G.O.D.: || The Mastermind Diaries ||

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-02-2009, 08:48 PM

Basically, i ventilated on this shit.. This dilla beat made me fucking zone.. lmfao @ the chorus.. i felt the need to just freestyle one... 1

The Mastermind Diaries..

I'm looking for Collabs.. PM me.

Truthfully, I’m a GOD with Vast Caliber,
All my Haters ‘Tripping for a Minute’ without the Salvia,
My consistency is an Acid Trip in Vegas,
It just refuses to die; it’s Immaculate, the Greatest,
Cus Life’ a Trip from a Massive Sniff of Faders,
Full of People that are mostly counterfeit and traitors,
They Judas, I’m the Truest, I Influence,
So what scares most People I Pursue it,
This Moment, I can’t Lose it,
I’m Legendary with the Pen as my Weaponry,
Keep my mind high from the Bud that’s so heavenly,
If that’s the Case, in the heavens is where I’ll forever be,
Jotting down this mind state, so don’t forget to remember me,
They aren’t Comprehended me,
So I had to revive the passion that I used to hold Secondly,
As a G.O.D. is how they will mention me,
Lines that’s Subliminal I’m doing it intentionally,

I’m a king that’s Uncrowned,
Survive in the Underground,
I‘ll never Dumb it down,
Diamond in the Rough,
Shit’s starting to make me wonder now,
Yeah.
Cus Everything’s in the Gutter now.

Smoke1Life · 06-02-2009, 08:56 PM

Not A bad freestyle... might have to add a best freestyle award to the shit if more people do things like this.

Flow kind of went off here and there but that was too be expected since it is a freestyle, i liked the use of vocab, shows some real off the top skill.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-02-2009, 08:58 PM

Word^^^ Thanks for Feed

Man i love this Beat..

Upppppp

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-02-2009, 09:22 PM

Feeddddddddddddddd

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-03-2009, 01:19 PM

Damn.. No one feeds anymore... ^^

Mazarati1986 · 06-03-2009, 07:20 PM

mushmouth and offbeat in mad spots

didnt seem like this came from the heart. more like the freestyle section.

word

Masterpiece · 06-04-2009, 12:26 AM

beat is fire...that salvia line is nice....flow could use some work that bridge at the end could definitely use some work...there was one part that you stumbled over your bars but it was decent keep workin at it

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-04-2009, 05:05 PM

Thanks for Feed^^

I'ma work on the Flow...

Uppppp....

YoungJ · 06-04-2009, 07:34 PM

Flows ight....lyrics are tight fam...keep wit it n send me a collab sometime.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-04-2009, 07:36 PM

No Doubt ^^^ Expect a PM in the Near Future^^

Upppppp

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-05-2009, 02:03 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppppp

06-02-2009, 08:48 PM	#1
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	G.O.D.: \|\| The Mastermind Diaries \|\| G.O.D.: \|\| The Mastermind Diaries \|\| Basically, i ventilated on this shit.. This dilla beat made me fucking zone.. lmfao @ the chorus.. i felt the need to just freestyle one... 1 The Mastermind Diaries.. I'm looking for Collabs.. PM me. Truthfully, I’m a GOD with Vast Caliber, All my Haters ‘Tripping for a Minute’ without the Salvia, My consistency is an Acid Trip in Vegas, It just refuses to die; it’s Immaculate, the Greatest, Cus Life’ a Trip from a Massive Sniff of Faders, Full of People that are mostly counterfeit and traitors, They Judas, I’m the Truest, I Influence, So what scares most People I Pursue it, This Moment, I can’t Lose it, I’m Legendary with the Pen as my Weaponry, Keep my mind high from the Bud that’s so heavenly, If that’s the Case, in the heavens is where I’ll forever be, Jotting down this mind state, so don’t forget to remember me, They aren’t Comprehended me, So I had to revive the passion that I used to hold Secondly, As a G.O.D. is how they will mention me, Lines that’s Subliminal I’m doing it intentionally, I’m a king that’s Uncrowned, Survive in the Underground, I‘ll never Dumb it down, Diamond in the Rough, Shit’s starting to make me wonder now, Yeah. Cus Everything’s in the Gutter now. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-02-2009, 08:56 PM	#2
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Not A bad freestyle... might have to add a best freestyle award to the shit if more people do things like this. Flow kind of went off here and there but that was too be expected since it is a freestyle, i liked the use of vocab, shows some real off the top skill. __________________ Last edited by Smoke1Life; 06-02-2009 at 09:01 PM.

06-02-2009, 08:58 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Word^^^ Thanks for Feed Man i love this Beat.. Upppppp __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-02-2009, 09:22 PM	#4
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Feeddddddddddddddd __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-03-2009, 01:19 PM	#5
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Damn.. No one feeds anymore... ^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-03-2009, 07:20 PM	#6
Mazarati1986 Banned Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 1,533 Repped: 233 Repped 271 Times in 151 Posts Neg Reps: 101 Neg Repped at 65 Times in 48 Posts	mushmouth and offbeat in mad spots didnt seem like this came from the heart. more like the freestyle section. word

06-04-2009, 12:26 AM	#7
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	beat is fire...that salvia line is nice....flow could use some work that bridge at the end could definitely use some work...there was one part that you stumbled over your bars but it was decent keep workin at it

06-04-2009, 05:05 PM	#8
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Thanks for Feed^^ I'ma work on the Flow... Uppppp.... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-04-2009, 07:34 PM	#9
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Flows ight....lyrics are tight fam...keep wit it n send me a collab sometime.

06-04-2009, 07:36 PM	#10
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	No Doubt ^^^ Expect a PM in the Near Future^^ Upppppp __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-05-2009, 02:03 PM	#11
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Upppppppppppppppppppppppp __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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