The fuck is a jay daniels?

Tom Chambers · 06-02-2009, 04:19 PM

this ain't my battle verse.......this is just me giving you some light jabs

shout out to Karizmatik

youngking187 · 06-02-2009, 04:24 PM

emotion waz dope..mic presence waz good..
lyrical content waz decent..flow waz good..
beat is sick..overall this is a nice ass diss homie..

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-02-2009, 04:26 PM

Ahaahahaaa .... Damn...

& let me quote myself real quick...

Quote:

Originally Posted by PBMaSteRMiNdiN

That shit was wack...

But..

I like the flow and Confidence..

Other than that.. Thomas is gon put a Foot in your Ass.

C Gilbert · 06-02-2009, 04:28 PM

Beat is nice as fuck
Emotion/Presence are good
Flow was good
The dragon line/jack daniels/charisma lines were tight..nice diss
Looking for ur battle verse

JoshNeal123 · 06-02-2009, 04:32 PM

Weaaaaak. Just being real. I know u got a lot of peeps on your dick. I mean they may see this as dope. But compared to what I have against you, this shits weak.

YUNG STIXX · 06-02-2009, 04:33 PM

NiCE PUNCHLINES IN THIS MUTHAFUCKA...BUT WAIT TILL MY VERSE FOR THIS NIGGA COMES OUT....WE'RE ABOUT TO END THIS NIGGA...

youngking187 · 06-02-2009, 04:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JoshNeal123

Weaaaaak. Just being real. I know u got a lot of peeps on your dick. I mean they may see this as dope. But compared to what I have against you, this shits weak.

^^your a bitch..aint nobody riding dicks nigga..nh..
better relax with that shit..

Tom Chambers · 06-02-2009, 04:36 PM

Quote:

Weaaaaak. Just being real. I know u got a lot of peeps on your dick. I mean they may see this as dope. But compared to what I have against you, this shits weak.

good luck i guess..............but like i said...i'm prepared to hear same shit new rapper type thing...........

Smoke1Life · 06-02-2009, 07:15 PM

Shits pretty good. Got good emotion especially when you starting out. Some of the flow is a little meshy. I ain't gonna say you lose it, but you definitely huggin the line. Lyrics are solid. I look forward to hearing a response from this guy. Damn chambers, you sound drunk as fuck towards the end of this lol. Keep this saved that way you can post it at the end of the month for award consideration.

JoshNeal123 · 06-02-2009, 07:21 PM

^ I thought the same, he started off great no lie I can even admitt that, but fell off somethin' severe. Maybe its cause he ain't strong doing whole takes. I ain't know if he punched in or not.

Tom Chambers · 06-03-2009, 12:27 AM

i never punch in.................punch in's are for pussies..........

youngking187 · 06-03-2009, 12:47 AM

^^^...whats punch ins

Tom Chambers · 06-03-2009, 12:50 AM

when you stop recording..........mid verse or after a set period of bars....then you come back to that spot after and record the next series of bars..........its suppose to make it easier breathe control wise.................

JoshNeal123 · 06-03-2009, 01:27 AM

Eh punch ins make my life easier sometimes when I happen to write lyrics that are impossible to flow straight cause they cut into eachother. Quit vibin off eminem like "no punches thats weak shit". Plenty of artists use punch ins, it's an efficient way of recording these days. Only makes your shit sound better. Otherwise I love the feel I get from straight spitting one take. It ain't as if I can't do that too.

Jay Daniels says:

Kariz-Matik - Sweet Funky Moses! says:
Lyrics are whack as fuck lol

*before he even heard u mention his name*
and he's a fan of yours too at time so he's just being real.
u need 2 go harder than that. pause.

