Braidz vs ShawnDaDon & Criminal Thoughtz

Braidz · 08-06-2009, 03:24 AM

my first battle.....
so may not be good.

but im just messing n shit so...

lets do it

youz do 12 lines each.... i done 24... so then youz will equal same amount as me

i dont care when ya post it... just do it asap!

aiight here goes

yall lyrically diarhea, im spitting that hard shit
ima call you all grover, yall lyrically garbage
im MJ when i write, the greatest of artists
einstein on the mic, spitting the crazyness smart shit

see im taking the lead, im the ring, yall frodo
fuck these wack rappers like a dick, no homo
co-signed coza lot of rappers rock with braidz
lyrics over your head they top your brain

only reason yall cant be touched, women dont like yall
im the power i switch you off, when yall pick up the micro-
phone, better leave the battle dome, go home
before i get yall knocked up, like the x-y chromosone (no Homo)

yall got down syndrome, coz ya rhymes are retarted
got me thinkn criminal thoughtz, now yall dearly departed
even people with no arms saying i got-this-hands-down
so go ahead n stand-down before i rock-your-damn town

haha, tryna hustle-n-shit, you muffl-ing-bitch
yall rhymes aint crazy, its just troubled-n-shit
the clock on the bomb for me is ticking like tick-tock
you try to scope on bitches the result you get flipped-off

see i hit my limit, my shit hit the fan, damn
thats the reasons i shat all over youz man
i got 100 on yall like wilt chamberlain
this is starting to feel like me vs i am sam

drop ya drops

peace

CriminalThoughtz · 08-06-2009, 11:54 AM

....not even gonna write..im gonna include u in my freestyle.

u mention my name dawg that means u got me on ya mind
if this was countin minutes N hours i ll be on ya the time/
this is not lookin for wordz and make dem all to rhyme
they all have to make sense too N i dont find Da on ya lines/
i ll do this for a reason also depending on the season/
you trust to many people homie.. I gonna kill u for treason/
u dickridin for no reason they should award u with a license/
heavy thoughts comtemple my mind u have a very light sense/
of humor......what r u trying to do homie please just follow the song/
i got long arms and legs.... i ll give it 2 u so u can clap it along
don try to play mr undefeated cuz last time conversation got heated/
u go by cm and inches homeboy i move in meters/
u can t be faithful to ya flow cuz u only have it once in a month/
but once u write u make it seem like rap is fuckin done/
stick to dickride and if u decide to write..
go to the nearest brigde and jump off of it at night/
cuz if u do it in daylight they ll probably found u fast/
and fast is how im writin shit im havin a blass//
N last but no least i didnt think to write this freestyle B/
u probably spent a week writing this...N thats the best u came up with?

ShawnDaDon · 08-06-2009, 01:21 PM

damn homie comin at me and my boy two on one
thats like fuckin round with a knife when we got guns
just to let ya know right now ya making a mistake son
and ya right i do spit retarted
and evn if it was jus you and me i got this shit regardless
ans so how long have ya been writin that
im grosse on the mic im infected and i just fucked you so ya got the clap
and im a lyrical genius and you just laerned to rap
i know ya said 12 lines but i aint gonna offer that
you vs me and criminal nigga you just got smacked

Witty Qwan · 08-07-2009, 07:39 PM

(o_O)

shawn and crimanal got more lines then braidz....

flow- Braidz
Multiez- Braidz...i think...he had like 1 to yall zero

personals- Tie
punchez- Braidz....they wasnt great..but he made a effort
creativity- Tie
Wordplay- Tie

Overall- Braidz....its was kinda even really...but he out did yall in some of the categorys so gets the W

Braidz · 08-09-2009, 08:31 PM

im not gunna hate.... or beef... im not like dat....

i liked crim's verse. it was pre good...

dunno bout shawndadon's verse.... didnt have enuff punches or wordplay...

but... its 1-0... more votes?

