ShawnDaDon, Criminal Thoughtz, Mcduffe vs Rodknee Madwriter and Buddah

ShawnDaDon · 07-31-2009, 12:56 PM

re up first verse form da kid shawndadon gonna drop in a few minutes

ShawnDaDon · 07-31-2009, 01:13 PM

ill let off da first shot cuz i aint scared
these dudes is like a kid widout school supplies yall unprepared
hip hops my cave so welcome to my lair
have ya baby moms runnin her fingas through my hair
that was just the introduction let me get to the beef
ima drop rodknee and start kickin in his teeth
how these dudes hard wen shots pop off they run to da police
and buddah ether me please
and the only chance had of winnin is madwriter and i jus infected him wid my diesease
my rhymes is like aids dey infect and kill
pull out my sword and slash blood spills
rap circles round these dudes have them dizzy off my skills
betta go find a ghost writer on ebay
and copy evrything he say
but that might be to riskay
cuz im da ghostwriter and here is da verse ill give you
rodknee "man fuck shawn he is my son i fucked his mom widout a condom on"
Buddah " ill smoke his ass like da blunt im tokin have his moms chokin on da dick she is deep throatin"
and mad i aint gotta right nuttin for him
he got some fire so i only gotta help his friends

mcduffee420 · 07-31-2009, 01:17 PM

Its body, mind but i heard you lost your mentallity/
schitzoprenic against mankind the way hell rell be/
Delusional mind gradually climbing to another level/
your split personallity shining wonderin when to let go/
how do you contrast the fact you straight alpahabet/
abc rhymes un-relaxed fuck give up renounce in check/
me dadon n criminal thoughts came to cause a disaster/
we run dis like don won and kill you slowly like we cancer/

RodKnee · 07-31-2009, 01:24 PM

The last time Me n Mad collaborated we brought nothin' but heat,
This time 'round we're more hated, but preffered to than Duffee.
Everyday I'm on your Brain, You think of me everytime you breath
Your disses are some corny shit, I'ma start calling you Corned beef,
And ShawnDaDon is Parmesan, more cheese in your rhymes than on your Wanking palm
Buddha came through and Ethered the fucking both of ya,
Next on the list is for Rawdknee to be chocking ya.
Who the fuck is this 'Criminal', thinking He commits Crime,
Only shit you're guilty of is not being able to write a Rhyme.
Your popularity is in Decline, You should take this as a sign
To stop writing all this bullshit that nobody would think of buyin,
Three fucking amigo's without an ounce of Talent between them all,
Always Crawl, Back with more of that bullshit for us to tear and Maul.
MotherFockers!!

Buddha · 07-31-2009, 02:55 PM

Which one of these three stooges should I destroy first?/
Regardless of the order, your destination is still the hearse/
One warning shot at ya crowd, watch you all disperse/
Shawn, Criminal and Ms. Duff, I'm havin a tough time decidin who the worse/
Maybe I'll decide when I come through and rock your venue/
One third of you crew sound like something off the dollar menu/
It's dangerous talking to me in a tone containin anguish/
I'm handin out revenge like it's the main dish/
Fuck it, I'm sitting here having Criminal Thoughts/
Thinkin about giving this nigga some subliminal shots/
Or just given him some of what I got/
In this barrel, just bust, no talk/
I'll leave Shawn Da Pawn alone/
Because frankly nobody even knows he exists/
And he poses about a 1% threat to my throne/
I don't even deem him worthy of a diss/

ShawnDaDon · 07-31-2009, 03:03 PM

aiight man waitin on criminal and madwriter

CriminalThoughtz · 07-31-2009, 06:37 PM

well get real and sincere jugdes not dickridin jugdes.....

i m all about artistic shit /so ama paint a masterpiece/
my enery is solar/ y ll niggas need double AA baterries/
get a doc and a collar im watch out with those allergies/
told u see? now i understand why writer was so mad at me/
but maddy is 'alright' ...dem other 2 are just pathetic/
y'll rhyming don lie...and lyrically im way more athetic/
i chop your hands and feet/
start runnin N say hello To God for Me/
im vicious with these punches/i fixin to eat my lunches/
im cat-teachin these mouses/im all black throwin y'll roses/
im not even shoutin out names since der not n important topic/
look bitch...yea you...rodknee..get on u knee N rock this/
these dudes r actin up/got main roles in movies just suckn cock/
so buckle up....ur human beings!!!i made of steel like robocop!!!!/
and this other nigga well u r the weakest link..ahhh u need a hint?
well i l give u one....
got the name of a fat dude....so u r not hot..but u ll need a hat/
im here feedin u lactose...u too slow dawg.. cant run in my track/
i got a 'patriotic' offense that ll doubt ur 'defense' can guard'
i ll give y'll a job application/ bet under the gender section/
y ll put a question mark.

