[NEW!!]YoungKing187-A Story To Tell(Ego)

youngking187 · 07-05-2009, 04:17 AM

some shit i recorded..i waz feelin the vibe of this joint..
i think it couldve been executed better..but since im not
saving this track for nothing..i aint goin re-do it..
just decided to put it out and leave it as is..
check it out fellaz

ps..anybody down for a collab holla at me man..
hook/verse or whatever..get at me!!

Lyrics..//

Quote:

intro
I Got A Story To Telllllll..//
I Got A Story To Telllllll..//
yea this that real shit nigga..//
now,relax and feel this nigga..//

v/1
growing in this world,i aint really have much..//
but it always waz a fact that oprah had bucks..//
some days i would cry,and feel sad but..//
if you tease me,then i will beat your ass up..//
coming up on the south side,of the district..//
there waz ludacris,lunatics,and alot of misfits..//
taking lives for granted,aint afraid to risk it..//
we aint have butter for our Pillsbury biscuits..//
little girls on the block,even wearing lip stick..//
i dont know the answer,its just the way it is kid..//

me egoooo..i gotta big egoooo

v/2
go to skool everyday,still couldnt get an A..//
when we left there,all we ever did waz hit a j..//
if i could start all over,i wouldnt change much..//
i know god by my side,but i keep that thang tuck..//
pants below the waist,nanna said pull ya jeans up..//
Me,Twins,and d-money,that waz the team bruh..//
beety head frank on the block,that waz a feen bruh..//
nike boots all winter,go-go music in the clubs..//
gimme 17 homie,and ill let you get a dub..//
and i dont mean come off,talkin bout drugs..//
got niggaz,baby mommaz,givin me groupie love..//
but i gotta fall back these bitches want cash..//
i aint goin lie,i just really want that ass..//
whether the house or the jag..//
come to think of it.mama ill pass..//

(beyonce doin her thing..with me talkin in the background)
...lol

v/3
im here now,but i wont for get past news..///
peanutnut butter jelly when i wanted fast food
never had the answers,my brain allways crash clues..///
im still in the hood,which means i aint gotta past threw..///
nunu died,the powerline where i put my last shoes..///
my body waz stiffed up more then some statues..///
the streets caught me every since i waz toddler man..///
im in highskool,without achieving scholars man..///
failing classes,but in ball i waz a starter man..///
my friend parents died,we shared the same fava man..///
its all a mystery and i aint even caught a case yet..///
i went to health class,but i never practiced safe sex..///
i just crushed it,never thought to use a latex..///
hide and go get it,i bet yall never played that..///
wasnt the smartest,but never ever have i stayed back..///
ive been around niggaz,that use to always blaze crack..///
i hustle,8 for dimez,but made sure i get paid back..///
play wit my money,ill send my niggaz to spray macs..///
wasnt really talkative,i waz the type that laid back..///
im just spitten life,cuz i feel that it could save rap..///
and its a wrap nigga..//

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 07-05-2009, 09:47 PM

=/..........

YungMI08 · 07-05-2009, 09:56 PM

i like this beat...u coulda did more with it...and the song structure was all over the place lol

the thing that bothered me the most was the fact that ur flow fell off in alotta parts

shoulda really did this over lol

n made the 1st hook longer or somethin...or put beyonce on it

leave me some feed

youngking187 · 07-07-2009, 07:53 AM

thanks for the feed...

uppppz!!!

youngking187 · 07-21-2009, 05:41 PM

uppppz!!..

07-05-2009, 09:47 PM	#2
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07-05-2009, 09:56 PM	#3
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	i like this beat...u coulda did more with it...and the song structure was all over the place lol the thing that bothered me the most was the fact that ur flow fell off in alotta parts shoulda really did this over lol n made the 1st hook longer or somethin...or put beyonce on it leave me some feed __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!! Last edited by YungMI08; 07-05-2009 at 10:21 PM.

07-07-2009, 07:53 AM	#4
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	thanks for the feed... uppppz!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

07-21-2009, 05:41 PM	#5
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	uppppz!!.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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