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Oxxticy · 10-15-2006, 06:19 PM

Step out my door Uptowns on my feet somethins goin on deres chaos in da streets//
Mamas cryin while sons is dyin N gangstas wavin Heat//
Freestyles on the corner while Sirens Provide Da beat//
One lil slip up N' U fuck wit da wrong peeps bfore u kno it u be on ur back Bleedin Thru a Sheet//
Fuckin wit me's da worst mistake u culd make Im untouchable so u bettta enjoy that last breath u take//
Whip u wit my Pistol n watch ur Eye socket Break//
dats wats gon happen when u act hard N we Know U fake//
Im the best around im da king of town Step to me N ill Spin ur mutha fuckin Head around//
Put u where u belong where deres nuttin but silence an absence of sound Everythings over when u 6 feet UNder Ground//
So keep ur comments and bitch ass stares to ur self//
Or ull have cinder blocks for socks N u can go tell all ur boyz waitin in hell//
Exactly what u thought n how it felt swimmin fer u life like michael Phelps//

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Mez Siah · 10-15-2006, 06:31 PM

pretty good...but it seemed a bit like ur frontin talkin bout leaving niggas bleedin and shit but if u really do that shit it was pretty good use more punchlines though

Sniper Locs · 10-15-2006, 06:39 PM

W-a-c-k!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111

10-15-2006, 06:19 PM	#1
Oxxticy The Worlds Greatest Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Tampa FL Posts: 40 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	UnToUcHaBle UnToUcHaBle Step out my door Uptowns on my feet somethins goin on deres chaos in da streets// Mamas cryin while sons is dyin N gangstas wavin Heat// Freestyles on the corner while Sirens Provide Da beat// One lil slip up N' U fuck wit da wrong peeps bfore u kno it u be on ur back Bleedin Thru a Sheet// Fuckin wit me's da worst mistake u culd make Im untouchable so u bettta enjoy that last breath u take// Whip u wit my Pistol n watch ur Eye socket Break// dats wats gon happen when u act hard N we Know U fake// Im the best around im da king of town Step to me N ill Spin ur mutha fuckin Head around// Put u where u belong where deres nuttin but silence an absence of sound Everythings over when u 6 feet UNder Ground// So keep ur comments and bitch ass stares to ur self// Or ull have cinder blocks for socks N u can go tell all ur boyz waitin in hell// Exactly what u thought n how it felt swimmin fer u life like michael Phelps// Feed Up

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10-15-2006, 06:31 PM	#2
Mez Siah Batman/EvaMendes Advocate Join Date: May 2006 Location: Baltimore Posts: 2,367 Repped: 216 Repped 541 Times in 262 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	pretty good...but it seemed a bit like ur frontin talkin bout leaving niggas bleedin and shit but if u really do that shit it was pretty good use more punchlines though

10-15-2006, 06:39 PM	#3
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	W-a-c-k!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111