fallen angel vs shawndadon

ShawnDaDon · 08-19-2009, 12:48 PM

aigght brah deadline midnight thursday
8 bars and since there was no offical call out drop whenevr as long as its b4 thursday at midnight ya dig

F4LLEN ANGEL · 08-19-2009, 01:35 PM

Sounds good.

ShawnDaDon · 08-20-2009, 01:32 AM

alright alright evrybody listen here
i know ya just started but this the end of your career
now ima a specify and make this relle clear
evrybody look at the first emo rapper
cuttin himself open like hard to open wrappers
flakey and soft like a damp *******
i leave ya brain all jellied like smackers
might s well be on a soap opera dawg bcuz you an actor
what happened in ya life what ya so damn sad for
beat ya body up nigga have ya mad sore
you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off
ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg
i see ya boy virus got you gassed up like a jew
you aint nut but a mindfreak like chris angel dude
we all see you dawg nigga you a fluke
that collab was a pretty painted picture duke
but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew

no shots at virus personaly im not tryin to beef with that dude

CriminalThoughtz · 08-20-2009, 04:00 AM

....you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off....
......ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg....

....that collab was a pretty painted picture duke....
....but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew.....

those lines were painkillerz man..PO(personal opinion)cant wait 4 Angel drop man...

F4LLEN ANGEL · 08-20-2009, 06:11 AM

I don’t need a Virus, You already make me sick
Everything in Texas is bigger? Not your dick.
Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go”
Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone
I know you think that your Hips Hops messiah
But your writing makes you the “Shit drop pariah”
Elementary rhyming got none of my quick wit
Your flow is so far from anything liquid
The don? Don’t need judges to have you seen as bested
Anybody you godfathered probably been molested
You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’
When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz
I can tell because of your constant compliments
Maybe try to score a deal where you can copy his lyrics
I hope next time you rethink a vicious act with me
After this, your name should be; Ficticious Activity

F4LLEN ANGEL · 08-20-2009, 06:14 AM

Let's get some votes up here. Sick battle man and good luck.

F4LLEN ANGEL · 08-20-2009, 06:35 AM

THank you Criminal.

CriminalThoughtz · 08-20-2009, 06:39 AM

Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go”
Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone
I know you think that your Hips Hops messiah
But your writing makes you the “Shit drop pariah”

You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’
When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz

...These lines were painkillers as well man..

flow...shawn..
multies...Angel
metaphor..Angel...
punches..Angel..
creativity....shawn

....the winner by Split decision..almost a draw...Angel...even thought shawn's drop was as tight as Angel's...in some areas..... angel's drop was more complex..

ShawnDaDon · 08-20-2009, 03:26 PM

im def eelin fallens drop thats 1-0 fallen

CriminalThoughtz · 08-20-2009, 03:32 PM

lets get some more votes in...this was a crazy battle..

ShawnDaDon · 08-20-2009, 04:32 PM

man they censored one of my words

CriminalThoughtz · 08-20-2009, 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShawnDaDon

man they censored one of my words

i thougt u ve done that on purpose

ShawnDaDon · 08-20-2009, 04:48 PM

nah brah idk why they censored but i guess they took it differnt then i intended

CriminalThoughtz · 08-20-2009, 05:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShawnDaDon

man they censored one of my words

i thougt u ve done that on purpose

Braidz · 08-20-2009, 11:11 PM

I don’t need a Virus, You already make me sick

could have gone better if you made the line after it better

Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go”
Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone

haha i like it

The don? Don’t need judges to have you seen as bested
Anybody you godfathered probably been molested

godfathered.... whered you pull that from?

You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’
When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz

no hate.... but.... true they do back eachother up 2 much

alright alright evrybody listen here
i know ya just started but this the end of your career

shawndadon.... you also just started...

evrybody look at the first emo rapper
cuttin himself open like hard to open wrappers
might s well be on a soap opera dawg bcuz you an actor
what happened in ya life what ya so damn sad for

i also found that first drop a bit too emo... points for this

you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off
ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg

i like it...

that collab was a pretty painted picture duke
but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew

no... the collab was good. but i woulda gone along the lines of
but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew
so guess he out shined him self, or maybe it really was you

OVERALL

Flow.. Shawndadon
Wordplay... Angel
Multies... Tied
Metaphors... Angel
Creativity... Tied

so i got my vote on angel.... but i see improvement in this drop from shawn, there is no lying about guns n shit.... so its better than all the other drops ive seen from him.... keep it this way... both of you keep improving...

