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06-10-2009, 12:42 AM
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C@$h
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Soulja Ft Ca$h - Sucessful
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7FmnKzfQj8
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06-11-2009, 01:03 PM
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FUCK'EM ALL
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Verse 1- Needs a little bit of work on the flow here and there. I mean, its good, but just seems like it gets off (no homo) every now and then. Lyrics are good, but I think you should maybe consider turning up your volume up a little. And maybe show just a little more emotion.
Verse 2- Once again, needs a little more volume and emotion. Flow seems to be a bit better in this verse. Lyrics come steady. I liked the mexican line. Hook- Is this a sample or one of yall? Cause I like the hook alot. Verse 3- I think your dubs are just a little bit off on this verse. Once again, liked the lyrics, flow is alot better on this one. Still lackin emotion.
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