! That One Clip !

Nature's Prophecy · 10-13-2006, 06:32 PM

My 'Spit For A Rank' Verse...

I spit shit categorically...metaphorically murder ya ass on behalf of tha fuckin board-minority...
U dead so tht leaves me wiv priority...so this makes u extinct? thts historically..
Tha pain im given is extreme, ya mind workin like ya superman, but u aint motherfuckin supreme...
Im hot, im bright, so ima sun-beam? naw, ima infa-red beam, automatic, 1 clip to eliminate ya whole-team..

HaH, ya dome? ill take off a piece, kiss-of-death, but as im Gods Gift ya can re-name, kiss-of-peace..
Nigga aint fat, but ma powers obese, bitches be praisin me like they in a fuckin church nd im tha priest..
Tht 1 clip will pop ya thick ass vein... dead goes ya brain... drownin in ya blood pool is where the fuck u remain...
Perfect in tha chokehold coz im fuckin kane...deminish ya fat ass like ur in ma god dam food-chain...

Naw i aint 50cent, but i run this hip-hop...candy? naw, im dangerous so im mo like tha fuckin tobacco-shop...
Pop...Pop, watch ya bitch ass drop...u say u 'runnin' shit but ya aint breathin nigga, dam...stop...
Dnt wana know if ya touch yaself bitch, 'toss' tha gat, baseball-bat around ya head 'll hav ya sprawled out, flat...
Kneel bitch, like im jesus nd u on ma prayer-mat, roll so hard ill land on ya, ribs, spine n ma spits go...crack...

HaHa.. Dont be forgettin to give feed..

Tom Chambers · 10-13-2006, 07:49 PM

ok...
need to put some multi's in your shit.......basic rhyming

you need to add some complex lyrics.....add wordplay and some punches.....you decent tho.,....i see potential...

Nature's Prophecy · 10-13-2006, 07:51 PM

DAM u harsh... this was crazy lol... but iight... guess i could do as u say... seen as ur more experienced :(

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 10-13-2006, 08:03 PM

I spit shit categorically...metaphorically murder ya ass on behalf of tha fuckin board-minority...
U dead so tht leaves me wiv priority...so this makes u extinct? thts historically..

really good bar

overall a pretty good drop

co sign wit lotus on the multies though

stay up

L.P. a.k.a Yung~One · 10-13-2006, 08:26 PM

yo like Cc. an lotus sed try addin sum multies an ya verse will b better but overall i like dis drop alot big up'z

ya heard meh....1

Nature's Prophecy · 10-13-2006, 08:29 PM

iight thn ^^

Good Looks All..

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 10-14-2006, 01:44 AM

You Knw what it is Good Stuff Man Keep Spittin that Crack
and Work Hard @ Your Shit...

Tom Chambers · 10-14-2006, 01:46 AM

a great artist can take critism....and apply it :-)

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 10-14-2006, 01:48 AM

True True Professor Lotus :)

Nature's Prophecy · 10-14-2006, 08:01 AM

lol iight... bt my style doesnt seem to involve alot of multis.. no matter wot i do... so if it dont inprove... live wiv it :)

UpPiN

Nature's Prophecy · 10-14-2006, 09:43 AM

UpPiN ThIs ShiT

Nature's Prophecy · 10-14-2006, 11:24 AM

UUUUUUUUppppppppIIIIIIIIIIIIIInnnnnnnnnnn

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-14-2006, 11:50 AM

Yo This Shit Was Aight, No Doubt..1..Stay Up

Nature's Prophecy · 10-14-2006, 12:29 PM

....safe dude ^^....

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 10-14-2006, 12:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tha Only Problem

lol iight... bt my style doesnt seem to involve alot of multis.. no matter wot i do... so if it dont inprove... live wiv it :)

UpPiN

Right....

Nature's Prophecy · 10-14-2006, 12:43 PM

ye ^^ dam right

...

uPpIn

Nature's Prophecy · 10-14-2006, 05:46 PM

UpPiN.....

