sick with it

Youngcity415 · 10-12-2006, 05:22 PM

Im the only problem to niggas cuz ya boy stay strapping//

and i ain worried about taking no shots cuz i got a vest as thick as a north face jacket//

niggas don't no im off tha charts so im not ya everyday rapper//

n when it comes to the money i got more green then the packers//

N if i hit niggas with the gun they'll spin like the wheel of fortune//

end a niggas life before it starts like a gave him an abortion//

niggas betta start approching me with caution//

or they can kiss there life goodbye if i c em flossin//

niggas talking hard but thats not how i play//

cuz i'll leave ya body floatin in tha water like steve afta the sting ray//

i'll leave ya brain hanging low but this ain no jibbs song//

niggas get smoked eazy jus like cheech and chong//

Niggas can stand as tall as dey want but dey crumble eazy like buildings//

n u can get hit with a bullet quicker then a pitch from curt schillings //(ex1)

niggas is hatin on the kid cuz of one bad freestlye//

but u must have forgottenya history like u old and senile//

u must have forgotten about shit like no peace talk//

i slay rappers eazy sumbody go and get the chalk//(ex2)

and i ain gotta talk shit cuz i let my lyrics bark//

my lyrics cud light up a whole room while yours don't even spark//

niggas is thrwoin shots but they still standing in the dark//

so let me put the beam and on daiigs and pop there fucking brains like tarts//(ex3)

ex1- pitcher for the red sox

ex2- when some one is killedpolice outline the body with chalk

ex3- pop tarts idk if there is much to explain on this

Youngcity415 · 10-12-2006, 05:23 PM

feeed back plz n i had to edit 4 spelling

Nature's Prophecy · 10-12-2006, 05:23 PM

i this lil summet aimed at sum1?

Im the only problem to niggas cuz ya boy stay strapping//

Youngcity415 · 10-12-2006, 05:26 PM

naw it ain't aimed at u cuz if it wuz i wud have changed the font color of those words

Nature's Prophecy · 10-12-2006, 05:28 PM

iight wel in th case... i thought it was pretty gd... except the first 2 lines i dint think rhymed...

stay up...

Youngcity415 · 10-12-2006, 05:45 PM

iight thanx

Youngcity415 · 10-12-2006, 09:09 PM

uppin 4 more feed

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 10-12-2006, 09:15 PM

honest feed....not ur best....but thats just my opinion

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10-12-2006, 05:22 PM	#1
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	sick with it sick with it Im the only problem to niggas cuz ya boy stay strapping// and i ain worried about taking no shots cuz i got a vest as thick as a north face jacket// niggas don't no im off tha charts so im not ya everyday rapper// n when it comes to the money i got more green then the packers// N if i hit niggas with the gun they'll spin like the wheel of fortune// end a niggas life before it starts like a gave him an abortion// niggas betta start approching me with caution// or they can kiss there life goodbye if i c em flossin// niggas talking hard but thats not how i play// cuz i'll leave ya body floatin in tha water like steve afta the sting ray// i'll leave ya brain hanging low but this ain no jibbs song// niggas get smoked eazy jus like cheech and chong// Niggas can stand as tall as dey want but dey crumble eazy like buildings// n u can get hit with a bullet quicker then a pitch from curt schillings //(ex1) niggas is hatin on the kid cuz of one bad freestlye// but u must have forgottenya history like u old and senile// u must have forgotten about shit like no peace talk// i slay rappers eazy sumbody go and get the chalk//(ex2) and i ain gotta talk shit cuz i let my lyrics bark// my lyrics cud light up a whole room while yours don't even spark// niggas is thrwoin shots but they still standing in the dark// so let me put the beam and on daiigs and pop there fucking brains like tarts//(ex3) ex1- pitcher for the red sox ex2- when some one is killedpolice outline the body with chalk ex3- pop tarts idk if there is much to explain on this

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10-12-2006, 05:23 PM	#2
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	feeed back plz n i had to edit 4 spelling

10-12-2006, 05:23 PM	#3
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i this lil summet aimed at sum1? Im the only problem to niggas cuz ya boy stay strapping//

10-12-2006, 05:26 PM	#4
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	naw it ain't aimed at u cuz if it wuz i wud have changed the font color of those words

10-12-2006, 05:28 PM	#5
Nature's Prophecy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 739 Repped: 11 Repped 12 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	iight wel in th case... i thought it was pretty gd... except the first 2 lines i dint think rhymed... stay up...

10-12-2006, 05:45 PM	#6
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	iight thanx

10-12-2006, 09:09 PM	#7
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin 4 more feed

10-12-2006, 09:15 PM	#8
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	honest feed....not ur best....but thats just my opinion 1