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http://www.zshare.net/audio/621596167551f445/
drop some feed this off my mixtape thats about to drop hosted by heat leave some feed please and ill return the favor this some story telling type shit based on real life shit lol
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Shits not too bad. Very basic though.
Your flow and lyrics both work with the song, but they could soar much higher then the altitude your taking them at the moment. Try to start using multi-syllable rhymes more often, and don't just come with the basic rhyme scheme that you have been using. You have to switch shit up, that way people don't get bored with your track. Up your vocabulary in your song writing also, don't be ashamed to look smart on a track.
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1 br0d, 2 brod, 3 br0dz 4 lol i like this shit...but i agree with that nigga smoke...work on different schemes
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This was coo but yeah i agree with smoke too!!
Switch up the style and try and elevate a lil bit more.. But the chorus was pretty catchy fam lyrics and flow was good...keep em coming
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It sounds mainstreamy tho....u shouldnt have to get super lyrical on a track bout broads
shits cool tho.
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lol didnt think i was gon like this
lol good track tho rhyme scheme didnt bother me but the hook coulda longer ya flow was on for the most par ya doubles were a bit off @ times so your words got jumbled up but good track nonetheless leave me some feed Memoirs Of A Troubled Mind
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