The robbery Part I

Youngcity415 · 10-15-2006, 04:22 AM

This is how the story starts off//

a nigga thinking that he is a straight up boss//

i make niggas pay the price and there life is the cost//

niggas think dey hot shit till dey bodies is stiff and soft//

but lets get back to the main story//

a high roller nigga that goes by the name of cory//

a slick nigga loved to pop alot of bullshit//

neva eva though any situation would get real thick//

now times was hard and we knew this nigga was ballin//

so I decided to catch him slipping and hame him on the floor crawlin//

I called KP to let him no whats up//

and that niggas is in a hotel floatin like a rubber duck//

i told him that we will need heavy protection//

so don't forget a sinle vest or weapon//

we found out the hotel where the nigga let his head rest//

hopefully the mans prepared fo war and has teflon on his chest//

Before we made the attemp of a robbery//

I made sure all my clips were cocked cuz ain nobody stopping me//

as soon as we approached the hotel door//

the shots rang out and we had everyone face down on the floor//

before we went up to the room we cocked the m-16//

and found time to empty the register and fill our pocktes with the green//

as we enter the elavator i told kp be prepared cuz you know they gonna try and fade us//

so when you see the whites of there eyes let the guns bust//

when the door opened the guards started blastin//

me and kp started sendind niggas straight to an early casket//

killin niggas left and right we was givin free lethal injections//

so far the plan was in perfect perfection//

as we approached corys room//

i can hear the nigga prayin he could tell we was bringing doom//

kicked the door down while KP searched for the loot//

I realize thath there were cops down stairs and men in black suits//

sweat started to pour down corys face//

cuz i had the m-16 and was ready to leave his body displaced//

but there wasn't any time cuz all I could hear was sirens//

the only thing on my mind was to just start firing//

I had to think of something quick cuz it was time to dip//

and the situation had already gotten thick//

KP had the money and I told him to lead the way//

I said if anyone gets in your way just let the lead spray//

I told KP if he gets caught don't say a thing//

and right when i start to pump the lead into cory the fone starts to ring//

To be continued...

give me sum feed back yall

Sniper Locs · 10-15-2006, 04:24 AM

this was fuckin fire man,i really liked it

stay up one

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Sniper Locs · 10-15-2006, 04:29 AM

heres link

Youngcity415 · 10-15-2006, 04:31 AM

iight bizburn thanx i think imma do a part 2 idk wehn imma drop it though n yea imma vote

Youngcity415 · 10-15-2006, 04:44 AM

uppin 4 more feed

Youngcity415 · 10-15-2006, 11:29 AM

uppin 4 mo feed

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-15-2006, 11:36 AM

Yo U Brought Me Right Into The Story..Like A Fuckn Movie...No Doubt..Stay Up

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-15-2006, 11:39 AM

Yo If You Want A Collab On Part 2, Hit Me On AIm GZup23..Or Pm Me

Youngcity415 · 10-15-2006, 11:50 AM

iight thanx yo uppin 4 mo feed

Youngcity415 · 10-15-2006, 08:11 PM

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$$$ C-Money $$$ · 10-15-2006, 09:09 PM

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str8 fire

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Youngcity415 · 10-16-2006, 01:00 AM

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B Dope · 10-16-2006, 01:04 AM

nice stuff. CHeck out mine.

Youngcity415 · 10-16-2006, 08:05 AM

thanx uppin 4 mo feed

10-15-2006, 04:22 AM	#1
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	The robbery Part I The robbery Part I This is how the story starts off// a nigga thinking that he is a straight up boss// i make niggas pay the price and there life is the cost// niggas think dey hot shit till dey bodies is stiff and soft// but lets get back to the main story// a high roller nigga that goes by the name of cory// a slick nigga loved to pop alot of bullshit// neva eva though any situation would get real thick// now times was hard and we knew this nigga was ballin// so I decided to catch him slipping and hame him on the floor crawlin// I called KP to let him no whats up// and that niggas is in a hotel floatin like a rubber duck// i told him that we will need heavy protection// so don't forget a sinle vest or weapon// we found out the hotel where the nigga let his head rest// hopefully the mans prepared fo war and has teflon on his chest// Before we made the attemp of a robbery// I made sure all my clips were cocked cuz ain nobody stopping me// as soon as we approached the hotel door// the shots rang out and we had everyone face down on the floor// before we went up to the room we cocked the m-16// and found time to empty the register and fill our pocktes with the green// as we enter the elavator i told kp be prepared cuz you know they gonna try and fade us// so when you see the whites of there eyes let the guns bust// when the door opened the guards started blastin// me and kp started sendind niggas straight to an early casket// killin niggas left and right we was givin free lethal injections// so far the plan was in perfect perfection// as we approached corys room// i can hear the nigga prayin he could tell we was bringing doom// kicked the door down while KP searched for the loot// I realize thath there were cops down stairs and men in black suits// sweat started to pour down corys face// cuz i had the m-16 and was ready to leave his body displaced// but there wasn't any time cuz all I could hear was sirens// the only thing on my mind was to just start firing// I had to think of something quick cuz it was time to dip// and the situation had already gotten thick// KP had the money and I told him to lead the way// I said if anyone gets in your way just let the lead spray// I told KP if he gets caught don't say a thing// and right when i start to pump the lead into cory the fone starts to ring// To be continued... give me sum feed back yall

10-15-2006, 11:36 AM	#7
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yo U Brought Me Right Into The Story..Like A Fuckn Movie...No Doubt..Stay Up __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

10-15-2006, 11:39 AM	#8
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yo If You Want A Collab On Part 2, Hit Me On AIm GZup23..Or Pm Me __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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10-15-2006, 04:24 AM	#2
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was fuckin fire man,i really liked it stay up one vote on my battle with blue da vinchi

10-15-2006, 04:29 AM	#3
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	heres link

10-15-2006, 04:31 AM	#4
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	iight bizburn thanx i think imma do a part 2 idk wehn imma drop it though n yea imma vote

10-15-2006, 04:44 AM	#5
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin 4 more feed

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Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	iight thanx yo uppin 4 mo feed

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10-15-2006, 09:09 PM	#11
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10-16-2006, 08:05 AM	#14
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx uppin 4 mo feed