:yayo: All I know ft J$0

C Gilbert · 06-04-2009, 01:03 AM

Leave feed....good, bad, hate, any feedback..

Good looks to JSO for the verse...

Remix

C Gilbert · 06-04-2009, 01:42 AM

Usershare added if zshare isnt working

Tom Chambers · 06-04-2009, 02:01 AM

C@$H17 · 06-04-2009, 07:01 AM

2nd verse crazy

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 06-04-2009, 10:38 AM

damn u a foul nigga...

Jso200688 · 06-04-2009, 12:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by C@$H17

2nd verse crazy

word up, thas me fam. thanx 4 tha props

Smoke1Life · 06-04-2009, 01:58 PM

Hook- Its alright. Don't like the effect you got on it. Maybe a little louder.

Verse 1- Shits decent. Flow stays on point. Need to work on that quality though. You mix your vocals? Lyrics are decent, nothing stands out to me though. Solid verse though.

Verse 2- Good presence. Delivery is pretty good. Flow stays solid. I liked the unemployed line. Good quality too. Couple mixing tweaks maybe.

Verse 3- lol sounds a little bit like Hard Target. Need some work on your mic presence. I think your dubs are just a little bit off though. not bad.

2nd verse owned.

C Gilbert · 06-04-2009, 02:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK

damn u a foul nigga...

Jso200688 · 06-05-2009, 12:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Smoke1Life

Hook- Its alright. Don't like the effect you got on it. Maybe a little louder.

Verse 1- Shits decent. Flow stays on point. Need to work on that quality though. You mix your vocals? Lyrics are decent, nothing stands out to me though. Solid verse though.

Verse 2- Good presence. Delivery is pretty good. Flow stays solid. I liked the unemployed line. Good quality too. Couple mixing tweaks maybe.

Verse 3- lol sounds a little bit like Hard Target. Need some work on your mic presence. I think your dubs are just a little bit off though. not bad.

2nd verse owned.

Good Lookin on tha feedback fam

Quote:

Originally Posted by OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK

damn u a foul nigga...

lol, wat's goin on hea?

C Gilbert · 06-05-2009, 01:56 AM

^^^ Got me wondering the same...I think I have an idea...Get at me Jae

C Gilbert · 06-05-2009, 02:17 PM

Bumping this

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-05-2009, 03:13 PM

1st Verse had a Decent consistent Flow, decent lyrics + Energy..

2nd Verse was Dope.. best verse on this.. Dope flow, punches, energy..

Chorus.. wasn't really feeling it..

Masterpiece · 06-05-2009, 07:53 PM

chorus is ok nothin special i cant understand the first line... 1st verse flow is decent lyrics were good...2nd verse is solid good verse so nice lines in there.....3rd verse is ight flow is there

RICH$LOCO · 06-05-2009, 09:23 PM

i think the hook need a lil bit of work too simplistic but alright the first verse the same a lil if u switched it up a lil on the bars it'd sound a lot better and ur vocals a lil too loud but cool though 3rd verse is sort of the same i think u got big potential to get alot better for reals and the second verse was dope though J$O did his thing on it flow and all was cool liked that verse

C Gilbert · 06-05-2009, 09:41 PM

Appreciate the feed back Rich and Masterpiece...

Bump

Jso200688 · 06-06-2009, 01:17 PM

thanx 4 tha feedback n compliments yedig

06-04-2009, 01:03 AM	#1
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	:yayo: All I know ft J$0 :yayo: All I know ft J$0 Leave feed....good, bad, hate, any feedback.. Good looks to JSO for the verse... Remix __________________ Last edited by C Gilbert; 06-04-2009 at 01:42 AM.

06-04-2009, 01:42 AM	#2
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Usershare added if zshare isnt working __________________

06-04-2009, 07:01 AM	#4
C@$H17 C@$h Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 5,278 Repped: 3,785 Repped 1,419 Times in 216 Posts Neg Reps: 57 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	2nd verse crazy __________________

06-04-2009, 10:38 AM	#5
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,576 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	damn u a foul nigga... __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

06-04-2009, 01:58 PM	#7
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Hook- Its alright. Don't like the effect you got on it. Maybe a little louder. Verse 1- Shits decent. Flow stays on point. Need to work on that quality though. You mix your vocals? Lyrics are decent, nothing stands out to me though. Solid verse though. Verse 2- Good presence. Delivery is pretty good. Flow stays solid. I liked the unemployed line. Good quality too. Couple mixing tweaks maybe. Verse 3- lol sounds a little bit like Hard Target. Need some work on your mic presence. I think your dubs are just a little bit off though. not bad. 2nd verse owned. __________________

06-04-2009, 02:01 AM	#3
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts

06-05-2009, 01:56 AM	#10
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^^^ Got me wondering the same...I think I have an idea...Get at me Jae __________________

06-05-2009, 02:17 PM	#11
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Bumping this __________________

06-05-2009, 03:13 PM	#12
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,901 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	1st Verse had a Decent consistent Flow, decent lyrics + Energy.. 2nd Verse was Dope.. best verse on this.. Dope flow, punches, energy.. Chorus.. wasn't really feeling it.. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-05-2009, 07:53 PM	#13
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	chorus is ok nothin special i cant understand the first line... 1st verse flow is decent lyrics were good...2nd verse is solid good verse so nice lines in there.....3rd verse is ight flow is there

06-05-2009, 09:23 PM	#14
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	i think the hook need a lil bit of work too simplistic but alright the first verse the same a lil if u switched it up a lil on the bars it'd sound a lot better and ur vocals a lil too loud but cool though 3rd verse is sort of the same i think u got big potential to get alot better for reals and the second verse was dope though J$O did his thing on it flow and all was cool liked that verse __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

06-05-2009, 09:41 PM	#15
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Appreciate the feed back Rich and Masterpiece... Bump __________________

06-06-2009, 01:17 PM	#16
Jso200688 Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 320 Repped: 23 Repped 44 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx 4 tha feedback n compliments yedig __________________ ****Young Fam>>>> http://www.myspace.com/youngfam2009 <<<<<<<<<< BEST MUSIC OUT CHEARD?!****

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