ThA ViiRu5 vs. Unbreakable

ThA ViiRu5 · 11-05-2008, 08:42 PM

Okay bitch boy this is the big leagues.

6-8 bars.
No votes from dickriders/haters
No recycling
No feeding
No biting
No Swaying

Due by 12:01 a.m. Friday morning. So basically Thursday night. Don't back out.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-05-2008, 09:06 PM

Unbreakable All Cats.. Good Battle Though

ThA ViiRu5 · 11-05-2008, 09:18 PM

^^ we'll see if he can hold his own.

Check in.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-05-2008, 09:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThA ViiRu5

^^ we'll see if he can hold his own.

Check in.

Dudes Wack.. This Is No Competition.

I Bodied You Though.

ThA ViiRu5 · 11-05-2008, 11:00 PM

This is the big leagues....

Poor kid.. I eat rappers like swordfish; You can attempt or, shit...
Prolly should forfeit...neg me all u want..my rep is still bigger than yours is...
I'll use yu as my chow toy...how coy, I take away thou joy..
I'll 'give u da Virus' best, da Wild West? I'm better, you 'mad-cow'boy??*
But enough of vicious cattle.. i'm the warning snake..you missed the rattle..
I should 'take a break' kuz clearly you're 'unable' in this battle.. **
we kno my 'bars' are 'above' yours, we dont need to see a graph..
your rhymes are weak and ass, I'm to you as you're to J...everytime you speak I laugh..***
I'll leave the gun smokin..........................your speech better left unspoken..
Nerves..battling me he's past-tense.......................but still not 'able' to be 'UnBroken'..****
Ill show this fucker his tomb....................this sucker is doomed
get hit w/ Brass Knuckles.......u'll need more than 1 of Nelly's band-aids to cover the wound..*****
You've faced an early cost....Bitch couldnt be 'on the grind' as a skater in hurley tops..
And couldnt write his raps 'on point' scrawling on the emo wrists of the little girl that lost.

******

*His location say Wild West..im sayin "You mad?" to the cowboy..one of his favourite phrases...alternatively, he'd be the mad-cow (disease) boy if i "gave him the virus"

** Take the "break" from his name...he'd be "Unable"...true of his abilities "in this battle"

*** J Souljah:

Quote:

im glad you count the minutes im away

Unbreakable:

Quote:

lMAO^^^^^^^^

J Souljah:

Quote:

homo......

Unbreakable:

Quote:

LmAo...^^^^

J Souljah:

Quote:

....dont u have a job or somethin'....or do u donate to sperm bankz 4 ya money?....

Unbreakable:

Quote:

hahahahhahaa

....and i got dickriders???

**** In past tense "Unbreak" would be "UnBroken", and i shifted the position of "able"......as well, i was sayign hed be so nervous he'd go beyond (past) tense.

***** He bit off Nelly lmaoaoaoaoaoaaoaoaoaoaoooooooo

****** he wrote a super fuckin emo free called "little girl lost" (fruity ass nigga

)im saying he's the little girl and he just lost...plus, if he wrote his rap on an emo girls wrist, she'd cut them..meaning her wrists and therefore his rap would be on (the) point.

^^^^^^^^^^^^ For the dumbies. All of them are petty easy to get and if you didn't get them you're a fuck retard. I just wanted to make absoloutly sure everyone knew what I meant before they voted. Let's get this bitch's verse in.

J~Souljah · 11-06-2008, 12:29 AM

lol how'd i know i'd see my name in this...

good shit though...*waits for unbreakable*

TheRealProtege · 11-06-2008, 03:44 AM

lol see pbs usual dickriding going on =)

well ill try to do mah shit right now but i gotta study for mah midterm tomorrow so idk if ima finish, if i dont ill post it tomorrow after school.