TheMadWriter · 07-31-2009, 06:57 PM

ShawnDaDon, why the fuck you talkin bitch you better lay low/
The closest you ever came to a gun was fuckin Halo/
I'm fa-tal, lyrically kill you if Rodknee say so/
You're easy to manipulate, I call your brain some playdough/
Talkin bout 45s, actin jive and talkin high/
Aim over Bonnie's back and fuck her while I start shootin Clyde/
Relentless, beat your ass until you look defenseless/
Smack you snatch your chain just because you're lookin trenchant/
Mcduffee you're pathetic of an MC you are remnants/
Pretendin, i'll choke your fuckin ass with your own pendant/
Sendin, waves of pain while i'm fuckin ventin/
I ain't got no time to wait I ain't no damn attendant!/
Sliced up like we're fencin, beggin for your repentance/
Bleedin from the throat and screamin weezin for a sentence/
Criminal, why you still talkin the battle's fuckin ended/
You couldn't take an ether if it sounded unconvincin/
ShawnDaDon, nigga suckin dicks of all his henchmen/
Here little nigga i'll relinquish your lynchin/
It'll come later hater your life's within inches/
Nigga your shit is bout as heavy as bamboo benches/
I'm duckin explosions, in lyrical trenches/
Then I slit your throat just to say I 'cut the tension'/
Nigga not to mention, the people see superior/
This is like velvet goin against leather interior/
Water Vs Fire, and a Pinto and a Jaguar/
Ferrari and mini van, lower vs fuckin highher/
Go vs Pause, a deathly verse 'gainst a clause/
And guess who is the Nas, you're the Bow Wow of it all/
Ha haaa, so i'ma end it none of you niggas stop me/
Buddha givin enlightenment, Mad Writer and Rodknee...

FUCK YA'LL.....I go IN on these bitches man!

CriminalThoughtz · 07-31-2009, 10:42 PM

get some jugdes in this mothefucka.....i mean real jugdes....in my opinion it was a good battle everybody did their own thing.

ShawnDaDon · 07-31-2009, 10:56 PM

yeaah man get some judges

mcduffee420 · 07-31-2009, 11:28 PM

judges now damnit

crack kills

outtie

M. Daddy Dollars · 08-01-2009, 07:01 AM

Rawdknee, Buddha and Madwriter >>>>>>>>>> ShawnDaDon, Criminal Thoughtz and McDuffee

Just being honest. They all went in pretty hard.

They get my vote.

CriminalThoughtz · 08-01-2009, 09:47 AM

i had beef with homie but if u say 'u being honest'......well i appreciate ur opinion.....thankz for replyin anyways

mcduffee420 · 08-01-2009, 12:18 PM

1-0 for them

Young Mic · 08-01-2009, 03:15 PM

ShawnDaDon repped. He's the "youngest" and most active in the Battles section. Shame on you vets!

CriminalThoughtz · 08-01-2009, 03:43 PM

so who u votin for

GayStepBro · 08-02-2009, 11:59 AM

i gotta say that rodknee mad and buddah were the best, but great job to everryone guys :)

CriminalThoughtz1 · 09-02-2009, 06:02 PM

CriminalThoughtz

CriminalThoughtz · 09-02-2009, 11:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CriminalThoughtz1

i post this to let everyboy know about the fraud that uses my name (CriminalThoughtz) on this site, i must expose him cause the fool is damaging my name and i dont want someone coming up to me thinking that him or vice versa, my name has a meaning and a purpose, it means more than what it states. Beware of the fraud/fake/copycat.

plis somebody help this guy....his 'thoughtz' are goin 'bizarre'.

