LastRealNigga Vs. Mcduffee

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-08-2009, 02:28 PM

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Post Verse By Tonight
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I'll Post My Verse Before Tonight.

mcduffee420 · 03-08-2009, 05:00 PM

carefully prepare for the battle that's less complex/
while i gratefully share the ammo and check your reflex/
ill come up behind rob and take a handful/
run up squeeze the trigger and leave your broken face dismantled/
this is clearly a death wish in the fact you wanna go against/
ill create a bloodbath in the sense of a battle you'll fold then repent/
jesus wont save you so save your begging for me /
im mcduffee deaths angel and now your soul is mine as i smoke you like an 8th just like the boss in me/
ricky ross never flossed your officer deputized in his name of honor/
Im the real boss the don check it and ask your mother about your father/
reason im asking is cuz it could be/
I fucked her in 92' for 10 bucks at the public beach/
I heard she had a public clit/
so i asked if she had it and she gave it as her pussy sucked my fat fucking dick/
clearly your running around screaming no homo/
reason i would know like rodknneeee you keep squezzing eachothers oh no-nos/
man im not even trying to make fun/
but a wannabe crip like you dont have the cojones to be big pun/
a wanna be bitch like you/
is only a wanna be gangsta with a wanksta attitude....junk/

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-08-2009, 05:32 PM

Shit you dropped quick.... i thought you'd drop later... i'll start working on my verse right now... my bad niggga..

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-08-2009, 07:14 PM

!.Lets Put This Nigga To Rest.!

This Is Murder ... Red Rum.. Make You My Son, It's Fun.. [Dial 911]
Just Look At This Nigga... He's A Weed Smokin' Bum! [Look At His Picture!!]
By The Way Nigga It Don't Make A Diff, I Spit That Piff..
You On The 'Road To Success' & Heading Straight For A Cliff!!
I'm Bringing That Hell Sir... Put Your Head Under The Propeller..
This Nigga "Bound To Lose" Like He's "Strapped To Failure"!!
Dude's A Disgrace, Treat Him Like Paper, Because Him I'll Erase..
I'll Give Ya Bars 5 Stars... Circling Around The Fuckin' Face!!
I Aint Even Mad, It's Kinda Sad That I Gotta Serve This Fag..
Cause The Only 'Duff He [Duffee]' See Is When He's In The Dufflebag!!
Not "Write N Funny [Writin' Funny]", Cause You Lost Dumb Dummy..
He Got No Money... & I'll Drop You Phat[Fat], Likea Obese Chicks Tummy..!! [Done???]
It's Easily To Realize I'm Better Than You... You Just Nothing But Food..
So Imma Do Duff Like Aaron Did Hilary [Duff], Find Something Better To Do..!! [Now I'm Done]/[NO HOMO]..

*Last Line, Aaron Carter Left Hilary Duff For Lindsay Lohan Back In The Day..

R.I.P.

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-08-2009, 09:17 PM

Mmm. I'll give you honesty. This battle was pretty weak. Mcduffee, I don't want to be a hater but I rly dont think rap is your thing, or, better said, you would need to work on it rly hard, for a long time.

LastRealNigga is clearly more experienced, and he knows how to write a battle rap, whereas mcduffee kinda just hurled random insults.

LastRealNigga some of the punches had good ideas behind them, but could have been pulled off or worded way better, others sounded good at first, but when you thought about it, wasnt that great, an example.

"This Nigga "Bound To Lose" Like He's "Strapped To Failure"!!"

^^ when I saw the first part of this i expected it to be sick, but the second part, although tied in nicely to fit with the wordplay, doesnt make sense. You're saying he's bound to lose like hes strapped to failure..what would it mean to be strapped to failure? its not a real thing..if you know what I mean..I feel like im not articulating this properly.

Sometimes it got wordy "dumb dumby" <---- thats just corny b.

The duffhe see wordplay was just wack. But on the real, that last line hit real hard. You went in on that one, I liked it.

This probably sounded way harsher than I intended, Im just trying to give you some constructive criticism, kuz LastRealNigga, you're on the right track. And in no way do i intend to imply im a perfect emcee.

Now, to the business.

Multies: LRN...duffee rly didnt have much
Creativity: LRN...saying shit about his mom is lame duff
Punches: LRN..his were actual punches, he wasnt just randomly insulting
Wordplay: LRN..some was wack. The last line bodied anything duff had tho, if u wanna call it w/p.
O/A: LRN

Easy, but the battle could have been way better. Keep Working, both of you.