TheRealProtege · 11-06-2008, 04:25 AM

....LoL........

ayo ya cant fuck wit spark, king or J-Soulja
so you want it wit me? naw bitch, its game ova
mah rhymes XXL, so ya diggin the source
mah reps like mah dick, definitely bigga than yours

haha naww.. its really too easy though dawg..
what the fucks up with your verse? think cuz ya break mah name
apart that it makes it wordplaY? LmAO your a clown homeboy
and yo big ups to nellys new cd, i mean thats where i get all mah
lines from... riiiiiight? haha

iits whatever... let me dispose of this bitch...

If I were a bitch? wtf..?
..man just listen..

know its tough for rappers nowdays N life is hard too
but ya mothers pussy dont even stretch as far as ya bars do
im bout dat BIG PICTURE.. yuh still fuckin wit cartoons
..yeah people hear you n laugh
me im throwin spears n some jabs
i mean this guys a queer n a fag
.. true they be two in the same..
actin like he spit? naw he aint even new to tha game*
took ya offer, cuz noones wants ta battle you dude
this a race for presidents, im obama.. N mccain? well thatll be u
so dont talk like we close
peeped ya shit.. n see yuh stalkin' mah post
now id say something bout ya drops but who wants 2 talk about those?
..now ya coffin has closed..
so ill take virus, N infect tha nation
but fuck man, really idk what was longer ur verse or your EXPLANATIONS
yeah he a virus, but he aint ill, his mic game has common powers
wit a style so plane, terrorist coulda used it to bomb the towers

*dudes in a thread askn mad questions like a homo n shit

easy 15 minutes.

Witty Qwan · 11-06-2008, 07:25 AM

lol at u saying "fruity ass nigga"

i'll assume im not albe to vote

yall should get votes in...hopefully by 09...lol, 1 reason i see no point in text battling (on this site)...sections dead

ThA ViiRu5 · 11-06-2008, 09:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

....LoL........

ayo ya cant fuck wit spark, king or J-Soulja
so you want it wit me? naw bitch, its game ova
mah rhymes XXL, so ya diggin the source
mah reps like mah dick, definitely bigga than yours

haha naww.. its really too easy though dawg..
what the fucks up with your verse? think cuz ya break mah name
apart that it makes it wordplaY? LmAO your a clown homeboy
and yo big ups to nellys new cd, i mean thats where i get all mah
lines from... riiiiiight? haha

iits whatever... let me dispose of this bitch...

If I were a bitch? wtf..?
..man just listen..

know its tough for rappers nowdays N life is hard too
but ya mothers pussy dont even stretch as far as ya bars do
im bout dat BIG PICTURE.. yuh still fuckin wit cartoons
..yeah people hear you n laugh
me im throwin spears n some jabs
i mean this guys a queer n a fag
.. true they be two in the same..
actin like he spit? naw he aint even new to tha game*
took ya offer, cuz noones wants ta battle you dude
this a race for presidents, im obama.. N mccain? well thatll be u
so dont talk like we close
peeped ya shit.. n see yuh stalkin' mah post
now id say something bout ya drops but who wants 2 talk about those?
..now ya coffin has closed..
so ill take virus, N infect tha nation
but fuck man, really idk what was longer ur verse or your EXPLANATIONS
yeah he a virus, but he aint ill, his mic game has common powers
wit a style so plane, terrorist coulda used it to bomb the towers

*dudes in a thread askn mad questions like a homo n shit

easy 15 minutes.

^^ First of all that was clearly longer than 6-8 bars, but I wont d/q you. Secondly, you fed off my verse but again, i won't dq you (i aint pullin this from my ass its in the rules stated clearly at the beginning of the thread homeboy). Thirdly My rhymes are self explanatory im just making sure that every dumb fuck who reads it knows what it means so they can judge properly.

But i appreciate that you dropped and didnt pull out like a bitch. Let's get some votes in.

