My Love For Her's Forever (Honest Words)

ReFleXiOn · 10-16-2006, 12:52 AM

Lets see how y'all enjoy a piece with a lil' more indepthness and relative concept. Hope y'all feel this one right here, some more poetry from the story telling legend, lmao......

Be it the empty bed at night or the mournings suttle breeze, I felt her presence.
I'd walk in the park to remember her face as it glowed in the afternoon sun.
Sometimes I still call her at work even though she's never there.
This disillusioned promise of hope is shaded with sudden facts of reality.
I shed a tear, hold my pillow close eating a scoop of ice cream.
Inflicted with beautiful memories I dwell on the fact that she's never coming home.
I put on a film and critigue it like we used to do, alas, no more...
I dread these feelings of my empty and seemingly pointless life.
I go for a walk, past the park, past the memories, straight to the ledge of insanity.
Screaming for God to spare me some sign of surrenity, my heart shatters with careless intent.
The ledge has become slanted, my sneakers lose grip, feet slip but I don't move.
Falling forward into nothingness as I hold her picture within it's golden frame.
I cut out my piece of the picture, she's the only image that's left in my head,
That and the note left to chissel in my tombstone...
"The words I verbally bared to you were honest...I'd die for your love"
The impact on the ground some would refer to as our final kiss.

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ReFleXiOn · 10-16-2006, 04:04 AM

no replies on this??? 1

Nature's Prophecy · 10-16-2006, 02:20 PM

Is this mo of a poem type? coz i didnt see it rhyme..

Anywayz.. was pretty touchin

Stay up..

JBuD ThA GreAT · 10-16-2006, 02:36 PM

i aint mad......seems like sum Mosdef Def Poetry type shit.....

ReFleXiOn · 10-16-2006, 06:04 PM

indeed, 'tis poetry, every now and then I drop a lil' bit of ish like this, some peeps feel it, some peeps don't. 1

Nature's Prophecy · 10-16-2006, 06:07 PM

Well it was iight... sumfin a bit different...

Stay up duke

GUNIT IS DEAD · 10-16-2006, 07:10 PM

still hellraizin ridin solo
i need bulletz, gimme mo yo//

bitchez come dime a dozen and u sound pussy whipped
i got too many bitchez i think i got lumpz on ma dick//

i aint talkin non sense like 50 cents
but around here we make bitches pay the rent//

just a quik little 4 barz fo ya soft azz to try n get witt
since u pussy whipped and cryin over bullshit//

ReFleXiOn · 10-16-2006, 07:14 PM

^lmao, riiiiiiiite, u do realize hiphop derives from poetry u flamer. ne one who knows ne thing about ne type of writing would see this piece for wat it truly is, a metaphorical masterpiece. 1

GUNIT IS DEAD · 10-16-2006, 07:33 PM

lmao im sorry nigga i hadda do it i just hadda do it lol

ReFleXiOn · 10-16-2006, 07:42 PM

lol, it's w/e, no worries. 1

~KILLA~ · 10-16-2006, 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JBuD ThA GreAT

i aint mad......seems like sum Mosdef Def Poetry type shit.....

ye dats wat it reminded me of

stay up though nice rhymez

10-16-2006, 12:52 AM	#1
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	My Love For Her's Forever (Honest Words) My Love For Her's Forever (Honest Words) Lets see how y'all enjoy a piece with a lil' more indepthness and relative concept. Hope y'all feel this one right here, some more poetry from the story telling legend, lmao...... Be it the empty bed at night or the mournings suttle breeze, I felt her presence. I'd walk in the park to remember her face as it glowed in the afternoon sun. Sometimes I still call her at work even though she's never there. This disillusioned promise of hope is shaded with sudden facts of reality. I shed a tear, hold my pillow close eating a scoop of ice cream. Inflicted with beautiful memories I dwell on the fact that she's never coming home. I put on a film and critigue it like we used to do, alas, no more... I dread these feelings of my empty and seemingly pointless life. I go for a walk, past the park, past the memories, straight to the ledge of insanity. Screaming for God to spare me some sign of surrenity, my heart shatters with careless intent. The ledge has become slanted, my sneakers lose grip, feet slip but I don't move. Falling forward into nothingness as I hold her picture within it's golden frame. I cut out my piece of the picture, she's the only image that's left in my head, That and the note left to chissel in my tombstone... "The words I verbally bared to you were honest...I'd die for your love" The impact on the ground some would refer to as our final kiss. 1

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10-16-2006, 04:04 AM	#2
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	no replies on this??? 1

10-16-2006, 02:20 PM	#3
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Is this mo of a poem type? coz i didnt see it rhyme.. Anywayz.. was pretty touchin Stay up..

10-16-2006, 02:36 PM	#4
JBuD ThA GreAT SmiTHfiELD HustLIN Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 27 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i aint mad......seems like sum Mosdef Def Poetry type shit.....

10-16-2006, 06:04 PM	#5
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	indeed, 'tis poetry, every now and then I drop a lil' bit of ish like this, some peeps feel it, some peeps don't. 1

10-16-2006, 06:07 PM	#6
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Well it was iight... sumfin a bit different... Stay up duke

10-16-2006, 07:10 PM	#7
GUNIT IS DEAD Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: MidWEST muthafucka Posts: 238 Repped: 81 Repped 63 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	still hellraizin ridin solo i need bulletz, gimme mo yo// bitchez come dime a dozen and u sound pussy whipped i got too many bitchez i think i got lumpz on ma dick// i aint talkin non sense like 50 cents but around here we make bitches pay the rent// just a quik little 4 barz fo ya soft azz to try n get witt since u pussy whipped and cryin over bullshit//

10-16-2006, 07:14 PM	#8
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	^lmao, riiiiiiiite, u do realize hiphop derives from poetry u flamer. ne one who knows ne thing about ne type of writing would see this piece for wat it truly is, a metaphorical masterpiece. 1

10-16-2006, 07:33 PM	#9
GUNIT IS DEAD Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: MidWEST muthafucka Posts: 238 Repped: 81 Repped 63 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	*lmao im sorry nigga i hadda do it i just hadda do it lol*

10-16-2006, 07:42 PM	#10
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	lol, it's w/e, no worries. 1