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Young Gunna
Join Date: Jul 2005
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5-8 Bars(Both Gotta drop the same amount so agree on it before you write)
Due 3 Days After Check Ins Judges Have To Be Agreed By Both Battlers If Sum1 No Shows Ill find A Replacement And if Not Youll Just Advance No Biting and All That PM Ya Verses If You Dont Wanna Post First
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Check..5 bars..
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![]() "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT |
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Uppin 4 Freedom...come on boy..
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![]() "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: London
Posts: 924
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My bad been away all weekend
Good luck virus |
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
Join Date: Nov 2006
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no worries fam just drop ya verse..
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Young Gunna
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: T Dot
Posts: 11,079
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yo freedom drop a 5 bar verse to match virus's,he sent me his already so just post yours and ill post his or just pm it to me
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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yo i wanna drop a 8 bar verse....virus send a few more lines to young gunna and thenillpost my verse up
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
Join Date: Nov 2006
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the fuck we doin 8 bars in round 1 for?? I sent my shit in the first day these threads was up, now i gotta edit the shit?
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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its only 16 lines....thats a usual battle rap length
I didnt read gunnas post so i thought we was doin 8 bars...i done my shit Just think of it as more shit to diss me with |
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
Join Date: Nov 2006
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aight im done, drop ya shit..and if Gunna dont drop mine, I will. Best of luck.
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: London
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Why you so hateful? You should be grateful that my style made you You tried to make a name for yourself but the swine flu upstaged you You’re no avian flu, fuck this Scandinavian dude, I will defeat you It’s like you got hit by a Wutang CD the way Chambers beat you And the tracks you sing?….you’ll never make that wack shit spin Coz ya lines are more stretched then a fat chicks skin I see a lot of hate signs submerged in a verse of played rhymes You got the nerve to claim ‘forever undefeated’ when you’ve lost eight times This battle is like a lion versus an antelope Meaning…. How you gonna win…….. when you’re the virus and im the antidote This man is broke, a joke with nothing but wack rhymes So I’ll leave his life like his location……..just a flat line Expect to see…me cut his limbs off like leprosy I already got a shot in my arm so aint no way this virus is affecting me Your outrageous, viruses are ‘contagious’ you know that shit is true So you’ll never be the best…. …….coz everyone will still be as sick as you!!! |
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Young Gunna
Join Date: Jul 2005
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Virus's Verse
I'll break 'a knee/Annie' and leave u in an 'orphanage school'..
..i represent skills in #'s and letters.. '4 n 2 u/foreign to you'.. ..Go play, usin cheap pregnancy tests..ya 'flows fake'.. ..This Londoner good? He's 6 letters off from 'O.K.'!!.. ..I'm Canadian, might be writing @ home in Regina.. ..out Afghanistan..tryna run my country when YOURS is VAGINA??.. He's got 'no class', his writtens 'revisional'.. ..Like James Bond or Voldemort..his tough British persona is FICTIONAL.. 'Develop sickness', this 'dev-ill' dipped his hands into hell.. I'll throw him so far back 'over C/oversea' that he'll land @ an 'L'.. We can all see this girl's gay, sippin on Earl Grey.. ..I take more 'shots @ Freedom' than 'James Earl Ray'.. ..Wack n sour, beaten brutally, & lackin power.. ..8 bars? he 'cant be found past 7'..like Happy Hour.. ..Okay, you're rough; bleedin, its almost enough readin'.. The only 'Lincoln' i see is the vehicle, so FUCK FREEDOM..
