Over-Achiever (Prod. By Maestro)

YungMI08 · 07-17-2009, 10:19 PM

Some shots here and there...Get mad if you want lmao

Maestro on the beat

Holla at me

YUNG STIXX · 07-17-2009, 10:44 PM

AYE THiS SHIT WAS HARD MY NIGGA...DOPE FLOW AND NICE LINES
GOOD SHIT NIGGA
BACKLASH

Masterpiece · 07-18-2009, 01:33 PM

this is some nice shit here...lyrics flow and the beat was sick

YungMI08 · 07-18-2009, 04:44 PM

^^^^good lookin

uppin!!!!!!!

Da Dynasty · 07-18-2009, 11:39 PM

Its Not Loading Up For Me

YungMI08 · 07-19-2009, 12:20 AM

^^lol click it again then O.O

Da Dynasty · 07-19-2009, 12:53 AM

Sup Okay It Worked This Time, It Sounded Good Flow Was On Point

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 07-20-2009, 03:41 AM

niggas sleepin on u fam...wake theses niggas up

dis tracc went hard..u road dis beat good..beat go hard n da lyrics is cracc

stop sleepin on dis nicca...

stay up n hit me up for a collab fam

YungMI08 · 07-22-2009, 01:21 AM

^^^lol niggas sleep cause they dont wanna admit im the best

Smoke1Life · 07-22-2009, 03:32 PM

Dude, im really feelin this shit bro. Your delivery on this track is flawless.
Flow is on point throughout, got some real nice lines in there also.
I really wasn't expectin this, no hate, but damn this is fire.
Hook was fire.

I like the demand respect line alot. That shits fire.

This shits goin on the playlist.
Ima hit yo ass up for a collab real soon.

TheMadWriter · 07-22-2009, 04:01 PM

Your flow was consistent, you had some solid punchlines in there. Althoguh there are a few things I personally feel could have improvement, this was very solid. 8/10 in my opinion, indefinitely. I liked some of the flashes of wordplay you put in there, and the beat was solid. That sample was nice.

With all of the good lyricism shit, I think that you need to find away to emphasize your chorus more. Maybe turn the vocals on the regular verses so it comes in louder, or you know...turn up the chorus. I think that there were some parts where your flow was choppy and maybe you could keep a little more consistent, make it sound a bit more smooth. Like for instance where you said 'I don't ask for respect', and the part where you said 'cohesively' (which I didn't feel like it fit but people might feel differently). Just random little pauses here and there...

Overall, I honestly think it's 8/10 and there isn't much to improve on aside from small things. Nice drop.

YungMI08 · 07-22-2009, 04:11 PM

^^^lol i know what you mean....but i dont like having everything uniform (as far as the rhyme scheme)...cause then it starts to sound normal...I like to make my verses a bit unorthadox....but to each its own

good lookin on the feed

YoungJ · 08-02-2009, 01:13 PM

You switched up the beat for this track...both were ill tho

07-17-2009, 10:19 PM	#1
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	Over-Achiever (Prod. By Maestro) Over-Achiever (Prod. By Maestro) Some shots here and there...Get mad if you want lmao Maestro on the beat Holla at me __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!! Last edited by YungMI08; 07-18-2009 at 04:43 PM.

07-17-2009, 10:44 PM	#2
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,905 Repped: 412 Repped 1,298 Times in 405 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	AYE THiS SHIT WAS HARD MY NIGGA...DOPE FLOW AND NICE LINES GOOD SHIT NIGGA BACKLASH __________________ MiXTAPE DROPPING S00N

07-18-2009, 01:33 PM	#3
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is some nice shit here...lyrics flow and the beat was sick __________________ Back To The Basics - Sometime in August

07-18-2009, 04:44 PM	#4
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	^^^^good lookin uppin!!!!!!! __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

07-18-2009, 11:39 PM	#5
Da Dynasty Stop Learned Helplessness Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Mississippi Posts: 11,936 Repped: 6,018 Repped 1,248 Times in 441 Posts Neg Reps: 53 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	Its Not Loading Up For Me __________________

07-19-2009, 12:20 AM	#6
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	^^lol click it again then O.O __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

07-19-2009, 12:53 AM	#7
Da Dynasty Stop Learned Helplessness Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Mississippi Posts: 11,936 Repped: 6,018 Repped 1,248 Times in 441 Posts Neg Reps: 53 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	Sup Okay It Worked This Time, It Sounded Good Flow Was On Point __________________

07-20-2009, 03:41 AM	#8
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	niggas sleepin on u fam...wake theses niggas up dis tracc went hard..u road dis beat good..beat go hard n da lyrics is cracc stop sleepin on dis nicca... stay up n hit me up for a collab fam __________________ myspace.com/vicirona -KRG THOROGANG myspace.com/camden2newark -Meesh THOROGANG myspace.com/jayrell973 -jrell THOROGANG myspace.com/dimezgotti -Dimez THOROGANG

07-22-2009, 01:21 AM	#9
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	^^^lol niggas sleep cause they dont wanna admit im the best __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

07-22-2009, 03:32 PM	#10
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Dude, im really feelin this shit bro. Your delivery on this track is flawless. Flow is on point throughout, got some real nice lines in there also. I really wasn't expectin this, no hate, but damn this is fire. Hook was fire. I like the demand respect line alot. That shits fire. This shits goin on the playlist. Ima hit yo ass up for a collab real soon. __________________

07-22-2009, 04:01 PM	#11
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,386 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 156 Times in 100 Posts	Your flow was consistent, you had some solid punchlines in there. Althoguh there are a few things I personally feel could have improvement, this was very solid. 8/10 in my opinion, indefinitely. I liked some of the flashes of wordplay you put in there, and the beat was solid. That sample was nice. With all of the good lyricism shit, I think that you need to find away to emphasize your chorus more. Maybe turn the vocals on the regular verses so it comes in louder, or you know...turn up the chorus. I think that there were some parts where your flow was choppy and maybe you could keep a little more consistent, make it sound a bit more smooth. Like for instance where you said 'I don't ask for respect', and the part where you said 'cohesively' (which I didn't feel like it fit but people might feel differently). Just random little pauses here and there... Overall, I honestly think it's 8/10 and there isn't much to improve on aside from small things. Nice drop.

07-22-2009, 04:11 PM	#12
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	^^^lol i know what you mean....but i dont like having everything uniform (as far as the rhyme scheme)...cause then it starts to sound normal...I like to make my verses a bit unorthadox....but to each its own good lookin on the feed __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

08-02-2009, 01:13 PM	#13
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	You switched up the beat for this track...both were ill tho

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