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Old 07-05-2009, 12:20 PM   #51
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yall need to feed this tape...
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Old 07-05-2009, 12:21 PM   #52
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lmaoooooo...what the fuck is goin on...
Tom's Girl goin crazy sayin she aint talk to scool...then got mad caz I called her amanda instead of Miranda and called me a child...then PMSed out caz my sense of humor annoys her...Im glad we dont have a woman president caz everybody on the other side of the world will be Dead and not know why they were nuked...
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Old 07-05-2009, 12:24 PM   #53
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^^^oh..whats your msn joint son???
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Old 07-05-2009, 12:34 PM   #54
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^^^oh..whats your msn joint son???
PMed it to u...Yo man when we go diamond off this mixtape lets a shoot a video for My Angel...and get a Jae Rock look alike if he cant do the part...
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^^^im down..maybe tom can make a cameo
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lol lets get this straight once and for all

lyrik I never texted with her, but I see how you mistook what I told you

what HAPPENED is this: as a joke, i left some dutch visitor messages on her profile. thats it. never texted her lmfao. as a result chambers got at me on msn, about how he kinda felt like I was betraying him, or just going aroudn his back.. I mean, it was all for fun and chambers coo to me, so I was like damn im sorry lol. and thats when i told you "chambers mad as fuck cuz i left some messages" u, lyrik, prolly thought I mean text messages?

ok, so then we most likely made a joke about chambers saying "i want u to take of the songs with me on ur next tape if u do that shit again" or something like that... he never said that lol, but u know we talk alotta shit for fun so.. thats totaly out of context again

so I'm not saying anybody here is a liar, this is how it is lol... just a huge misunderstanding?

now what i dont get (??) is that this miranda chick which i obviously dont know well either, and vice versa, feels the need to talk shit about me like I cant be trusted and shit? and how im a lowlife bum or something? like what? the fuck i did to u? .. u dont know me, all u know is my fucking avatar and my profile name on here lol.. so fall the fuck back with that "you cant trust scool.. cuz hes.. scool" like u know who scool is lmfao

and lyrik, please dont think I care all that much, just for once I felt like being serious on here and tell the truth lol, im not dissing u or whatever ur my wigga.... also I got alotta respect for chambers cuz he taught me how to mix and i dont feel the need to get at him or something


i mean, i tried explaining this 3 times now...... yall can believe what the fuck u want but this shit is a typical example of drama loving girls lol, like nothing is wrong... stop making nothing into something
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:21 PM   #57
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Wtf at the paragraph shit...Yo u my boy still tho...Leave the dam feed today

fuck this misunderstandin bullshit...it was 4 bars...Bros before Hos man...

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Old 07-05-2009, 01:26 PM   #58
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lmaoooooo...what the fuck is goin on...
lmao, dats wat im tryin to figure out......
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:48 PM   #59
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WHAT THE FLYING FUCK HAS BEEN GOING ON IN HERE LMAO

couple of points i'd like to make


1. LMFAO @ a misunderstanding getting more people talking then ur new tape...wtf people leave that shit for a new thread

2. LMFAOOOOOO@ "Jackson fivin on ur ass" and "dap the fist" rofllllllllllllllllll

3. Am I the only one wondering what the fuck is going on with the tom and miranda relationship...if im not mistaken hes from pittsburgh and shes from holland......is this an internet relationship or has one of you moved?

4. suck my penis.......that will be all.............................pause
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LMAOO @ THiS NIGGA LYRIKCHAS SPEECHES...JUST FOR THAT, IMMA LEAVE GOOD FEED FOR THESE NIGGAS...THIS iS A FUNNY CAT
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ima down load this now, been gone for a while. but making those beats takes time.
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Old 07-06-2009, 07:41 PM   #64
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Waitin on my feeds from

Yung Stixx
Marvelous (if he still alive)
Tom Chambers (idk probably to busy spit shining some china plates)
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MI

lazy ass motha fuckers get on ur feed Game son...
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ahemm

NOW...here's my feed

the hooks on this track were a hit and miss

highs like my angel....then lows like good gracious

and this made some songs....and killed others

The flow was great for lyrikcha on almost every track

but tracks like "me against the world"...it seemed to fall off

now king..........it seemed on almost every track ya flow was off....and when it wasnt...it was too "punchy"

the lyrics were good for both.....but nothing really stood out...

emotion is always good for lyrikcha

king sometime sounds uninspired

all in all.....ehhh i dont really like this tape....it sounds like a bunch of throwaway tracks...and the tracks with different concepts seems to sound like typical "i dont rap about {insert something commonly rapped about here} so im different" gimmick...needless to say, the could have been executed better...alot of it sounds forced

but ehhh....i just think a collab tape sounded good on paper but didnt really turn out well when it came into fruition
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thx for the feed...UPPIN...............
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Old 07-07-2009, 07:44 AM   #67
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*goes back to sleep heavy hearted*


I thought dude was ur homie...now he sayin we a gimmick trick son...Oh shit King U know what this means....