Tom Chambers · 06-03-2009, 01:43 AM

^i said he was a good artist..i never said he was a good rapper............and why do you seek the approval of him?

it seems that your ego revolves around seeking people's agreement and propz.......and your sole purpose of rapping is to have people support your shit..........which is typical of some1 who's been beat down his whole life....which would explain your overgrown ego.........

and no offence....i'm not expecting K to say yo dope fucking shit...regardless of how real he is.......its just common sense that he got bias slightly towards......same as some people i talk to who have said that i've killed you so far...........i never talk to most of these kats.........not smoke.....not gilbert............so to say their dickriding......is just ludicrous.............and i never claimed that this was me just going in....you've been on thsi lil diss of yours for 3 days now.....i've wrote this after work....and i was hungover to record this............if i took 3 days trust me.......you wouldn't stand a flying chance in hell....and that isn't me being big headed.....cuz i ain't liek that...now that i typed a 400 word essay...i'ma stop

YUNG STIXX · 06-03-2009, 01:58 AM

NiGGAS LIKE ME GOTTA PUNCH IN EVERY NOW N THEN CUZ MY FLOW GETS CRAZY STUPID SOMETIMES NAH MEAN?? WHAT OTHER NiGGAS YOU KNOW USED THE SAME SYLLABLES IN 35 BARS??? NAH MEAN???

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-03-2009, 02:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YUNG STIXX

NiGGAS LIKE ME GOTTA PUNCH IN EVERY NOW N THEN CUZ MY FLOW GETS CRAZY STUPID SOMETIMES NAH MEAN?? WHAT OTHER NiGGAS YOU KNOW USED THE SAME SYLLABLES IN 35 BARS??? NAH MEAN???

Me^^

youngking187 · 06-03-2009, 02:40 AM

yea i punch in sometimes...not that i cant flow through the whole verse.(trust me i could)...shit just make my shit sound more smoother..but is punching in considered a bad thing??????...cuz i do it sometimes..

Tom Chambers · 06-03-2009, 02:45 AM

^not much.......least not if you don't perform shows and shit.............................................. .............but to me...i hate it......makes me feel dirty and shit

youngking187 · 06-03-2009, 02:51 AM

^^^lmfaoooooo@makes me feel dirty and shit

B DONington · 06-03-2009, 03:34 AM

he goddamn body bagged this guy

wooow

JoshNeal123 · 06-03-2009, 07:37 AM

^ Easily impressed. All i'm sayin is wait for my bars before u tell me who's guna put a foot in who's ass. I've got that shit written. I had it done days ago. And 72 bars aint even take me an hour all up. But fuck all this brag bullshit it aint about time it aint about none of that shit.

Well as far as me recording, it is. I just gotta find the time to do that cause I got other business i'm takin' care off and then we can get at this battle scenario we got brewin' here.

Tom Chambers · 06-03-2009, 07:42 AM

^don't you got a home studio? :-S

Tom Chambers · 06-03-2009, 07:45 AM

oh yea.....and i still find it highly disrespectful that you like....downing ppl's musical opinion/taste just cuz they like this.................

scool · 06-03-2009, 08:27 AM

karismatik is a fucking faggot and I killed that bitchwigga a long ass time ago lmfaoo

i swear to god, me and lyrik bodied that fag

06-02-2009, 04:19 PM	#1
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	The fuck is a jay daniels? The fuck is a jay daniels? this ain't my battle verse.......this is just me giving you some light jabs shout out to Karizmatik

06-02-2009, 04:24 PM	#2
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	emotion waz dope..mic presence waz good.. lyrical content waz decent..flow waz good.. beat is sick..overall this is a nice ass diss homie.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-02-2009, 04:28 PM	#4
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Beat is nice as fuck Emotion/Presence are good Flow was good The dragon line/jack daniels/charisma lines were tight..nice diss Looking for ur battle verse __________________ Last edited by C Gilbert; 06-02-2009 at 04:31 PM.

06-02-2009, 04:32 PM	#5
JoshNeal123 Jay Daniels Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,188 Repped: 86 Repped 492 Times in 101 Posts Neg Reps: 17 Neg Repped at 87 Times in 44 Posts	Weaaaaak. Just being real. I know u got a lot of peeps on your dick. I mean they may see this as dope. But compared to what I have against you, this shits weak. __________________

06-02-2009, 04:33 PM	#6
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,900 Repped: 411 Repped 1,290 Times in 404 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	NiCE PUNCHLINES IN THIS MUTHAFUCKA...BUT WAIT TILL MY VERSE FOR THIS NIGGA COMES OUT....WE'RE ABOUT TO END THIS NIGGA... __________________ MiXTAPE DROPPING S00N