ShawnDaDon · 08-20-2009, 11:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Braidz

I don’t need a Virus, You already make me sick

could have gone better if you made the line after it better

Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go”
Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone

haha i like it

The don? Don’t need judges to have you seen as bested
Anybody you godfathered probably been molested

godfathered.... whered you pull that from?

You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’
When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz

no hate.... but.... true they do back eachother up 2 much

alright alright evrybody listen here
i know ya just started but this the end of your career

shawndadon.... you also just started...

evrybody look at the first emo rapper
cuttin himself open like hard to open wrappers
might s well be on a soap opera dawg bcuz you an actor
what happened in ya life what ya so damn sad for

i also found that first drop a bit too emo... points for this

you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off
ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg

i like it...

that collab was a pretty painted picture duke
but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew

no... the collab was good. but i woulda gone along the lines of
but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew
so guess he out shined him self, or maybe it really was you

OVERALL

Flow.. Shawndadon
Wordplay... Angel
Multies... Tied
Metaphors... Angel
Creativity... Tied

so i got my vote on angel.... but i see improvement in this drop from shawn, there is no lying about guns n shit.... so its better than all the other drops ive seen from him.... keep it this way... both of you keep improving...

thanks for the vote dawg and i took ya advice tryin to rhyme about other shit than gunz nd killin

CriminalThoughtz · 08-20-2009, 11:32 PM

im always backin people up brah....don my dude..thats wut u suppose to do...but even though im always backing his drops...if i feel he lost a battle..i ll post that shit to man...but braidz ur right that line was fuckin sick.

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-20-2009, 11:40 PM

Aight, so I can't vote...but i'll go ahead and say, I think Angel took it..repeat..THIS IS NOT A VOTE...just an opinion...Shawn you rly need to add multies to your shit. they rly beef up a piece, but ur gonna have to watch they arent forced..if i had to pick one thing for you to work on i would say overall complexity..multies, less simplistic punches, shit like that.

F4LLEN ANGEL · 08-21-2009, 02:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Braidz

I don’t need a Virus, You already make me sick

could have gone better if you made the line after it better

Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go”
Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone

haha i like it

The don? Don’t need judges to have you seen as bested
Anybody you godfathered probably been molested

godfathered.... whered you pull that from?

You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’
When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz

no hate.... but.... true they do back eachother up 2 much

alright alright evrybody listen here
i know ya just started but this the end of your career

shawndadon.... you also just started...

evrybody look at the first emo rapper
cuttin himself open like hard to open wrappers
might s well be on a soap opera dawg bcuz you an actor
what happened in ya life what ya so damn sad for

i also found that first drop a bit too emo... points for this

you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off
ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg

i like it...

that collab was a pretty painted picture duke
but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew

no... the collab was good. but i woulda gone along the lines of
but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew
so guess he out shined him self, or maybe it really was you

OVERALL

Flow.. Shawndadon
Wordplay... Angel
Multies... Tied
Metaphors... Angel
Creativity... Tied

so i got my vote on angel.... but i see improvement in this drop from shawn, there is no lying about guns n shit.... so its better than all the other drops ive seen from him.... keep it this way... both of you keep improving...

Thz for the vote. Btw the godfather line is coming from him calling himself a don...

Braidz · 08-21-2009, 11:55 PM

yeah i just figured that out before

Young Mic · 08-22-2009, 06:02 AM

My vote goes to Fallen Angel. To me his verse was put together better.

08-19-2009, 12:48 PM	#1
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	fallen angel vs shawndadon fallen angel vs shawndadon aigght brah deadline midnight thursday 8 bars and since there was no offical call out drop whenevr as long as its b4 thursday at midnight ya dig __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-20-2009, 01:32 AM	#3
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	alright alright evrybody listen here i know ya just started but this the end of your career now ima a specify and make this relle clear evrybody look at the first emo rapper cuttin himself open like hard to open wrappers flakey and soft like a damp ******* i leave ya brain all jellied like smackers might s well be on a soap opera dawg bcuz you an actor what happened in ya life what ya so damn sad for beat ya body up nigga have ya mad sore you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg i see ya boy virus got you gassed up like a jew you aint nut but a mindfreak like chris angel dude we all see you dawg nigga you a fluke that collab was a pretty painted picture duke but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew no shots at virus personaly im not tryin to beef with that dude __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones Last edited by ShawnDaDon; 08-20-2009 at 04:30 PM.

08-20-2009, 06:35 AM	#7
F4LLEN ANGEL Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 14 Repped: 0 Repped 8 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	THank you Criminal. Last edited by F4LLEN ANGEL; 08-20-2009 at 02:22 PM.