07-31-2009, 12:56 PM	#1
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	ShawnDaDon, Criminal Thoughtz, Mcduffe vs Rodknee Madwriter and Buddah ShawnDaDon, Criminal Thoughtz, Mcduffe vs Rodknee Madwriter and Buddah re up first verse form da kid shawndadon gonna drop in a few minutes __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

07-31-2009, 01:13 PM	#2
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	ill let off da first shot cuz i aint scared these dudes is like a kid widout school supplies yall unprepared hip hops my cave so welcome to my lair have ya baby moms runnin her fingas through my hair that was just the introduction let me get to the beef ima drop rodknee and start kickin in his teeth how these dudes hard wen shots pop off they run to da police and buddah ether me please and the only chance had of winnin is madwriter and i jus infected him wid my diesease my rhymes is like aids dey infect and kill pull out my sword and slash blood spills rap circles round these dudes have them dizzy off my skills betta go find a ghost writer on ebay and copy evrything he say but that might be to riskay cuz im da ghostwriter and here is da verse ill give you rodknee "man fuck shawn he is my son i fucked his mom widout a condom on" Buddah " ill smoke his ass like da blunt im tokin have his moms chokin on da dick she is deep throatin" and mad i aint gotta right nuttin for him he got some fire so i only gotta help his friends __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

07-31-2009, 01:24 PM	#4
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	The last time Me n Mad collaborated we brought nothin' but heat, This time 'round we're more hated, but preffered to than Duffee. Everyday I'm on your Brain, You think of me everytime you breath Your disses are some corny shit, I'ma start calling you Corned beef, And ShawnDaDon is Parmesan, more cheese in your rhymes than on your Wanking palm Buddha came through and Ethered the fucking both of ya, Next on the list is for Rawdknee to be chocking ya. Who the fuck is this 'Criminal', thinking He commits Crime, Only shit you're guilty of is not being able to write a Rhyme. Your popularity is in Decline, You should take this as a sign To stop writing all this bullshit that nobody would think of buyin, Three fucking amigo's without an ounce of Talent between them all, Always Crawl, Back with more of that bullshit for us to tear and Maul. MotherFockers!! __________________ Put me in you

07-31-2009, 03:03 PM	#6
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	aiight man waitin on criminal and madwriter __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

07-31-2009, 10:56 PM	#10
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	yeaah man get some judges __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

07-31-2009, 01:17 PM	#3
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	Its body, mind but i heard you lost your mentallity/ schitzoprenic against mankind the way hell rell be/ Delusional mind gradually climbing to another level/ your split personallity shining wonderin when to let go/ how do you contrast the fact you straight alpahabet/ abc rhymes un-relaxed fuck give up renounce in check/ me dadon n criminal thoughts came to cause a disaster/ we run dis like don won and kill you slowly like we cancer/

07-31-2009, 02:55 PM	#5
Buddha Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 37 Repped: 9 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Which one of these three stooges should I destroy first?/ Regardless of the order, your destination is still the hearse/ One warning shot at ya crowd, watch you all disperse/ Shawn, Criminal and Ms. Duff, I'm havin a tough time decidin who the worse/ Maybe I'll decide when I come through and rock your venue/ One third of you crew sound like something off the dollar menu/ It's dangerous talking to me in a tone containin anguish/ I'm handin out revenge like it's the main dish/ Fuck it, I'm sitting here having Criminal Thoughts/ Thinkin about giving this nigga some subliminal shots/ Or just given him some of what I got/ In this barrel, just bust, no talk/ I'll leave Shawn Da Pawn alone/ Because frankly nobody even knows he exists/ And he poses about a 1% threat to my throne/ I don't even deem him worthy of a diss/

07-31-2009, 06:37 PM	#7
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	well get real and sincere jugdes not dickridin jugdes..... i m all about artistic shit /so ama paint a masterpiece/ my enery is solar/ y ll niggas need double AA baterries/ get a doc and a collar im watch out with those allergies/ told u see? now i understand why writer was so mad at me/ but maddy is 'alright' ...dem other 2 are just pathetic/ y'll rhyming don lie...and lyrically im way more athetic/ i chop your hands and feet/ start runnin N say hello To God for Me/ im vicious with these punches/i fixin to eat my lunches/ im cat-teachin these mouses/im all black throwin y'll roses/ im not even shoutin out names since der not n important topic/ look bitch...yea you...rodknee..get on u knee N rock this/ these dudes r actin up/got main roles in movies just suckn cock/ so buckle up....ur human beings!!!i made of steel like robocop!!!!/ and this other nigga well u r the weakest link..ahhh u need a hint? well i l give u one.... got the name of a fat dude....so u r not hot..but u ll need a hat/ im here feedin u lactose...u too slow dawg.. cant run in my track/ i got a 'patriotic' offense that ll doubt ur 'defense' can guard' i ll give y'll a job application/ bet under the gender section/ y ll put a question mark.

