shawndadon vs c money

ShawnDaDon · 08-18-2009, 06:11 PM

aiight drop as much as you want but the deadline is tomorrow night at midnight

ShawnDaDon · 08-18-2009, 06:23 PM

aiight dawg im comin in real hard
have this like the lion king im symba and you scar
coming for ya neck or droppin you from a far
im here to expose you aint who u say you are
you drop some heat so when you said you would battle i was kinda worried
but i went back and read ya weak ass stories
i read and and analyized and realized your sorry
sobbin n cryin take ya cake ass to maury
popovich i keep da knife to poke a bitch
ill chop ya up just like a snitch
drop ya from long range just like peja stojakovic
i aint got much bread but on da block im rich
but when ya was locked up i bet ya was the cell block bitch
im come deep but dont worry about getting lynched
im heavy nigga and i swang my boulders
take ya old school i have the world on thy shouldas
i keep pelnty glocks in my holsters
compare it to tennage girls and they posters
on the wall the game is bout to begin so i got to ball
i stay on top neva fall
and dont forget dis nigga ya weak ass story teller yall

ha ha murda nothin but murda but im feelin ya drops so dont get heated

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-18-2009, 06:29 PM

i'll drop it by 8

ShawnDaDon · 08-18-2009, 06:42 PM

aiight i see ya had to witch ya verse up
its all good though

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-18-2009, 07:55 PM

I wanted to try and make it a good battle cuz i just keyed that shit up and once i saw it it seemed wack.

That verse was nice but ya ain't ready for me ShawnDaDon/
I'll kidnap ya and starve ya like it's fuckin Ramadan/
Cut off ya finger or ya ear and send it to ya mom/
And leave a note sayin' I don't want dough/ I'm just doin' it for fun/
Cut ya wrists, stitchem up and give ya blood transfusions/
I'll have ya screamin, cryin and beggin for ya life's conclusion/
I know it's sick and twisted but I find it amusin'/
Lyrically ya talented but ya suffer cuz ya mind's confused kid/
See I stay on track and always rhyme about the true shit/
Ya have a bunch of stories so ya got plenty to be choosin'/
Ya got talent like i said but I'm handy wit a punch/
And i'm the one who should be sayin' don't get ya panties in a bucnh/
You're a sweet tart so i guess i'm havin candy for my lunch/
Cuz i'm a fuckin hunter and ya lookin like Bambi ya little cunt/

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-18-2009, 07:57 PM

Good verse my dude

let's get the votes poppin now

Braidz · 08-18-2009, 08:32 PM

have this like the lion king im symba and you scar

drop ya from long range just like peja stojakovic

liked these lines.... thats all i liked from your bars really, no hate

Ya got talent like i said but I'm handy wit a punch/
And i'm the one who should be sayin' don't get ya panties in a bucnh/

That verse was nice but ya ain't ready for me ShawnDaDon/
I'll kidnap ya and starve ya like it's fuckin Ramadan/

You're a sweet tart so i guess i'm havin candy for my lunch/
Cuz i'm a fuckin hunter and ya lookin like Bambi ya little cunt/

HAHAHA i liked this, you had some pre good muti's in your bars

over all

Mulit's: C-Money
Creativity: ShawnDaDon (lines i mentioned before)
Punchlines: C-Money
Flow: C-Money
Wordplay: C-Money

overall.... C-MONEY by a long shot.... but ShawnDaDon... you are improving a bit.....
my advice is.... stop claiming you have guns n saying your gunna kill people.... n focus more on smart / funny sounding rhymes

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-18-2009, 09:31 PM

thanks for the vote 1-0 uppin

realtalk · 08-19-2009, 01:03 AM

yea nigga this off the top of the dome/
im brazilian sitting on gods throne/
im great with the words and im new to this shit/
no disrespect but i kill both of you kids/
like i said im just typing as i rhyme like a clock i aint
got a set time/
keep moving after the paper/
my neighbor call me alexander, cause im greater /
or gonna be soon,i dont need paper nor autotune/
fake always exist and yea i show whats real/
my skin may not show but your girl will certanly feel/
nosense popping off and im playing with the track/
my chick sittin here saying my shit wack/
iaint gon pull a chris cause i aint that type of dude
but i can make it rain my bitch name is glueeee...

