(NEW) The Return Ft Satch & Match (NEW)

Blizzy · 06-07-2009, 06:20 PM

New track we done.....unmastered but still good....order

Matchstick, Satch then me, produced by Match.....leave feedback please...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/61076378aa4e4684/

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-07-2009, 06:58 PM

Dope Beat..

Chorus was Decent.

1st verse had a Good flow.. it was boring though..

2nd verse had a Decent flow & More Energy and Emotion.. Lyrics were Dope too.

3rd Verse is the Dopest. Lyrics, Flow & Energy outshined the 1st and Second Verses easy.. IMO

Overall, Dope track just need more Energy from the 1st verse & better pronunciation from the 2nd verse ..

YungMI08 · 06-07-2009, 08:12 PM

Hmmm Wasnt Really Feelin This Hook...Needed Something More

1st Verse - Lyrics Are VERY Good...But The Flow Fell Off At Times...Overall The Verse Seemed It Was Lacking Something

2nd Verse - Flow Is Good...But Sometimes You Made Lines A Word Too Long....Delivery Was Good...Lyrics Are VERY Good...Nothing Really Stood Out Though

3rd Verse - Ya Flow Was Shaky On A Lot Of Parts...Be When It Worked..It WORKED...Lyrics Werent As Good As The Other Two But Your Presence Was The Best On The Track...My Favorite Verse

Overall...Decent Track...Real Underground-Ish...Keep It Up

Leave Some Feed On My Track "Don't Pray For Me" When You Get A Chance

Blizzy · 06-08-2009, 04:55 PM

Props to PB and Yung MI....bumpin for more feedback...

Smoke1Life · 06-09-2009, 10:37 AM

Ain't really likin the hook. Kind of boring.
Verse 1- Lyrics are fuckin crazy on this shit. Multi's are firin on this. I liked the leave a dent in a diamond line. Flow was good, just a little choppy hear and there.
Verse 2- Okay, Honestly I can't understand what he's saying. Post lyrics maybe? It sounds good, but I can't tell what the fuck the content is!!! Flow was good though. lol
Verse 3- This has the best presence of the track, but your flow fell off here and there. Was good for the most part though. Lyrics were good too.

Rebel INS {CF} · 06-10-2009, 09:05 AM

I love the whole militant we takin donw tha UK shit ! Beat sets the scene pretty damn perfectly

Back to the future as an intruder to crack the computer ? Jeepers me ... HAHAHA Bad decisions got me chasin a ref !

Ah shit, good stuff my man, my bad for forgettin

Blizzy · 06-10-2009, 09:13 AM

props to smoke and rebel, btw BUMP

supragtx · 06-11-2009, 02:59 PM

repped..

repped back...

owe me
blizzy..

damn dude i didnt know u did tracks...
good track keep it up

Witty Qwan · 06-11-2009, 04:59 PM

the beat is dope...hook was kinda plain...i cant speak on da lyrics cuz i dont know what the fuck yall saying

first dude....i understood the word "fakers" then got lost like a nigga in da woods

... flow n multies was crazy..lyrics sounded good

2nd dude....idk...couldnt catch the lyrical content

Bloodshot....ok...i understood ya shit...liked ya presence...flow is good but shaky sumtimes...lyrics r nice

stay up

TheSecondComing · 06-14-2009, 05:29 PM

Everything On This Track Was Done Well...From The Lyrics...To The Flow...To The Delivery...To The Hook

Im Really Feeling This

Blizzy · 06-15-2009, 09:33 AM

props witty, supra and second comin....BUMP

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 06-19-2009, 09:05 PM

beat-nice, i fucks wit it...but really couldnet see myself on it
hook - was aite....wasnet bad, need a tab bit more emotion in it thou
first verse - flow was shakey at times...but flow steady tha whole verse, lyrics there..emotion on point
second verse-i aint even gon lie, i couldnet hardly understand wat he was sayin in his verse....flow was shakey thou...cant really speak on tha lyrics..cuz i couldnet hear them that "clearly"....
third verse-flow was good, emotion there, lyrics cool

solid drop my dude....
stay up famo....

