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Old 11-02-2009, 05:46 PM   #1
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[NEW!]YoungKing187-Hell Of A Life (Church On Sunday)[Single]

New Single Off My Mixtape. "From The Bottom Up"
If You Aint Got That, Go Get That...I Mean Go Download That..
This Is Personally My Favorite Track Off The Mixtape..
Actually It Waz The Last Track I Recorded For The Mixtape.

3 Verses. With My Own Hook..Which Is Rare On The Board.

Check It Out. Lemme Know What Yall Think..I Appreciate It Homies.



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Verse.1
yea,feelin brand new,fresh air,cool breeze..//
top down in the summer,they like who's he..//
who's me,martin luther king biggest fan..//
anti-gunz,im willin to be the bigger man..//
we got kids on the block,that hope to survive..//
but little do they know,gotta keep hope alive..//
cuz he shall provide,the life we never had..//
lil mama,grow up,put that attitude n the trash..//
my nigga life is worth more than hoes..//
and everything green dont symbolize go..//
ya life is being rode on,like a highway..//
and we puttin all of our info,on myspace..//
yeah,but sooner we gonna recognize..//
that that nigga satan is wearing a fuckin disquise..//
no need to cry,you got the man up in the sky..//
keep striving,if i say we doing good,i would be lieing..//

(Hook)
we stack our paper,and we onnn our grind..//
got church on sunday,and we goin be find..//
we live ah hell of a life..//
hey,hey,hey,hey,hey,hey
we live ah hell of a life..//
ohhh ohhh ohhh ohhhh oohhhh

(Verse.2)
listen while i take u through the roads of new glory..//
this real niggaz shit,muthafucka true story..//
u never pose to give up,failure doesn’t exist..//
live as if theres no 2mar,and give ya mova a kiss..//
make a wish,dont make it harder then what it is..//
i know that death is easy,and its harder for us to live..//
keep ya held high,and vision greatness at its best..//
youngin have faith,even when u waken up to stress..//
knowledge can be kicked,and can be thrown all away..//
ask a question,god is only a phone call away..//
dont be timid to speak,u aint gotta hide your face..//
practice,the total opposite of what iverson would say..//
live ya life,dont let nobody,get in the way of it..//
go to college,and find what u wanna major in..//
i hate to break it down to you,its for your own rights..//
im just tryna prepare for ya own life, yeah..//

(Hook)
we stack our paper,and we onnn our grind..//
got church on sunday,and we goin be find..//
we live ah hell of a life..//
hey,hey,hey,hey,hey,hey
we live ah hell of a life..//
ohhh ohhh ohhh ohhhh oohhhh

Verse.3
in this world we liven,things aint goin get handed too you..//
make a move like 20-20,expand ya view..//
visualize the greatness,and erase the devestation..//
prey to god,and keep a distance away from satan..//
respect ya people,even if they dont respect you..//
cuz when u at the gates,u'll get let through..//
honor ya society,give ya neighbors a thumbs up..//
beware of the heartless,thats keepin them gunz tucked..//
and when ya make it,dont forget where u came from..//
dats where u got your name from,ya shame from..//
your respect,knowledge,struggle and ya pain from..//
everything you recieve,better be sure to honor it..//
your faith in god,help u get up out ya mama crib..//
enjoy life,you only got one chance to live..//
do what u gotta do,get married or have kids..//
never backdown from a challenge,just face it..//

(Hook)
we stack our paper,and we onnn our grind..//
got church on sunday,and we goin be find..//
we live ah hell of a life..//
hey,hey,hey,hey,hey,hey
we live ah hell of a life..//
ohhh ohhh ohhh ohhhh oohhhh
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Old 11-02-2009, 05:55 PM   #2
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props, track is nice
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Old 11-03-2009, 01:36 AM   #3
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dooope track. flows a lil off in your first verse but other then that its cool

and that OHHH OHH OHH i have that same exact melody on one of my songs..
wtf.. lol... not saying that but that melody
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:15 AM   #4
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Old 11-09-2009, 05:51 PM   #5
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this shit was some deep shit, last verse i felt you kinda dropped the quality a little bit
and the hook was good.. but i think if jae rock or sumtn did it. it would be that small tad better that would make this track perfect.
overall i give it a 8.5/10.. or 9/10 cant really decide hah

keep it up tho fam
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