So Be It!!! (short and sweet...poetry)

ReFleXiOn · 10-20-2006, 07:30 PM

Spontaneous expression is the result of an unpredicted future,
I wish I knew, I wish I could say, but the fortune is rather impervious.
Regardless to an unseeming insult I would rather for see my foreshadow.
Prior to an existance that never was and will never be...I'm still hiding.
Justify my nerves, explain intuition...isn't that a rather bland concept.
Exposure redundant...maybe if the appearance displayed concluded promise.
Picture the poster as you observe it and acknowledge the poster as pictures.
Pry this image from the surface of unconscience subservance it's glued to.
What remains is that of a disgusting and rather disturbing entity...
I call it reality...and I enclose my final statement with it...
SO BE IT!!!

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ReFleXiOn · 10-21-2006, 06:51 PM

feedback? 1

Komplex · 10-21-2006, 10:24 PM

u suck. no one cares.

is that good enough feedback?

ReFleXiOn · 10-22-2006, 04:26 AM

lmao, u must be one of those kids that doesn't have a clue... I'm certain I've merked ur kind in the past...so whats it like sucking cock ne way? 1

Penny Wi$e · 10-23-2006, 02:36 AM

lmao ^ buh ya written It was some real nice poetic shit

10-20-2006, 07:30 PM	#1
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	So Be It!!! (short and sweet...poetry) So Be It!!! (short and sweet...poetry) Spontaneous expression is the result of an unpredicted future, I wish I knew, I wish I could say, but the fortune is rather impervious. Regardless to an unseeming insult I would rather for see my foreshadow. Prior to an existance that never was and will never be...I'm still hiding. Justify my nerves, explain intuition...isn't that a rather bland concept. Exposure redundant...maybe if the appearance displayed concluded promise. Picture the poster as you observe it and acknowledge the poster as pictures. Pry this image from the surface of unconscience subservance it's glued to. What remains is that of a disgusting and rather disturbing entity... I call it reality...and I enclose my final statement with it... SO BE IT!!! 1

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10-21-2006, 06:51 PM	#2
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	feedback? 1

10-21-2006, 10:24 PM	#3
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	u suck. no one cares. is that good enough feedback?

10-22-2006, 04:26 AM	#4
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	lmao, u must be one of those kids that doesn't have a clue... I'm certain I've merked ur kind in the past...so whats it like sucking cock ne way? 1

10-23-2006, 02:36 AM	#5
Penny Wi$e Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bronxe,New York Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lmao ^ buh ya written It was some real nice poetic shit