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-08-2009, 09:26 PM

^good looks Virus... thats a real vote.

1-0 (Me)..... Virus you mind if i PM you when i'm able to (cause im a newbie/not enough post)... i wanna ask you some things, of what i should do bettter....

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-08-2009, 09:29 PM

Go ahead man, I'll do w/e I can to help you out.

mcduffee420 · 03-08-2009, 09:30 PM

cool virus at least you gave some good input

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-08-2009, 09:30 PM

alright no doubt...

Upping for votes!

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-09-2009, 01:21 PM

upping for votes.

Blizzy · 03-09-2009, 02:54 PM

What wins battles fore me is...
-Delivery
-Meta's/Punches

LRN had the better of the 2....mcduffee you need to work on your material alot more than you do....don't just type somethin up in 10 minutes and think its good....take your your time tryna find that better rhyme or even pull out a few multi's mate...

Flow-LRN
Punches-LRN
Meta's-LRN
Personal's-LRN (had some nameplay)
Multi's-Tie (neither of you had one multi i think)

Overall-LRN....gotta agree with Virus on sayin it was a weak battle....

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-09-2009, 05:31 PM

2-0 (me)... upping for ko.

Witty Qwan · 03-09-2009, 09:39 PM

LastRealNigga easy...no need for catz, viirus sumed it up good

LastREALniGGa08 · 03-09-2009, 10:30 PM

^alright good looks..

3-0 (ko), good battle... & thanks for voting & all the feed & helping out..

good shit.

TheRealProtege · 03-11-2009, 07:20 PM

you already know who my vote goes 2

03-08-2009, 02:28 PM	#1
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	LastRealNigga Vs. Mcduffee LastRealNigga Vs. Mcduffee 12-16 Lines Post Verse By Tonight Use Brackets To Vote [Thank You] I'll Post My Verse Before Tonight.

03-08-2009, 05:32 PM	#3
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Shit you dropped quick.... i thought you'd drop later... i'll start working on my verse right now... my bad niggga.. __________________ Text Records: 5-0 [Last Murder: Vince] [2 KO][2 TKO]

03-08-2009, 07:14 PM	#4
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	!.Lets Put This Nigga To Rest.! This Is Murder ... Red Rum.. Make You My Son, It's Fun.. [Dial 911] Just Look At This Nigga... He's A Weed Smokin' Bum! [Look At His Picture!!] By The Way Nigga It Don't Make A Diff, I Spit That Piff.. You On The 'Road To Success' & Heading Straight For A Cliff!! I'm Bringing That Hell Sir... Put Your Head Under The Propeller.. This Nigga "Bound To Lose" Like He's "Strapped To Failure"!! Dude's A Disgrace, Treat Him Like Paper, Because Him I'll Erase.. I'll Give Ya Bars 5 Stars... Circling Around The Fuckin' Face!! I Aint Even Mad, It's Kinda Sad That I Gotta Serve This Fag.. Cause The Only 'Duff He [Duffee]' See Is When He's In The Dufflebag!! Not "Write N Funny [Writin' Funny]", Cause You Lost Dumb Dummy.. He Got No Money... & I'll Drop You Phat[Fat], Likea Obese Chicks Tummy..!! [Done???] It's Easily To Realize I'm Better Than You... You Just Nothing But Food.. So Imma Do Duff Like Aaron Did Hilary [Duff], Find Something Better To Do..!! [Now I'm Done]/[NO HOMO].. Last Line, Aaron Carter Left Hilary Duff For Lindsay Lohan Back In The Day.. R.I.P.* __________________ Text Records: 5-0 [Last Murder: Vince] [2 KO][2 TKO]