hahahah just wrote as i said shit dnt make sense
no need to hate no i dnt write music, so sry if / are wrong.

can i get a ya digg

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-19-2009, 01:05 AM

u got potential but ya got a ways to go

i like the effort

but please don't post in here unless ya gonna vote

ShawnDaDon · 08-19-2009, 01:11 AM

im felli what braidz said dawg
big ups homie

realtalk · 08-19-2009, 01:13 AM

yea man where can i start >?

thanks

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-19-2009, 02:35 AM

freestylin and shit is good when ya spittin but when ya typin some shit ya might as well try to form it right and put punches and multies in it cuz ya can

ya can never take back and edit what ya say but ya can wit what ya type

that's my main advice cuz ya shit was fine it just needed to make sense

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-19-2009, 09:02 PM

uppin for votes

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-21-2009, 01:15 AM

98 views and no fuckin votes? c'mon

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-24-2009, 05:00 PM

can we get some fuckin votes up in here

FacilDinero · 08-25-2009, 06:16 PM

Punches: C-Money
Flow: Shawn
Creativity: Shawn
Multies: C-Money
Wordplay: C-Money

Overall: C-Money

Return The Favor And Vote B

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 08-28-2009, 03:57 AM

2-0 uppin for da ko

08-18-2009, 06:11 PM	#1
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	shawndadon vs c money shawndadon vs c money aiight drop as much as you want but the deadline is tomorrow night at midnight __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-18-2009, 06:23 PM	#2
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	aiight dawg im comin in real hard have this like the lion king im symba and you scar coming for ya neck or droppin you from a far im here to expose you aint who u say you are you drop some heat so when you said you would battle i was kinda worried but i went back and read ya weak ass stories i read and and analyized and realized your sorry sobbin n cryin take ya cake ass to maury popovich i keep da knife to poke a bitch ill chop ya up just like a snitch drop ya from long range just like peja stojakovic i aint got much bread but on da block im rich but when ya was locked up i bet ya was the cell block bitch im come deep but dont worry about getting lynched im heavy nigga and i swang my boulders take ya old school i have the world on thy shouldas i keep pelnty glocks in my holsters compare it to tennage girls and they posters on the wall the game is bout to begin so i got to ball i stay on top neva fall and dont forget dis nigga ya weak ass story teller yall ha ha murda nothin but murda but im feelin ya drops so dont get heated __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-18-2009, 06:29 PM	#3
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	i'll drop it by 8 __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38 Last edited by $$$ C-Money $$$; 08-18-2009 at 06:39 PM.

08-18-2009, 06:42 PM	#4
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	aiight i see ya had to witch ya verse up its all good though __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones Last edited by ShawnDaDon; 08-18-2009 at 06:55 PM.