Witty Qwan · 11-06-2008, 10:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThA ViiRu5

^^ First of all that was clearly longer than 6-8 bars, but I wont d/q you. Secondly, you fed off my verse but again, i won't dq you (i aint pullin this from my ass its in the rules stated clearly at the beginning of the thread homeboy). Thirdly My rhymes are self explanatory im just making sure that every dumb fuck who reads it knows what it means so they can judge properly.

But i appreciate that you dropped and didnt pull out like a bitch. Let's get some votes in.

i have zero experience n text battles

but set it up fam...tired of niggas saying im scared to battle^

YoungGunna · 11-06-2008, 01:44 PM

personals-virus...he came better but both didnt come good in this category
punches-virus...easily better
multies-unbreakable...virus forced some of his so unbreakable gets dis
flow-unbreakable....lines were shorter and it flowed better
wordplay-virus....got dis easy
creativity-virus....mor original den unbreakable

overall-virus......he easily got dis

TheRealProtege · 11-06-2008, 03:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThA ViiRu5

^^ First of all that was clearly longer than 6-8 bars, but I wont d/q you. Secondly, you fed off my verse but again, i won't dq you (i aint pullin this from my ass its in the rules stated clearly at the beginning of the thread homeboy). Thirdly My rhymes are self explanatory im just making sure that every dumb fuck who reads it knows what it means so they can judge properly.

But i appreciate that you dropped and didnt pull out like a bitch. Let's get some votes in.

its actually sixteen bars, i just structured it different.

xXEMaNXx · 11-06-2008, 05:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

.
lines from... riiiiiight? haha

know its tough for rappers nowdays N life is hard too
but ya mothers pussy dont even stretch as far as ya bars do

took ya offer, cuz noones wants ta battle you dude
this a race for presidents, im obama.. N mccain? well thatll be u
so dont talk like we close
peeped ya shit.. n see yuh stalkin' mah post
now id say something bout ya drops but who wants 2 talk about those?

yeah he a virus, but he aint ill, his mic game has common powers
wit a style so plane, terrorist coulda used it to bomb the towers
[/I]

god damn those bars were flames kid. your flow was really one of the best ive seen on this site and ive read your other post and none even compare to the one you had in this thread. i say you stick to battles instead of writtin random verses.

Quote:

I'll leave the gun smokin..........................your speech better left unspoken..
Nerves..battling me he's past-tense.......................but still not 'able' to be 'UnBroken

honestly that was the only decent bar i found in your verse. really your punches just didnt hit whatsoever, its like you wrote them just to rhyme, and some were really corny. your multies for the most part were tight but were inconsistent. and some seemed forced and unwanted, you have potential though.

breakable just came easily with the superior verse. look forward to seein other battles from you.

TheRealProtege · 11-06-2008, 05:43 PM

so i guess its 1-1

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-06-2008, 06:12 PM

I Can't Vote Obviously.. But Virus Easily Got This.

Style So Plane/Plain? First Of All.. You Meant Plain But Put Plane To Make It Look Like Wordplay But Plain And The Controlled Demolition Of The WTC's Have Nothing To Do With Each other.. OMG!!! A TERRIBLE ATTEMPT @ WORDPLAY!!! ahahahah U Fail. That Seriously Is One Of The Worst Attempts At Wordplay I'd Ever Seen, Congratulations Fuckface, You Fail Again.

ThA ViiRu5 · 11-06-2008, 06:16 PM

^^ well he doesnt fail as much as his voter.

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

its actually sixteen bars, i just structured it different.

^^ may i repeat. 6-8 bars. Text battling is 1 bar= 2 lines. I'll give u credit for not knowing that if ur an audio cat or something. But still no way in hell is ur verse not too long. But as I said i shall be gracious and not disqualify you.

But smh @ ya voter

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXEMaNXx

breakable just came easily with the superior verse. look forward to seein other battles from you.

^^ You just came easily with the inferior vote. and look forward to seeing more battles? Ive been a fuckin battle rapper on this site for years and I eat shitty Mc's lke Unbreakable for lunch. my name bitch check the threads. i lost a few times but my rhymes dont lie. peep it if u dont believe me.