06-07-2009, 06:20 PM	#1
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	(NEW) The Return Ft Satch & Match (NEW) (NEW) The Return Ft Satch & Match (NEW) New track we done.....unmastered but still good....order Matchstick, Satch then me, produced by Match.....leave feedback please... http://www.zshare.net/audio/61076378aa4e4684/ __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-07-2009, 06:58 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,876 Repped: 79 Repped 299 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Dope Beat.. Chorus was Decent. 1st verse had a Good flow.. it was boring though.. 2nd verse had a Decent flow & More Energy and Emotion.. Lyrics were Dope too. 3rd Verse is the Dopest. Lyrics, Flow & Energy outshined the 1st and Second Verses easy.. IMO Overall, Dope track just need more Energy from the 1st verse & better pronunciation from the 2nd verse .. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-07-2009, 08:12 PM	#3
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 853 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	Hmmm Wasnt Really Feelin This Hook...Needed Something More 1st Verse - Lyrics Are VERY Good...But The Flow Fell Off At Times...Overall The Verse Seemed It Was Lacking Something 2nd Verse - Flow Is Good...But Sometimes You Made Lines A Word Too Long....Delivery Was Good...Lyrics Are VERY Good...Nothing Really Stood Out Though 3rd Verse - Ya Flow Was Shaky On A Lot Of Parts...Be When It Worked..It WORKED...Lyrics Werent As Good As The Other Two But Your Presence Was The Best On The Track...My Favorite Verse Overall...Decent Track...Real Underground-Ish...Keep It Up Leave Some Feed On My Track "Don't Pray For Me" When You Get A Chance __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

06-08-2009, 04:55 PM	#4
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	Props to PB and Yung MI....bumpin for more feedback... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-09-2009, 10:37 AM	#5
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Ain't really likin the hook. Kind of boring. Verse 1- Lyrics are fuckin crazy on this shit. Multi's are firin on this. I liked the leave a dent in a diamond line. Flow was good, just a little choppy hear and there. Verse 2- Okay, Honestly I can't understand what he's saying. Post lyrics maybe? It sounds good, but I can't tell what the fuck the content is!!! Flow was good though. lol Verse 3- This has the best presence of the track, but your flow fell off here and there. Was good for the most part though. Lyrics were good too. __________________

06-10-2009, 09:05 AM	#6
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,436 Repped: 150 Repped 629 Times in 297 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 76 Times in 68 Posts	I love the whole militant we takin donw tha UK shit ! Beat sets the scene pretty damn perfectly Back to the future as an intruder to crack the computer ? Jeepers me ... HAHAHA Bad decisions got me chasin a ref ! Ah shit, good stuff my man, my bad for forgettin __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

06-10-2009, 09:13 AM	#7
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	props to smoke and rebel, btw BUMP __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-11-2009, 02:59 PM	#8
supragtx Im a wªlkin ßitch magnet Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: eAsT hARlEm Nu YaAAWwWwK Posts: 5,745 Repped: 470 Repped 1,358 Times in 629 Posts Neg Reps: 29 Neg Repped at 158 Times in 143 Posts	repped.. repped back... owe me blizzy.. damn dude i didnt know u did tracks... good track keep it up __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

06-11-2009, 04:59 PM	#9
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,041 Repped: 155 Repped 472 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 80 Times in 74 Posts	the beat is dope...hook was kinda plain...i cant speak on da lyrics cuz i dont know what the fuck yall saying first dude....i understood the word "fakers" then got lost like a nigga in da woods ... flow n multies was crazy..lyrics sounded good 2nd dude....idk...couldnt catch the lyrical content Bloodshot....ok...i understood ya shit...liked ya presence...flow is good but shaky sumtimes...lyrics r nice stay up

06-14-2009, 05:29 PM	#10
TheSecondComing Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Seattle Posts: 42 Repped: 0 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Everything On This Track Was Done Well...From The Lyrics...To The Flow...To The Delivery...To The Hook Im Really Feeling This

06-15-2009, 09:33 AM	#11
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	props witty, supra and second comin....BUMP __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-19-2009, 09:05 PM	#12
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,541 Repped: 634 Repped 808 Times in 404 Posts Neg Reps: 107 Neg Repped at 121 Times in 86 Posts	beat-nice, i fucks wit it...but really couldnet see myself on it hook - was aite....wasnet bad, need a tab bit more emotion in it thou first verse - flow was shakey at times...but flow steady tha whole verse, lyrics there..emotion on point second verse-i aint even gon lie, i couldnet hardly understand wat he was sayin in his verse....flow was shakey thou...cant really speak on tha lyrics..cuz i couldnet hear them that "clearly".... third verse-flow was good, emotion there, lyrics cool solid drop my dude.... stay up famo.... __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

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