08-18-2009, 07:55 PM	#5
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	I wanted to try and make it a good battle cuz i just keyed that shit up and once i saw it it seemed wack. That verse was nice but ya ain't ready for me ShawnDaDon/ I'll kidnap ya and starve ya like it's fuckin Ramadan/ Cut off ya finger or ya ear and send it to ya mom/ And leave a note sayin' I don't want dough/ I'm just doin' it for fun/ Cut ya wrists, stitchem up and give ya blood transfusions/ I'll have ya screamin, cryin and beggin for ya life's conclusion/ I know it's sick and twisted but I find it amusin'/ Lyrically ya talented but ya suffer cuz ya mind's confused kid/ See I stay on track and always rhyme about the true shit/ Ya have a bunch of stories so ya got plenty to be choosin'/ Ya got talent like i said but I'm handy wit a punch/ And i'm the one who should be sayin' don't get ya panties in a bucnh/ You're a sweet tart so i guess i'm havin candy for my lunch/ Cuz i'm a fuckin hunter and ya lookin like Bambi ya little cunt/ __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-18-2009, 07:57 PM	#6
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Good verse my dude let's get the votes poppin now __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-18-2009, 08:32 PM	#7
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 320 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	have this like the lion king im symba and you scar drop ya from long range just like peja stojakovic liked these lines.... thats all i liked from your bars really, no hate Ya got talent like i said but I'm handy wit a punch/ And i'm the one who should be sayin' don't get ya panties in a bucnh/ That verse was nice but ya ain't ready for me ShawnDaDon/ I'll kidnap ya and starve ya like it's fuckin Ramadan/ You're a sweet tart so i guess i'm havin candy for my lunch/ Cuz i'm a fuckin hunter and ya lookin like Bambi ya little cunt/ HAHAHA i liked this, you had some pre good muti's in your bars over all Mulit's: C-Money Creativity: ShawnDaDon (lines i mentioned before) Punchlines: C-Money Flow: C-Money Wordplay: C-Money overall.... C-MONEY by a long shot.... but ShawnDaDon... you are improving a bit..... my advice is.... stop claiming you have guns n saying your gunna kill people.... n focus more on smart / funny sounding rhymes

08-18-2009, 09:31 PM	#8
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	thanks for the vote 1-0 uppin __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-19-2009, 01:03 AM	#9
realtalk Join Date: May 2009 Location: new york Posts: 357 Repped: 130 Repped 57 Times in 38 Posts Neg Reps: 29 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 53 Posts	yea nigga this off the top of the dome/ im brazilian sitting on gods throne/ im great with the words and im new to this shit/ no disrespect but i kill both of you kids/ like i said im just typing as i rhyme like a clock i aint got a set time/ keep moving after the paper/ my neighbor call me alexander, cause im greater / or gonna be soon,i dont need paper nor autotune/ fake always exist and yea i show whats real/ my skin may not show but your girl will certanly feel/ nosense popping off and im playing with the track/ my chick sittin here saying my shit wack/ iaint gon pull a chris cause i aint that type of dude but i can make it rain my bitch name is glueeee... hahahah just wrote as i said shit dnt make sense no need to hate no i dnt write music, so sry if / are wrong. can i get a ya digg

08-19-2009, 01:05 AM	#10
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	u got potential but ya got a ways to go i like the effort but please don't post in here unless ya gonna vote __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-19-2009, 01:11 AM	#11
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	im felli what braidz said dawg big ups homie __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-19-2009, 01:13 AM	#12
realtalk Join Date: May 2009 Location: new york Posts: 357 Repped: 130 Repped 57 Times in 38 Posts Neg Reps: 29 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 53 Posts	yea man where can i start >? thanks

08-19-2009, 02:35 AM	#13
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	freestylin and shit is good when ya spittin but when ya typin some shit ya might as well try to form it right and put punches and multies in it cuz ya can ya can never take back and edit what ya say but ya can wit what ya type that's my main advice cuz ya shit was fine it just needed to make sense __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-19-2009, 09:02 PM	#14
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	uppin for votes __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-21-2009, 01:15 AM	#15
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	98 views and no fuckin votes? c'mon __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-24-2009, 05:00 PM	#16
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	can we get some fuckin votes up in here __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

08-25-2009, 06:16 PM	#17
FacilDinero EasyMoney™ Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens Posts: 3,928 Repped: 960 Repped 744 Times in 453 Posts Neg Reps: 260 Neg Repped at 230 Times in 157 Posts	Punches: C-Money Flow: Shawn Creativity: Shawn Multies: C-Money Wordplay: C-Money Overall: C-Money Return The Favor And Vote B __________________ Hawks: 11-2

08-28-2009, 03:57 AM	#18
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	2-0 uppin for da ko __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

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