Sumthin quick

Youngcity415 · 10-20-2006, 11:05 PM

Who Shot Ya im sending niggas straight to the doctors//

cut em with a blade thicker then the on on a chopper//

niggas don't stand a chance if I red dot cha//

twin glocks in my had double trouble when i pop ya//

Who gon stop us niggas love the style so they try and jock us//

All that stops when I let the glock bust in a gun niggas fear but in the bullets I trust//

Niggas talk tough till I pull out the 9 double M//

eat rappers up and spit em out like flem//

Clap gats at niggas the barrel sounds like thunder//

Cut ya life short and put u in eternal slumber//

Niggas no when it comes to these lyrics they ain't fuckin with me//

Try as hard as you want nut you ain't fuckin with dis city//

Niggas become short breathed as if i hit em up in the chest//

my rhymes will tear up ya flesh and leave u in a state of death//

Niggas already know the crew dat i rep we go by Infamous//

and we leave niggas wet like a baby at its Christening//

Youngcity415 · 10-20-2006, 11:05 PM

only a few bars drop sum feed

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 10-20-2006, 11:20 PM

it's tight man

i liked it

kinda raw thought

coulda put a lil' more effort into it but it's good if ya just freed as ya typed

Youngcity415 · 10-20-2006, 11:21 PM

thanx uppin 4 more feed

B Dope · 10-21-2006, 12:04 AM

Wasnt bad. Check your pm's

Tom Chambers · 10-21-2006, 12:24 AM

..............ok.....

1) your vocab is decent....which kinda saves the fact that you don't use multi's........
2).....take more time to think out your punchlines and wordplay......don't just throw in anything..........think about how complex a punch is from an outside POV.......and whether its played..
3)........keep dropping kid...........i was once 10 times worse.....and i think i'm pretty decent now...(not trying to brag or nada)

stay up kid

Youngcity415 · 10-21-2006, 12:27 AM

^ wow dats a hell of alot betta den hey that wus tight man good feed lotus^^

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-21-2006, 11:04 AM

It Was Aight..Uppin This FOr City..Stay Up Nigga

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 10-21-2006, 02:08 PM

Nice Stuff Fam Props Stay Up

Keep Dropping This kinda Stuff

Youngcity415 · 10-21-2006, 04:23 PM

good looks yall uppin

Antidote · 10-21-2006, 04:27 PM

its was aiight man...i could tell if you took mo time it would get better

Youngcity415 · 10-21-2006, 05:18 PM

werd ^^thanx uppin fo more

10-20-2006, 11:05 PM	#1
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Sumthin quick Sumthin quick Who Shot Ya im sending niggas straight to the doctors// cut em with a blade thicker then the on on a chopper// niggas don't stand a chance if I red dot cha// twin glocks in my had double trouble when i pop ya// Who gon stop us niggas love the style so they try and jock us// All that stops when I let the glock bust in a gun niggas fear but in the bullets I trust// Niggas talk tough till I pull out the 9 double M// eat rappers up and spit em out like flem// Clap gats at niggas the barrel sounds like thunder// Cut ya life short and put u in eternal slumber// Niggas no when it comes to these lyrics they ain't fuckin with me// Try as hard as you want nut you ain't fuckin with dis city// Niggas become short breathed as if i hit em up in the chest// my rhymes will tear up ya flesh and leave u in a state of death// Niggas already know the crew dat i rep we go by Infamous// and we leave niggas wet like a baby at its Christening//

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10-20-2006, 11:20 PM	#3
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	it's tight man i liked it kinda raw thought coulda put a lil' more effort into it but it's good if ya just freed as ya typed

10-20-2006, 11:21 PM	#4
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx uppin 4 more feed

10-21-2006, 12:04 AM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wasnt bad. Check your pm's

10-21-2006, 12:24 AM	#6
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	..............ok..... 1) your vocab is decent....which kinda saves the fact that you don't use multi's........ 2).....take more time to think out your punchlines and wordplay......don't just throw in anything..........think about how complex a punch is from an outside POV.......and whether its played.. 3)........keep dropping kid...........i was once 10 times worse.....and i think i'm pretty decent now...(not trying to brag or nada) stay up kid

10-21-2006, 12:27 AM	#7
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ wow dats a hell of alot betta den hey that wus tight man good feed lotus^^

10-21-2006, 11:04 AM	#8
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	It Was Aight..Uppin This FOr City..Stay Up Nigga

10-21-2006, 02:08 PM	#9
<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' The Element Of Surprise Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Trinidad Posts: 9,312 Repped: 131 Repped 157 Times in 45 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Nice Stuff Fam Props Stay Up Keep Dropping This kinda Stuff

10-21-2006, 04:23 PM	#10
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good looks yall uppin

10-21-2006, 04:27 PM	#11
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	its was aiight man...i could tell if you took mo time it would get better

10-21-2006, 05:18 PM	#12
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	werd ^^thanx uppin fo more