08-06-2009, 03:24 AM	#1
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 320 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	Braidz vs ShawnDaDon & Criminal Thoughtz Braidz vs ShawnDaDon & Criminal Thoughtz my first battle..... so may not be good. but im just messing n shit so... lets do it youz do 12 lines each.... i done 24... so then youz will equal same amount as me i dont care when ya post it... just do it asap! aiight here goes yall lyrically diarhea, im spitting that hard shit ima call you all grover, yall lyrically garbage im MJ when i write, the greatest of artists einstein on the mic, spitting the crazyness smart shit see im taking the lead, im the ring, yall frodo fuck these wack rappers like a dick, no homo co-signed coza lot of rappers rock with braidz lyrics over your head they top your brain only reason yall cant be touched, women dont like yall im the power i switch you off, when yall pick up the micro- phone, better leave the battle dome, go home before i get yall knocked up, like the x-y chromosone (no Homo) yall got down syndrome, coz ya rhymes are retarted got me thinkn criminal thoughtz, now yall dearly departed even people with no arms saying i got-this-hands-down so go ahead n stand-down before i rock-your-damn town haha, tryna hustle-n-shit, you muffl-ing-bitch yall rhymes aint crazy, its just troubled-n-shit the clock on the bomb for me is ticking like tick-tock you try to scope on bitches the result you get flipped-off see i hit my limit, my shit hit the fan, damn thats the reasons i shat all over youz man i got 100 on yall like wilt chamberlain this is starting to feel like me vs i am sam drop ya drops peace

08-06-2009, 01:21 PM	#3
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	damn homie comin at me and my boy two on one thats like fuckin round with a knife when we got guns just to let ya know right now ya making a mistake son and ya right i do spit retarted and evn if it was jus you and me i got this shit regardless ans so how long have ya been writin that im grosse on the mic im infected and i just fucked you so ya got the clap and im a lyrical genius and you just laerned to rap i know ya said 12 lines but i aint gonna offer that you vs me and criminal nigga you just got smacked __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

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08-06-2009, 11:54 AM	#2
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	....not even gonna write..im gonna include u in my freestyle. u mention my name dawg that means u got me on ya mind if this was countin minutes N hours i ll be on ya the time/ this is not lookin for wordz and make dem all to rhyme they all have to make sense too N i dont find Da on ya lines/ i ll do this for a reason also depending on the season/ you trust to many people homie.. I gonna kill u for treason/ u dickridin for no reason they should award u with a license/ heavy thoughts comtemple my mind u have a very light sense/ of humor......what r u trying to do homie please just follow the song/ i got long arms and legs.... i ll give it 2 u so u can clap it along don try to play mr undefeated cuz last time conversation got heated/ u go by cm and inches homeboy i move in meters/ u can t be faithful to ya flow cuz u only have it once in a month/ but once u write u make it seem like rap is fuckin done/ stick to dickride and if u decide to write.. go to the nearest brigde and jump off of it at night/ cuz if u do it in daylight they ll probably found u fast/ and fast is how im writin shit im havin a blass// N last but no least i didnt think to write this freestyle B/ u probably spent a week writing this...N thats the best u came up with?

08-07-2009, 07:39 PM	#4
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,049 Repped: 155 Repped 482 Times in 310 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 75 Posts	(o_O) shawn and crimanal got more lines then braidz.... flow- Braidz Multiez- Braidz...i think...he had like 1 to yall zero personals- Tie punchez- Braidz....they wasnt great..but he made a effort creativity- Tie Wordplay- Tie Overall- Braidz....its was kinda even really...but he out did yall in some of the categorys so gets the W

08-09-2009, 08:31 PM	#5
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 320 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	im not gunna hate.... or beef... im not like dat.... i liked crim's verse. it was pre good... dunno bout shawndadon's verse.... didnt have enuff punches or wordplay... but... its 1-0... more votes?