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Join Date: May 2006
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- is he really Scandinavian? Did Lotus beat him clean, or was there some controversy? Is losing to Lotus such a bad thing that this is a brutal diss? I don't get it. Other than that, ok. - I know this guy usually has weirdly stretched lines but you know it's tough times when you not only use one of the most generic "stretched lines" concepts ever, but your lines are also more stretched than your opponent's in this battle. - fair enough. Would be a lot tougher if he didn't openly admit he has those losses...or if you actually presented this information in a creative way. - "meaning"??? Don't see the connection between lions/antelopes & viruses/antidotes. Probably because there isn't one beyond elementary penmanship. - actually his "Location" denotes ellipses which might be more accurately described as "dot, dot, dot". A flatline looks like "_______". - amputation can be a response to leprosy but your set-up really makes little sense, if any. Did you get shot in the arm? I'm just trying to work out what double meaning there is, what wordplay or flip etc?? Probably none again though, right? You may as well have just said, "you're a virus...I'm immune to" & saved yourself space. - so he will never be the "best", but he will be on par with the "best"? That's kinda bordering on a compliment lawlawlawl. Quote:
- if you'd used the set-up to...well, set up the punchline...then this could have been better. Even though letter concepts aren't up to much. - weird. Just weird. - basic. Conceptually underdeveloped. - back over C...like, towards Z? Numbers & letters wordplay need to be really creative to be good, or at least be backed by a strong set-up to be tolerable. This lacked. A lot. - finally! Irrelevant set-up again, but you managed a punch with one more layer than any other so far. - think that punch might be pretty inaccurate. Confusion never indicates a good line. Although you were right to mock the bars fiasco. - again straightforward punches like this require some sort of set-up to help them out. You could remove at least 6 of your set-ups & it would make no difference to your verse beyond disrupting the rhyme scheme. Doesn't that seem like a waste? After reading Mick Hucknall's verse I was sure AIDS would win. And I'm still sure AIDS will vanquish him in real life, but this online battle's a lot closer. Faggot's best line revolved around him saying that Lotus beat Virus. His best constructed couplet revolved around him saying that swine flu is superior. This combination is problematic in itself. The "forever undefeated" angle has big potential but none of it was realised. Virus had his MLK line, which was the best line of the battle. His second best was his closer & it was a very similar punch, with less relevancy. A lot of dubious "wordplay" in here. To have such a clown of an opponent, & fail to really hit him cleanly more than once is poor but it's still one more clean hit than was thrown his way. Virus should win this. But I'm sure there will be a lot of instant messaging & generally an abundance of tears. |
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
Join Date: Nov 2006
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^^ lmfaoooooooo fair enough. Who doesn't love this guy?? ^^^^. Pretty accurate feedback, on my part at least that's all I feel I can respectfully comment on. Thanks Sho.
Can we get some more deliberations? Much appreciated.
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***** I'm Me
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U NiGGAS BOTH WACK AS FUCK . NOBODY WINS
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
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^^ okay sweet i'll keep that in mind. Somebody wanna judge?? pweaaaaaase =)
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fre3dom definately got this round..but u never know cuz virus drop some shit too..personally both drop some hot shit but like i said.
fre3dom had more creativity and silly lines lol. virus had methaphors but not as strong as fre3dom's oooo i forgot....this is my opinion.. |
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Wordsmith
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am I allowed to vote?
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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whats the votes then...idunno who has what
i dont mind if blizzy votes |
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The alias is Protege
Join Date: May 2006
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hmm... i hate both of you. but i honestly feel freedom got this. virus seemed to drop half ass on this, idk if he underestimated freedom or what, but his shit seemed effortless. freedom had enough punches to easily take this.
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
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I just hurt criminal's feelings..so counting his vote would be a little odd..and i donno if u got beef with protege freedom but we've been back and forth hella times..in a perfect world, neither of them would have a say..especially when criminal is wack as fuck and protogay's not much better...but hey..I'm not going to be one of those pussy's that cries because people disagree with him..so it's up to how you want to do it..or we'll leave it up to someone more respected like YoungGunna or Sho, Chambers etc to decide if their votes should count and furthermore who won. Can we please get some more votes? And thanks to all for your opinions..even those I don't agree with.
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The alias is Protege
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LoL dude
me> you. im sure if i voted for u, u wouldn't of cared. and i've had beef with both you, and honestly I hate freedom mroe then you. but his verse> your verse. i call em as i see em.
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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Yo i feel u virus...i have no idea who criminal is...i dunno bout u makin him mad...was it before or after the vote? Your gonna have to fill me in on whats happened
And with the protege vote...LOL do we have beef? we had that massive battle in the freestyle section...and we pretty much go back and forth 24/7...we dont like eachother so hes the last person i would have thought would vote for me...so i would count his...not sure bout criminals based on what you said Oh and just so you know me and shogun have beef, weve been going backand forth forever...but you can count his vote...if he did vote if u want...i dont really carebout this that much tbh but I dont mind fam...as we both said neither of us spent much time on our verses... |
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Join Date: Jul 2009
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second im just being honest u spit good shit but dude got you.. just because he had more relevant lines than u (no takin anything from u) u had some good lines but it seems that u r one of those people that dont like when things dont go your way...thats to bad cuz fuckin with me it aint gonna go your way so "let it go".... third....it was only my opinion...not interested in votin'....but definately dude got u fair and square...get over it..and get over it quick cuz u aint gonna be ready for the secod round. |
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Join Date: Jul 2009
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he expressed his opinion on my thread....i respect everybodys opinion so i have not hard feelin towards anybody ( this is a rap forum for god sake). apparently the nigga i was beefin with said some shit bout him..then he went i said some irrelevant shit somethin like "bakin cookies and havin a dinner date".(talkin bout me)..so my reply was..."i like cookies but i eat my dinner alone"....now hes sayin he hurt my feelin....which is again..false. ttruth is... i felt u took the first round..he could take the second we ll see..but now i think he is overreactin' but anyways i neva assume my opinion would be counted as a vote so im good.. facts.... don believe me...check for yourself in the thread..up in the freestyle section. |
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