Witty Qwan · 11-06-2008, 06:38 PM

lmaooooo...dont get madd at the voter

no....its not one of my secret accounts...if dats wut u thinking

xDizzex · 11-06-2008, 06:39 PM

Unbreakable wins...all cats..nuff said

I just couldn't get jiggy with viirus verse..hahahahaah

shit was boring me while I was reading

Witty Qwan · 11-06-2008, 06:54 PM

lmaoooooo @ cant get jiggy with

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-06-2008, 07:02 PM

it's 1-0 Virus.. Vets Only Voting. I never Even Heard Of That Dude, All Of Sudden He Pops Up In The Rhyme Section And Votes For Un breakable? Fuck outta Here.

YoungGunna · 11-06-2008, 07:05 PM

word pistol knows whos a vet

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-06-2008, 07:08 PM

^^

Witty Qwan · 11-06-2008, 07:19 PM

techinically...its not stated n the rules...so all votes count

even the random dude, pistol banger and dizze's vote for unbreakable

so 3-1

(

on the first sentence only...not

on the second part)

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-06-2008, 07:32 PM

No. It's 1-0 ^^

11-05-2008, 08:42 PM	#1
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,746 Repped: 610 Repped 196 Times in 115 Posts Neg Reps: 89 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	ThA ViiRu5 vs. Unbreakable ThA ViiRu5 vs. Unbreakable Okay bitch boy this is the big leagues. 6-8 bars. No votes from dickriders/haters No recycling No feeding No biting No Swaying Due by 12:01 a.m. Friday morning. So basically Thursday night. Don't back out. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT Last edited by ThA ViiRu5; 11-05-2008 at 10:34 PM.

11-05-2008, 09:06 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 5,127 Repped: 90 Repped 375 Times in 198 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 52 Times in 38 Posts	Unbreakable All Cats.. Good Battle Though __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

11-05-2008, 09:18 PM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,746 Repped: 610 Repped 196 Times in 115 Posts Neg Reps: 89 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^ we'll see if he can hold his own. Check in. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

11-06-2008, 03:44 AM	#7
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,503 Repped: 362 Repped 667 Times in 221 Posts Neg Reps: 211 Neg Repped at 97 Times in 81 Posts	lol see pbs usual dickriding going on =) well ill try to do mah shit right now but i gotta study for mah midterm tomorrow so idk if ima finish, if i dont ill post it tomorrow after school. __________________ myspace.com/therealprotege

11-06-2008, 04:25 AM	#8
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,503 Repped: 362 Repped 667 Times in 221 Posts Neg Reps: 211 Neg Repped at 97 Times in 81 Posts	....LoL........ ayo ya cant fuck wit spark, king or J-Soulja so you want it wit me? naw bitch, its game ova mah rhymes XXL, so ya diggin the source mah reps like mah dick, definitely bigga than yours haha naww.. its really too easy though dawg.. what the fucks up with your verse? think cuz ya break mah name apart that it makes it wordplaY? LmAO your a clown homeboy and yo big ups to nellys new cd, i mean thats where i get all mah lines from... riiiiiight? haha iits whatever... let me dispose of this bitch... If I were a bitch? wtf..? ..man just listen.. know its tough for rappers nowdays N life is hard too but ya mothers pussy dont even stretch as far as ya bars do im bout dat BIG PICTURE.. yuh still fuckin wit cartoons ..yeah people hear you n laugh me im throwin spears n some jabs i mean this guys a queer n a fag .. true they be two in the same.. actin like he spit? naw he aint even new to tha game* took ya offer, cuz noones wants ta battle you dude this a race for presidents, im obama.. N mccain? well thatll be u so dont talk like we close peeped ya shit.. n see yuh stalkin' mah post now id say something bout ya drops but who wants 2 talk about those? ..now ya coffin has closed.. so ill take virus, N infect tha nation but fuck man, really idk what was longer ur verse or your EXPLANATIONS yeah he a virus, but he aint ill, his mic game has common powers wit a style so plane, terrorist coulda used it to bomb the towers dudes in a thread askn mad questions like a homo n shit easy 15 minutes. __________________ myspace.com/therealprotege Last edited by TheRealProtege; 11-06-2008 at 04:30 AM.*

