verses of the gods - feat - pioneer

inna sense · 10-13-2009, 07:52 PM

the concept of this track is us being the frist beings that existed...i go first and do the first half of the thrird verse...pioneer does the second verse, hook and second half of the third verse...all feedback is much appreciated and will be returned...

lyrics for first verse...

yo i spit lightening, i hold earth
and my grip's tightening, i kissed light and its still shining
i thaught man, how to speak with the tongue
before that i was god giving heat to the sun
they see me and run, i was born before time existed
i can take every life i giveth
its a fact that my mind is gifted, ithe the cause
of the dark and the stars that are shining vivid
demons live, im the thoughts of the Christ, im the dawn and the night
yo i stand in the rain and turn water to ice
i was born without life, when my energy flows
matter moves into forms that i like
when i rhyme on tracks, spirit awakes from the lines i rap
i was trapped, in the earth when the skies were black
fid the facts, when im asking you something
the universe was born when i spat into nothing

lyrics for the first half of the third verse...

yo your thoughts are bland, yes im the god in man
i was carrying life before it walked on land
i made man with my breath, then i battle with death
for the right to put light in your animal flesh
but the light of your soul, is getting rather dull
my mind is strong enough to stop your thoughts and crack your skull
listen now, when im sharing the gift
before i end all life just by clenching my fist

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-14-2009, 11:52 AM

i dont kno wat it is

but it sound like ur verse is pitch....wit a lower pitch....or is that ur actual voice?...

i cant really tell...lol, but lyrics were cool..different rhyme scheme....emotion was aite..flow decent
ur homie was nice, lyrics cool...emotion there...flow nice
hook was decent, beat was nice...

solid drop right here
check out my new drop.."best ever"..when u get tha chance

stay up dawg, keep grindin

inna sense · 10-15-2009, 10:53 AM

thanks a lot for the comment!...and yeah, my voice is really like that...hahaha

10-13-2009, 07:52 PM	#1
inna sense Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: germany Posts: 152 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	verses of the gods - feat - pioneer verses of the gods - feat - pioneer the concept of this track is us being the frist beings that existed...i go first and do the first half of the thrird verse...pioneer does the second verse, hook and second half of the third verse...all feedback is much appreciated and will be returned... lyrics for first verse... yo i spit lightening, i hold earth and my grip's tightening, i kissed light and its still shining i thaught man, how to speak with the tongue before that i was god giving heat to the sun they see me and run, i was born before time existed i can take every life i giveth its a fact that my mind is gifted, ithe the cause of the dark and the stars that are shining vivid demons live, im the thoughts of the Christ, im the dawn and the night yo i stand in the rain and turn water to ice i was born without life, when my energy flows matter moves into forms that i like when i rhyme on tracks, spirit awakes from the lines i rap i was trapped, in the earth when the skies were black fid the facts, when im asking you something the universe was born when i spat into nothing lyrics for the first half of the third verse... yo your thoughts are bland, yes im the god in man i was carrying life before it walked on land i made man with my breath, then i battle with death for the right to put light in your animal flesh but the light of your soul, is getting rather dull my mind is strong enough to stop your thoughts and crack your skull listen now, when im sharing the gift before i end all life just by clenching my fist __________________

10-14-2009, 11:52 AM	#2
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,578 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	i dont kno wat it is but it sound like ur verse is pitch....wit a lower pitch....or is that ur actual voice?... i cant really tell...lol, but lyrics were cool..different rhyme scheme....emotion was aite..flow decent ur homie was nice, lyrics cool...emotion there...flow nice hook was decent, beat was nice... solid drop right here check out my new drop.."best ever"..when u get tha chance stay up dawg, keep grindin __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON.. Last edited by OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK; 10-15-2009 at 10:56 AM.

10-15-2009, 10:53 AM	#3
inna sense Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: germany Posts: 152 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks a lot for the comment!...and yeah, my voice is really like that...hahaha __________________

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