Raichu

(chorus)Please listen 2 my demo
Please listen 2 my demo
Please listen 2 my demo

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A'yo my man , listen right real quick, thers a kid named Big AJP and his rhymes is sick/
Now I'm not gonna say hes the best, but his flow U cannot test/
Everybody know he ill, not that chicken noodle soup I mean the real deal/
Yes dude loses battle, but sons more then gets sonned, U feel me don/
He really don't do this 4 fun, and unlike most rappers to get sells I don't need a gun/
Just a puchline and shit, a'yo, please listen 2 his spit/

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(verse2)
A'yo girl U lookin' kinda nice, but I ain't here 2 fuk U alright/
I wanna tell U about a boy whose flow is tight/
Only 14 but his mind is older, man already I though I told ya/
People in his life never no slack, but when he rich everybody gonna be on his back/
So let him show U his New York shit, and later You'll let him hit

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(verse3)
A'yo 2 all the Mr. Iovines, may I say U look fresh & clean/
I wanna show a dude who by 2010 will takeover the game, and unlike most of Ur artists he ain't lame/
So fuk all y'all DFB, Joc, Young Bs, always talk'n about snapping their fingers, never real shit just club bangers/
Now he might be looking 4 what the others is looking 4, money, cars and cloths, and maybe some hoes/
But he'll never forget where came from, because that of him is just dumb./
Please listen 2 my demo

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Nature's Prophecy

Ya improvin every spit.. ya flow is nicer than last time, just try to add complexity nd higher vocab..

Stay up

Raichu

Thanks man