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Masterpiece · 06-10-2009, 01:42 PM

chorus was ight...bridges were decent...verses were definitely the strong point on this song....flows were good...you had some nice lines

youngking187 · 06-10-2009, 05:02 PM

^^^^^good lookz homie i appreciate the feed...
damn track got 2 pages of feed in one day...

uppppppppzzz!!!!!

The Die · 06-10-2009, 05:12 PM

lol this is prety dizzope (i kinda dont like the bridge tho)

the acne line >>>>>>

Da Dynasty · 06-10-2009, 05:22 PM

Lol, This Was Nice, I Like The Bridge You Sung The Hell The Out That Shit, You Flow Starting Unraveling In The Second Verse When The Beat Went Out Though But Over All Its Was Nice I Enjoyed It

YUNG STIXX · 06-10-2009, 07:47 PM

AYE i LIKE THIS SHIT NIGGA...SHOULD GO BACK AND RE-DO THE VERSES THOUGH IF U PUTTIN THIS ON THE TAPE CUZ THE FLOW FELL OFF A FEW TiMES...BUT OTHER THEN THAT, GOOD SHIT..PROPS ON THAT SHOUT OUT TOO

youngking187 · 06-10-2009, 10:03 PM

^^^good lookz on the feed yall...i appreciate it..
lmao..i release this shit yesterday..and its gettin viewed
and fed crazy...more than some people who release there
shit a few days ago..sorry for braggin

Tom Chambers · 06-10-2009, 10:18 PM

thats cuz you suck dick in the chatbox

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 01:04 AM

^^^dont steal my promotion tool of telling people in the chatbox to feed my shit..or ima come to there hood and murder dey ass..

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 01:31 AM

upppppzz!!!

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 12:31 PM

upppppppppppppz!!!!!

Mastakilla_GGunit · 06-11-2009, 01:32 PM

its aight man not feeelin the hook tho

flows good u on point nigga off once i noticed tho

keep it up dawg

..Da Hitman.. · 06-11-2009, 01:39 PM

Dope shiyt mayne, really. Like 1.verse u feelin it, but hook can be better. Lyrics are good tho. Great job homie...

RodKnee · 06-11-2009, 01:48 PM

it's another king classic, showing that he > tony yayo everytime!

I liked the track

hook isn't too bad but you're not really a singer bro. i'm not hating, don't hurt me

Verses were hot though

like the friction burns i gave my dawwwwwwgy

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 02:36 PM

good lookz rod,hitman,and maskilla

@rod dont talk about my singin mufucka

ps..i did the second verse over..

Blizzy · 06-11-2009, 02:49 PM

Chorus was simple...not feelin it but the bridge was ok, both verses were tight, flow and multi's were good Kingo had some good lines. Just could ave brought more outta da chorus tho but overall good track.

Feed my new track 'The Return', props...

THREATS · 06-11-2009, 02:57 PM

Good shit. Keep working on timing and you could always improve on the chorus. I like how the shit makes sense and it goes together. Do you know what I mean? You came out strong no homo.

Witty Qwan · 06-11-2009, 03:26 PM

lmao @ tom exposing king

"cuz you pick me uppppppppppppp...everytime i fall down"

lmfaoooooooooo @ the pitch of "up"

i knew i wouldve eventually heard dat kobe/lebron line....u said it like 10 timez in da chatbox

nice track Young Curtis...lyrics r cool...hook is so so

Make this a June Award Best Track Nominee Smoke

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 03:31 PM

^^^smoke said he not because of the feed..idk..why..

but good lookz on the feed my nigg...i appreciate it sparks,threats,and blizzy

Witty Qwan · 06-11-2009, 03:53 PM

at smoke george bushing the votes

How does it feel king...ya shit went 2x plat in a day...should reach 300 views 2morrow...my nigga setting e-records

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 04:58 PM

good lookz on that qwan....lol

uppppppz!!!!!!!!!

Lyrikcha · 06-11-2009, 08:40 PM

I liked it....Verses were on point...last part of hook when u say we the fuckin best was kinda ehhh...but the rest is on point...glad u redid that second verse caz it sounds better now...keep doin ur thang

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 08:58 PM

^^^^thanks for the feed homieeeeeee...i appreciate it..

youngking187 · 06-11-2009, 10:40 PM

uppppppz!!!!!!!!

young_v1t0_ · 06-12-2009, 02:26 AM

im feeling this shit...
get a better hook tho

xDizzeTheKingx · 06-12-2009, 02:27 AM

My really flaw is that you sound like a drunk Ol Dirty Bastard, LMAO other than that it was pretty decent...work on voice & flow and everything will come together

7/10

06-10-2009, 05:02 PM	#27
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^^^good lookz homie i appreciate the feed... damn track got 2 pages of feed in one day... uppppppppzzz!!!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-10-2009, 05:12 PM	#28
The Die bruburuburu Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Colombia Posts: 6,502 Repped: 676 Repped 510 Times in 282 Posts Neg Reps: 157 Neg Repped at 141 Times in 120 Posts	lol this is prety dizzope (i kinda dont like the bridge tho) the acne line >>>>>> __________________

06-10-2009, 05:22 PM	#29
Da Dynasty Stop Learned Helplessness Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Mississippi Posts: 11,934 Repped: 6,016 Repped 1,248 Times in 441 Posts Neg Reps: 53 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	Lol, This Was Nice, I Like The Bridge You Sung The Hell The Out That Shit, You Flow Starting Unraveling In The Second Verse When The Beat Went Out Though But Over All Its Was Nice I Enjoyed It __________________