08-20-2009, 03:26 PM	#9
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	im def eelin fallens drop thats 1-0 fallen __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-20-2009, 04:32 PM	#11
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	man they censored one of my words __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-19-2009, 01:35 PM	#2
F4LLEN ANGEL Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 14 Repped: 0 Repped 8 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Sounds good.

08-20-2009, 04:00 AM	#4
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	....you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off.... ......ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg.... ....that collab was a pretty painted picture duke.... ....but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew..... those lines were painkillerz man..PO(personal opinion)cant wait 4 Angel drop man...

08-20-2009, 06:11 AM	#5
F4LLEN ANGEL Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 14 Repped: 0 Repped 8 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I don’t need a Virus, You already make me sick Everything in Texas is bigger? Not your dick. Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go” Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone I know you think that your Hips Hops messiah But your writing makes you the “Shit drop pariah” Elementary rhyming got none of my quick wit Your flow is so far from anything liquid The don? Don’t need judges to have you seen as bested Anybody you godfathered probably been molested You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’ When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz I can tell because of your constant compliments Maybe try to score a deal where you can copy his lyrics I hope next time you rethink a vicious act with me After this, your name should be; Ficticious Activity

08-20-2009, 06:14 AM	#6
F4LLEN ANGEL Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 14 Repped: 0 Repped 8 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Let's get some votes up here. Sick battle man and good luck.

08-20-2009, 06:39 AM	#8
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go” Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone I know you think that your Hips Hops messiah But your writing makes you the “Shit drop pariah” You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’ When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz ...These lines were painkillers as well man.. flow...shawn.. multies...Angel metaphor..Angel... punches..Angel.. creativity....shawn ....the winner by Split decision..almost a draw...Angel...even thought shawn's drop was as tight as Angel's...in some areas..... angel's drop was more complex..

08-20-2009, 03:32 PM	#10
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	lets get some more votes in...this was a crazy battle..

08-20-2009, 04:48 PM	#13
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	nah brah idk why they censored but i guess they took it differnt then i intended __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-20-2009, 11:11 PM	#15
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 320 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	I don’t need a Virus, You already make me sick could have gone better if you made the line after it better Got no fans in crown their thinking “no-go” Your heads so high in the clouds you breathing ozone haha i like it The don? Don’t need judges to have you seen as bested Anybody you godfathered probably been molested godfathered.... whered you pull that from? You’re dissin like your drinking just a few innocent shots n’ When you’re thinking of sex your thinking CriminalThoughtz no hate.... but.... true they do back eachother up 2 much alright alright evrybody listen here i know ya just started but this the end of your career shawndadon.... you also just started... evrybody look at the first emo rapper cuttin himself open like hard to open wrappers might s well be on a soap opera dawg bcuz you an actor what happened in ya life what ya so damn sad for i also found that first drop a bit too emo... points for this you a fallen angel cuz i got ya wings off ya soft might as well get a soft melody and sing dawg i like it... that collab was a pretty painted picture duke but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew no... the collab was good. but i woulda gone along the lines of but your parts was nice cuz you got virus to draw what ya drew so guess he out shined him self, or maybe it really was you OVERALL Flow.. Shawndadon Wordplay... Angel Multies... Tied Metaphors... Angel Creativity... Tied so i got my vote on angel.... but i see improvement in this drop from shawn, there is no lying about guns n shit.... so its better than all the other drops ive seen from him.... keep it this way... both of you keep improving...

08-20-2009, 11:32 PM	#17
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	im always backin people up brah....don my dude..thats wut u suppose to do...but even though im always backing his drops...if i feel he lost a battle..i ll post that shit to man...but braidz ur right that line was fuckin sick.

08-20-2009, 11:40 PM	#18
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	Aight, so I can't vote...but i'll go ahead and say, I think Angel took it..repeat..THIS IS NOT A VOTE...just an opinion...Shawn you rly need to add multies to your shit. they rly beef up a piece, but ur gonna have to watch they arent forced..if i had to pick one thing for you to work on i would say overall complexity..multies, less simplistic punches, shit like that. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-21-2009, 11:55 PM	#20
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 320 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	yeah i just figured that out before

08-22-2009, 06:02 AM	#21
Young Mic 9 Elements Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Tbilisi Posts: 1,091 Repped: 181 Repped 175 Times in 84 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 23 Times in 15 Posts	My vote goes to Fallen Angel. To me his verse was put together better. __________________ myspace.com/youngmiconline

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