11-06-2008, 12:29 AM	#6
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	lol how'd i know i'd see my name in this... good shit though...waits for unbreakable

11-06-2008, 07:25 AM	#9
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,068 Repped: 155 Repped 489 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	lol at u saying "fruity ass nigga" i'll assume im not albe to vote yall should get votes in...hopefully by 09...lol, 1 reason i see no point in text battling (on this site)...sections dead __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

11-06-2008, 01:44 PM	#12
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,088 Repped: 350 Repped 132 Times in 90 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	personals-virus...he came better but both didnt come good in this category punches-virus...easily better multies-unbreakable...virus forced some of his so unbreakable gets dis flow-unbreakable....lines were shorter and it flowed better wordplay-virus....got dis easy creativity-virus....mor original den unbreakable overall-virus......he easily got dis __________________

11-06-2008, 05:43 PM	#15
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,503 Repped: 362 Repped 667 Times in 221 Posts Neg Reps: 211 Neg Repped at 97 Times in 81 Posts	so i guess its 1-1 __________________ myspace.com/therealprotege

11-06-2008, 06:12 PM	#16
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 5,127 Repped: 90 Repped 375 Times in 198 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 52 Times in 38 Posts	I Can't Vote Obviously.. But Virus Easily Got This. Style So Plane/Plain? First Of All.. You Meant Plain But Put Plane To Make It Look Like Wordplay But Plain And The Controlled Demolition Of The WTC's Have Nothing To Do With Each other.. OMG!!! A TERRIBLE ATTEMPT @ WORDPLAY!!! ahahahah U Fail. That Seriously Is One Of The Worst Attempts At Wordplay I'd Ever Seen, Congratulations Fuckface, You Fail Again. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

11-06-2008, 06:38 PM	#18
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,068 Repped: 155 Repped 489 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	lmaooooo...dont get madd at the voter no....its not one of my secret accounts...if dats wut u thinking __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

11-06-2008, 06:39 PM	#19
xDizzex Banned Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: OWWW! Posts: 2,135 Repped: 153 Repped 292 Times in 130 Posts Neg Reps: 28 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 101 Posts	Unbreakable wins...all cats..nuff said I just couldn't get jiggy with viirus verse..hahahahaah shit was boring me while I was reading

11-06-2008, 06:54 PM	#20
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,068 Repped: 155 Repped 489 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	lmaoooooo @ cant get jiggy with __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

11-06-2008, 07:02 PM	#21
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 5,127 Repped: 90 Repped 375 Times in 198 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 52 Times in 38 Posts	it's 1-0 Virus.. Vets Only Voting. I never Even Heard Of That Dude, All Of Sudden He Pops Up In The Rhyme Section And Votes For Un breakable? Fuck outta Here. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

11-06-2008, 07:05 PM	#22
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,088 Repped: 350 Repped 132 Times in 90 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	word pistol knows whos a vet __________________

11-06-2008, 07:08 PM	#23
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 5,127 Repped: 90 Repped 375 Times in 198 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 52 Times in 38 Posts	^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

11-06-2008, 07:19 PM	#24
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,068 Repped: 155 Repped 489 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	techinically...its not stated n the rules...so all votes count even the random dude, pistol banger and dizze's vote for unbreakable so 3-1 ( on the first sentence only...not on the second part) __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

11-06-2008, 07:32 PM	#25
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 5,127 Repped: 90 Repped 375 Times in 198 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 52 Times in 38 Posts	No. It's 1-0 ^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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