03-08-2009, 09:17 PM	#5
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	Mmm. I'll give you honesty. This battle was pretty weak. Mcduffee, I don't want to be a hater but I rly dont think rap is your thing, or, better said, you would need to work on it rly hard, for a long time. LastRealNigga is clearly more experienced, and he knows how to write a battle rap, whereas mcduffee kinda just hurled random insults. LastRealNigga some of the punches had good ideas behind them, but could have been pulled off or worded way better, others sounded good at first, but when you thought about it, wasnt that great, an example. "This Nigga "Bound To Lose" Like He's "Strapped To Failure"!!" ^^ when I saw the first part of this i expected it to be sick, but the second part, although tied in nicely to fit with the wordplay, doesnt make sense. You're saying he's bound to lose like hes strapped to failure..what would it mean to be strapped to failure? its not a real thing..if you know what I mean..I feel like im not articulating this properly. Sometimes it got wordy "dumb dumby" <---- thats just corny b. The duffhe see wordplay was just wack. But on the real, that last line hit real hard. You went in on that one, I liked it. This probably sounded way harsher than I intended, Im just trying to give you some constructive criticism, kuz LastRealNigga, you're on the right track. And in no way do i intend to imply im a perfect emcee. Now, to the business. Multies: LRN...duffee rly didnt have much Creativity: LRN...saying shit about his mom is lame duff Punches: LRN..his were actual punches, he wasnt just randomly insulting Wordplay: LRN..some was wack. The last line bodied anything duff had tho, if u wanna call it w/p. O/A: LRN Easy, but the battle could have been way better. Keep Working, both of you. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-08-2009, 09:26 PM	#6
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	^good looks Virus... thats a real vote. 1-0 (Me)..... Virus you mind if i PM you when i'm able to (cause im a newbie/not enough post)... i wanna ask you some things, of what i should do bettter.... __________________ Text Records: 5-0 [Last Murder: Vince] [2 KO][2 TKO]

03-08-2009, 05:00 PM	#2
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	carefully prepare for the battle that's less complex/ while i gratefully share the ammo and check your reflex/ ill come up behind rob and take a handful/ run up squeeze the trigger and leave your broken face dismantled/ this is clearly a death wish in the fact you wanna go against/ ill create a bloodbath in the sense of a battle you'll fold then repent/ jesus wont save you so save your begging for me / im mcduffee deaths angel and now your soul is mine as i smoke you like an 8th just like the boss in me/ ricky ross never flossed your officer deputized in his name of honor/ Im the real boss the don check it and ask your mother about your father/ reason im asking is cuz it could be/ I fucked her in 92' for 10 bucks at the public beach/ I heard she had a public clit/ so i asked if she had it and she gave it as her pussy sucked my fat fucking dick/ clearly your running around screaming no homo/ reason i would know like rodknneeee you keep squezzing eachothers oh no-nos/ man im not even trying to make fun/ but a wannabe crip like you dont have the cojones to be big pun/ a wanna be bitch like you/ is only a wanna be gangsta with a wanksta attitude....junk/

03-08-2009, 09:29 PM	#7
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	Go ahead man, I'll do w/e I can to help you out. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-08-2009, 09:30 PM	#8
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	cool virus at least you gave some good input

03-08-2009, 09:30 PM	#9
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	alright no doubt... Upping for votes! __________________ Text Records: 5-0 [Last Murder: Vince] [2 KO][2 TKO]

03-09-2009, 01:21 PM	#10
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	upping for votes. __________________ Text Records: 5-0 [Last Murder: Vince] [2 KO][2 TKO]

03-09-2009, 02:54 PM	#11
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	What wins battles fore me is... -Delivery -Meta's/Punches LRN had the better of the 2....mcduffee you need to work on your material alot more than you do....don't just type somethin up in 10 minutes and think its good....take your your time tryna find that better rhyme or even pull out a few multi's mate... Flow-LRN Punches-LRN Meta's-LRN Personal's-LRN (had some nameplay) Multi's-Tie (neither of you had one multi i think) Overall-LRN....gotta agree with Virus on sayin it was a weak battle.... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

03-09-2009, 05:31 PM	#12
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	2-0 (me)... upping for ko. __________________ Text Records: 5-0 [Last Murder: Vince] [2 KO][2 TKO]

03-09-2009, 09:39 PM	#13
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,041 Repped: 155 Repped 472 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 80 Times in 74 Posts	LastRealNigga easy...no need for catz, viirus sumed it up good

03-09-2009, 10:30 PM	#14
LastREALniGGa08 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: NYC Posts: 143 Repped: 2 Repped 18 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	^alright good looks.. 3-0 (ko), good battle... & thanks for voting & all the feed & helping out.. good shit. __________________ Text Records: 5-0 [Last Murder: Vince] [2 KO][2 TKO]

03-11-2009, 07:20 PM	#15
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 1,962 Repped: 139 Repped 582 Times in 167 Posts Neg Reps: 135 Neg Repped at 78 Times in 67 Posts	you already know who my vote goes 2 __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

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