10-13-2006, 06:32 PM	#1
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	! That One Clip ! ! That One Clip ! *My 'Spit For A Rank' Verse...* I spit shit categorically...metaphorically murder ya ass on behalf of tha fuckin board-minority... U dead so tht leaves me wiv priority...so this makes u extinct? thts historically.. Tha pain im given is extreme, ya mind workin like ya superman, but u aint motherfuckin supreme... Im hot, im bright, so ima sun-beam? naw, ima infa-red beam, automatic, 1 clip to eliminate ya whole-team.. HaH, ya dome? ill take off a piece, kiss-of-death, but as im Gods Gift ya can re-name, kiss-of-peace.. Nigga aint fat, but ma powers obese, bitches be praisin me like they in a fuckin church nd im tha priest.. Tht 1 clip will pop ya thick ass vein... dead goes ya brain... drownin in ya blood pool is where the fuck u remain... Perfect in tha chokehold coz im fuckin kane...deminish ya fat ass like ur in ma god dam food-chain... Naw i aint 50cent, but i run this hip-hop...candy? naw, im dangerous so im mo like tha fuckin tobacco-shop... Pop...Pop, watch ya bitch ass drop...u say u 'runnin' shit but ya aint breathin nigga, dam...stop... Dnt wana know if ya touch yaself bitch, 'toss' tha gat, baseball-bat around ya head 'll hav ya sprawled out, flat... Kneel bitch, like im jesus nd u on ma prayer-mat, roll so hard ill land on ya, ribs, spine n ma spits go...crack... HaHa.. Dont be forgettin to give feed..

10-14-2006, 01:44 AM	#7
<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' The Element Of Surprise Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Trinidad Posts: 9,312 Repped: 131 Repped 157 Times in 45 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	You Knw what it is Good Stuff Man Keep Spittin that Crack and Work Hard @ Your Shit... __________________

10-14-2006, 01:48 AM	#9
<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' The Element Of Surprise Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Trinidad Posts: 9,312 Repped: 131 Repped 157 Times in 45 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	True True Professor Lotus :) __________________

10-14-2006, 11:50 AM	#13
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10-13-2006, 07:49 PM	#2
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	ok... need to put some multi's in your shit.......basic rhyming you need to add some complex lyrics.....add wordplay and some punches.....you decent tho.,....i see potential...

10-13-2006, 07:51 PM	#3
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	DAM u harsh... this was crazy lol... but iight... guess i could do as u say... seen as ur more experienced :(

10-13-2006, 08:03 PM	#4
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	I spit shit categorically...metaphorically murder ya ass on behalf of tha fuckin board-minority... U dead so tht leaves me wiv priority...so this makes u extinct? thts historically.. really good bar overall a pretty good drop co sign wit lotus on the multies though stay up

10-13-2006, 08:26 PM	#5
L.P. a.k.a Yung~One G~L~K Join Date: May 2006 Location: miami//dade county//305 Posts: 829 Repped: 4 Repped 24 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yo like Cc. an lotus sed try addin sum multies an ya verse will b better but overall i like dis drop alot big up'z ya heard meh....1

10-13-2006, 08:29 PM	#6
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	iight thn ^^ Good Looks All..

10-14-2006, 01:46 AM	#8
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	a great artist can take critism....and apply it :-)

10-14-2006, 08:01 AM	#10
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol iight... bt my style doesnt seem to involve alot of multis.. no matter wot i do... so if it dont inprove... live wiv it :) UpPiN

10-14-2006, 09:43 AM	#11
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	UpPiN ThIs ShiT

10-14-2006, 11:24 AM	#12
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	UUUUUUUUppppppppIIIIIIIIIIIIIInnnnnnnnnnn

10-14-2006, 12:29 PM	#14
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	....safe dude ^^....

10-14-2006, 12:43 PM	#16
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ye ^^ dam right ... uPpIn

10-14-2006, 05:46 PM	#17
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	UpPiN.....