06-10-2009, 07:47 PM	#30
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,864 Repped: 406 Repped 1,270 Times in 396 Posts Neg Reps: 62 Neg Repped at 126 Times in 84 Posts	AYE i LIKE THIS SHIT NIGGA...SHOULD GO BACK AND RE-DO THE VERSES THOUGH IF U PUTTIN THIS ON THE TAPE CUZ THE FLOW FELL OFF A FEW TiMES...BUT OTHER THEN THAT, GOOD SHIT..PROPS ON THAT SHOUT OUT TOO __________________ MiXTAPE DROPPING S00N

06-10-2009, 10:03 PM	#31
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^good lookz on the feed yall...i appreciate it.. lmao..i release this shit yesterday..and its gettin viewed and fed crazy...more than some people who release there shit a few days ago..sorry for braggin __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-10-2009, 01:42 PM	#26
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	chorus was ight...bridges were decent...verses were definitely the strong point on this song....flows were good...you had some nice lines

06-10-2009, 10:18 PM	#32
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,274 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 66 Times in 53 Posts	thats cuz you suck dick in the chatbox

06-11-2009, 01:04 AM	#33
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^dont steal my promotion tool of telling people in the chatbox to feed my shit..or ima come to there hood and murder dey ass.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz Last edited by youngking187; 06-11-2009 at 01:06 AM.

06-11-2009, 01:31 AM	#34
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	upppppzz!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-11-2009, 12:31 PM	#35
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	upppppppppppppz!!!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-11-2009, 01:32 PM	#36
Mastakilla_GGunit Veteran Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,513 Repped: 2 Repped 16 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	its aight man not feeelin the hook tho flows good u on point nigga off once i noticed tho keep it up dawg __________________ cook it bag it slang it

06-11-2009, 01:39 PM	#37
..Da Hitman.. Wutchu Lookin At ? Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Queens Posts: 760 Repped: 37 Repped 182 Times in 38 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Dope shiyt mayne, really. Like 1.verse u feelin it, but hook can be better. Lyrics are good tho. Great job homie... __________________

06-11-2009, 01:48 PM	#38
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,031 Repped: 661 Repped 322 Times in 180 Posts Neg Reps: 65 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 23 Posts	it's another king classic, showing that he > tony yayo everytime! I liked the track hook isn't too bad but you're not really a singer bro. i'm not hating, don't hurt me Verses were hot though like the friction burns i gave my dawwwwwwgy __________________ Put me in you

06-11-2009, 02:36 PM	#39
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	good lookz rod,hitman,and maskilla @rod dont talk about my singin mufucka ps..i did the second verse over.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-11-2009, 02:49 PM	#40
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	Chorus was simple...not feelin it but the bridge was ok, both verses were tight, flow and multi's were good Kingo had some good lines. Just could ave brought more outta da chorus tho but overall good track. Feed my new track 'The Return', props... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-11-2009, 02:57 PM	#41
THREATS Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 9,681 Repped: 525 Repped 263 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 14 Posts	Good shit. Keep working on timing and you could always improve on the chorus. I like how the shit makes sense and it goes together. Do you know what I mean? You came out strong no homo.

06-11-2009, 03:26 PM	#42
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,041 Repped: 155 Repped 472 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 80 Times in 74 Posts	lmao @ tom exposing king "cuz you pick me uppppppppppppp...everytime i fall down" lmfaoooooooooo @ the pitch of "up" i knew i wouldve eventually heard dat kobe/lebron line....u said it like 10 timez in da chatbox nice track Young Curtis...lyrics r cool...hook is so so Make this a June Award Best Track Nominee Smoke

06-11-2009, 03:31 PM	#43
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^smoke said he not because of the feed..idk..why.. but good lookz on the feed my nigg...i appreciate it sparks,threats,and blizzy __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-11-2009, 03:53 PM	#44
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,041 Repped: 155 Repped 472 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 80 Times in 74 Posts	at smoke george bushing the votes How does it feel king...ya shit went 2x plat in a day...should reach 300 views 2morrow...my nigga setting e-records

06-11-2009, 04:58 PM	#45
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	good lookz on that qwan....lol uppppppz!!!!!!!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-11-2009, 08:40 PM	#46
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,365 Repped: 11 Repped 789 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	I liked it....Verses were on point...last part of hook when u say we the fuckin best was kinda ehhh...but the rest is on point...glad u redid that second verse caz it sounds better now...keep doin ur thang __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

06-11-2009, 08:58 PM	#47
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^^thanks for the feed homieeeeeee...i appreciate it.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-11-2009, 10:40 PM	#48
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,497 Repped: 303 Repped 602 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	uppppppz!!!!!!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-12-2009, 02:26 AM	#49
young_v1t0_ [HiiGH VaRiieTy H.V] Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: N.Y.C Where I Can Kill Ya Beat & Beat The Murder Case [SouR D FiiEnD] Posts: 4,362 Repped: 1,089 Repped 1,769 Times in 634 Posts Neg Reps: 60 Neg Repped at 30 Times in 28 Posts	im feeling this shit... get a better hook tho __________________ "Smoke So Much I Thought Soberness Was A New Drug, African Roots, So You Can Say "Kush" Is In Dude Blood"

06-12-2009, 02:27 AM	#50
xDizzeTheKingx aka KUFI SMACKER! Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: ya moms crib Posts: 665 Repped: 62 Repped 237 Times in 122 Posts Neg Reps: 9 Neg Repped at 122 Times in 64 Posts	My really flaw is that you sound like a drunk Ol Dirty Bastard, LMAO other than that it was pretty decent...work on voice & flow and everything will come together 7/10

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