicko// Just a warning bro cause I'm starving more than a hungry hippo// He's more bitch than Sherill Swoops when playing hoops, get no collabs-duke// How can he shoot he's a fluke, needs to eat cambell soup to get McNabb-Jukes// Probably wishing for coupes while sittin on his stoop, more fruity than Loops// So pick up a clip, find a prick, then make em strip, that's cash-quick// When Jakes come don't trip by opening your lip, cats-stash-brick// Fucking with me is an ooz that leaves bullet wounds, tombs, and nicely decorated-rooms// Family feels depressed n doomed in cancun eating shrooms thinking of being ecarcerated-soon//* Don't fuck with me dunn just ask someone, have ya runnin faster than Ben-John-son//** I clap Mc's for fun but I won't make ya run cause you been-forgot-on// Killing-this-clown while chilling-this-sound is like crushing tin, that-weak-n-thin// Ready to put down a W for murking you, right now changing it into my stat-cheat-wins// His profile says he lives in florida and boston The swoops line is because he says he plays varsity ball Shrooms and weed are a big thing in cancun. Also many murders. **Ben johnson was a olympic runner that won gold medals but got caught using roids.

10-21-2006, 11:59 PM	#2
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was all heat yo...ALL HEAT!

10-22-2006, 12:11 AM	#3
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks left ya rep.

10-22-2006, 12:11 AM	#4
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	hey kid......you got aim or msn???

10-22-2006, 12:19 AM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nah^^^^^^^^^^^^^

10-22-2006, 12:25 AM	#6
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^you should d/l one :-)...cuz lotus wants to holla @ you bout something.....(no homo)

10-22-2006, 12:32 AM	#7
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight then give me a few.

10-22-2006, 12:34 AM	#8
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	well when you do... lotus5388-AIM lotus5388@hotmail.com-MSN

10-22-2006, 01:24 AM	#9
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I will be on msn in 15 minutes. cool.

10-22-2006, 01:42 AM	#10
Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga INT.~Rhymers~Council Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Council Board Room Posts: 2,678 Repped: 0 Repped 36 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	damn balla u improved ya shit

10-22-2006, 01:50 AM	#11
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks man. Thats what I can do when i take a little time I guess.

10-22-2006, 02:32 AM	#13
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	If ya make your lines the same length it sounds the same doesnt switch up the flow. thanks though.

10-22-2006, 02:44 AM	#15
2 For Da Money Miracle Child Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: GreenWood B.C Posts: 4,426 Repped: 2,307 Repped 564 Times in 135 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	alright nice lines man and thanks for the feed on mine favorite line Probably wishing for coupes while sittin on his stoop, more fruity than Loops//<---funny

10-22-2006, 02:57 AM	#16
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks.........

10-22-2006, 02:58 AM	#17
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Check out the battle now.

10-22-2006, 10:06 AM	#18
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	this wouldve been so much better if u have gotten c-moneys myspace from me....personal city right there but otherwise....it was much better multies sounded less forced......but regarding your flow....make your lines the same amount of SYLLABLES.....NOT length.....itll help a lot

10-22-2006, 11:28 AM	#19
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks cc.

10-22-2006, 11:30 AM	#20
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	it helps....trust me on that

10-23-2006, 03:01 PM	#21
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bump.......

10-23-2006, 08:38 PM	#22
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bump...........

10-24-2006, 10:01 AM	#23
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bump...........

10-24-2006, 10:02 AM	#24
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeh shit was pretty tight baller, u free agent? and leve some feed on my latest free "some new heat"