Im a do 500 bars, and u do 500 bars...every 100 bars we switch up the 50 cent beats we gonna use and combine the diss so its 1000 bars dissin MI booooy...make 30 minute diss track with a short film attached...
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Heres my feedback on this mixtape.

firstly wheres a track with marv? actually where the fuck is marv?

so here is my feedback.

1. We Are Not The Same - Lyric comes in nice on this track, nice to hear a slowed down lyric flow. Nice concept, good the bad type shit. Young, flow is good, nice effects through the verse. Hook is a usual lyric hook. I do like the 'Im not human Nigga im a menace to society'.

2. The Fire - Love the flow from lyric on this shit, beat is hot. Hook is MONEY motherfuckers! Young lets this track down, his flow is perfect, but the intro to his verse was awful. nice shit, tho. Fav track so far.

3. Has Been Rappers - Hate the beat already. Not a fan of dirty south beats. Young suits this beat better than lyric, nice simple verses from both of you. Shame the hook aint simple on this.

4. The Winters Of The Heart - Real talk on this track, nice verses from both of you on this, flows are good, no weak points. Sampled hook, so nothing to say bout it really.

5. Good Gracious - The beat dont suit the intro to the track. Love youngs verse man, fire! Hook is ok, more catchy than the others, as its simple. Lyrics verse hot also. nice track.

6. We Know What You Think - Already beat is fire, nice lyric verse, goos content. Nice hook, love the effects, makes the track stand out more. Love young comparing him to 50. This is the best track so far on the tape.

7. I Dont Care - Beat hot. Wooooooo, hot verse lyric, love it man. Lyrics are solid man, flow is perfect. Hook, is just what this tape needs a simple hook, we can follow. Young verse, is decent, flow is on point. Lyrics are good too. This is now my fav track so far.

8. My Angel - Nice beat, i can imagine jae singing on this shit....Lyric your hooks are so complicated mayne, remember the hook is what gets people into the track, so make it catchy, simple. But this is good. verses are solid from both of you, its a killa track, a banger. Jae, what can i say apart from, rise the king! Jae verse is hot hot hot.

9. Get Fucked Up - love this track sooo much, this track has a quality hook, good verses, nice beat. This is now my fav track so far. Heat just added to the good ness of the track.

10. I Will Kill You - Not fan of this track, defo the filler on the tape. Beat is good, but the hook is not very good. VERSES ARE good, but still the track is not a good one.

11. Murder 101 - Love the beat on this track, so dark and deep. The track is good, very nice, nice verses from both of you. Flows are good. think tho its the beat that makes this one of my fav. Sampled hook so nothing to say really.

12. Me Againts the World - both of you are loving the sampled hooks!! nice beat, young verse was shakey, flow off at points. Lyrics flow ok, good track not the best.

13 - You The Type - I like this track, nice concept. Loving the 'you the type' through the verses. Nice track, hot flows from both of you.

14 - Whats Real - Another good concept. the tracks on this tape that stand out are ones with very good concepts. Nice verse bit of comedy in the lyrics, thank god! Nice hook, thats a hook!! Young nice verse, good flow. Just a good solid track, with a good hook and verses. NOW MY FAV on the tape.

15 - Faith - woooooooooooo beat man, hot as fuck! good choice. NIce verse young, do you actually record a full verse? in one go? seems as you record a lot of your shit a bar at a time, or two bars. Hook, good to hear a young verse, hook ok. Lyrics, verse is good, cant really down your flow on any of the tape. good shit, real talk. Tom chambers did ya thing on this track man.

16 - Always with you - who on the hook?? nice track, good positioning on the tape, real real fucking talk from both of you.

17 - Thankful - nice track, flows are cool for this track, another real talk track, three in a row?? nice verses from yall.

18 - Therapy Session - save the best till last eh boys! this is my fav track of the tape, good concept, love the beat, flows are ill from both of you. the other thing is 50?????? need? maybe shud of thrown in me or marv for this track!

ok so....................

good tape. here are my points

1. Youngs quality is not as good a lyrics, so the tracks sound put together, and they dont flow easily together.

2. HOOKS HOOKS HOOKS, simple please!

apart from that nice tape. like i said a few favs.

im give it s 7.5/10 :)
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^^^thanks for the feed man..we appreciate..

yea some tracks i punch in more..i waz sick when
i recorded like 3 of these tracks..
and couldnt hold my breath while flowing for shit..feel me..
thanks for the honest feed homie...



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hahaha..aye this shit hot man..stop sleeping..
drop some honest feed..

also let us know whats your favorite track
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