07-31-2009, 06:57 PM	#8
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,376 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 153 Times in 97 Posts	ShawnDaDon, why the fuck you talkin bitch you better lay low/ The closest you ever came to a gun was fuckin Halo/ I'm fa-tal, lyrically kill you if Rodknee say so/ You're easy to manipulate, I call your brain some playdough/ Talkin bout 45s, actin jive and talkin high/ Aim over Bonnie's back and fuck her while I start shootin Clyde/ Relentless, beat your ass until you look defenseless/ Smack you snatch your chain just because you're lookin trenchant/ Mcduffee you're pathetic of an MC you are remnants/ Pretendin, i'll choke your fuckin ass with your own pendant/ Sendin, waves of pain while i'm fuckin ventin/ I ain't got no time to wait I ain't no damn attendant!/ Sliced up like we're fencin, beggin for your repentance/ Bleedin from the throat and screamin weezin for a sentence/ Criminal, why you still talkin the battle's fuckin ended/ You couldn't take an ether if it sounded unconvincin/ ShawnDaDon, nigga suckin dicks of all his henchmen/ Here little nigga i'll relinquish your lynchin/ It'll come later hater your life's within inches/ Nigga your shit is bout as heavy as bamboo benches/ I'm duckin explosions, in lyrical trenches/ Then I slit your throat just to say I 'cut the tension'/ Nigga not to mention, the people see superior/ This is like velvet goin against leather interior/ Water Vs Fire, and a Pinto and a Jaguar/ Ferrari and mini van, lower vs fuckin highher/ Go vs Pause, a deathly verse 'gainst a clause/ And guess who is the Nas, you're the Bow Wow of it all/ Ha haaa, so i'ma end it none of you niggas stop me/ Buddha givin enlightenment, Mad Writer and Rodknee... FUCK YA'LL.....I go IN on these bitches man!

07-31-2009, 10:42 PM	#9
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	get some jugdes in this mothefucka.....i mean real jugdes....in my opinion it was a good battle everybody did their own thing.

07-31-2009, 11:28 PM	#11
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	judges now damnit crack kills outtie

08-01-2009, 07:01 AM	#12
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 1,871 Repped: 317 Repped 203 Times in 93 Posts Neg Reps: 265 Neg Repped at 120 Times in 67 Posts	Rawdknee, Buddha and Madwriter >>>>>>>>>> ShawnDaDon, Criminal Thoughtz and McDuffee Just being honest. They all went in pretty hard. They get my vote. __________________ "i want 50 cents penis in my chinese-malaysian butthol" -Lil Brizzle

08-01-2009, 09:47 AM	#13
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	i had beef with homie but if u say 'u being honest'......well i appreciate ur opinion.....thankz for replyin anyways

08-01-2009, 12:18 PM	#14
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	1-0 for them

08-01-2009, 03:15 PM	#15
Young Mic 9 Elements Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Tbilisi Posts: 1,091 Repped: 181 Repped 175 Times in 84 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 23 Times in 15 Posts	ShawnDaDon repped. He's the "youngest" and most active in the Battles section. Shame on you vets! __________________ myspace.com/youngmiconline

08-01-2009, 03:43 PM	#16
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	so who u votin for

08-02-2009, 11:59 AM	#17
GayStepBro Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: in jeffs basement Posts: 71 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	i gotta say that rodknee mad and buddah were the best, but great job to everryone guys :)

09-02-2009, 06:02 PM	#18
CriminalThoughtz1 Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Brooklyn Posts: 13 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Am The Real CriminalThoughtz CriminalThoughtz Last edited by CriminalThoughtz1; 09-03-2009 at 11:04 PM.

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