06-02-2009, 07:15 PM	#9
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Shits pretty good. Got good emotion especially when you starting out. Some of the flow is a little meshy. I ain't gonna say you lose it, but you definitely huggin the line. Lyrics are solid. I look forward to hearing a response from this guy. Damn chambers, you sound drunk as fuck towards the end of this lol. Keep this saved that way you can post it at the end of the month for award consideration. __________________

06-02-2009, 07:21 PM	#10
JoshNeal123 Jay Daniels Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,188 Repped: 86 Repped 492 Times in 101 Posts Neg Reps: 17 Neg Repped at 87 Times in 44 Posts	^ I thought the same, he started off great no lie I can even admitt that, but fell off somethin' severe. Maybe its cause he ain't strong doing whole takes. I ain't know if he punched in or not. __________________

06-03-2009, 12:27 AM	#11
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	i never punch in.................punch in's are for pussies..........

06-03-2009, 12:47 AM	#12
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^...whats punch ins __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-03-2009, 12:50 AM	#13
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	when you stop recording..........mid verse or after a set period of bars....then you come back to that spot after and record the next series of bars..........its suppose to make it easier breathe control wise.................

06-03-2009, 01:27 AM	#14
JoshNeal123 Jay Daniels Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,188 Repped: 86 Repped 492 Times in 101 Posts Neg Reps: 17 Neg Repped at 87 Times in 44 Posts	Eh punch ins make my life easier sometimes when I happen to write lyrics that are impossible to flow straight cause they cut into eachother. Quit vibin off eminem like "no punches thats weak shit". Plenty of artists use punch ins, it's an efficient way of recording these days. Only makes your shit sound better. Otherwise I love the feel I get from straight spitting one take. It ain't as if I can't do that too. Jay Daniels says: Kariz-Matik - Sweet Funky Moses! says: Lyrics are whack as fuck lol before he even heard u mention his name and he's a fan of yours too at time so he's just being real. u need 2 go harder than that. pause. __________________

06-03-2009, 01:43 AM	#15
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^i said he was a good artist..i never said he was a good rapper............and why do you seek the approval of him? it seems that your ego revolves around seeking people's agreement and propz.......and your sole purpose of rapping is to have people support your shit..........which is typical of some1 who's been beat down his whole life....which would explain your overgrown ego......... and no offence....i'm not expecting K to say yo dope fucking shit...regardless of how real he is.......its just common sense that he got bias slightly towards......same as some people i talk to who have said that i've killed you so far...........i never talk to most of these kats.........not smoke.....not gilbert............so to say their dickriding......is just ludicrous.............and i never claimed that this was me just going in....you've been on thsi lil diss of yours for 3 days now.....i've wrote this after work....and i was hungover to record this............if i took 3 days trust me.......you wouldn't stand a flying chance in hell....and that isn't me being big headed.....cuz i ain't liek that...now that i typed a 400 word essay...i'ma stop

06-03-2009, 01:58 AM	#16
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,900 Repped: 411 Repped 1,290 Times in 404 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	NiGGAS LIKE ME GOTTA PUNCH IN EVERY NOW N THEN CUZ MY FLOW GETS CRAZY STUPID SOMETIMES NAH MEAN?? WHAT OTHER NiGGAS YOU KNOW USED THE SAME SYLLABLES IN 35 BARS??? NAH MEAN??? __________________ MiXTAPE DROPPING S00N Last edited by YUNG STIXX; 06-03-2009 at 02:01 AM.

06-03-2009, 02:40 AM	#18
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	yea i punch in sometimes...not that i cant flow through the whole verse.(trust me i could)...shit just make my shit sound more smoother..but is punching in considered a bad thing??????...cuz i do it sometimes.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-03-2009, 02:45 AM	#19
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^not much.......least not if you don't perform shows and shit.............................................. .............but to me...i hate it......makes me feel dirty and shit

06-03-2009, 02:51 AM	#20
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^lmfaoooooo@makes me feel dirty and shit __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-03-2009, 03:34 AM	#21
B DONington Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: 613...oTTawA fukaz Posts: 409 Repped: 27 Repped 10 Times in 7 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	he goddamn body bagged this guy wooow __________________ MYSPACE.COM/ITSBDON

06-03-2009, 07:37 AM	#22
JoshNeal123 Jay Daniels Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,188 Repped: 86 Repped 492 Times in 101 Posts Neg Reps: 17 Neg Repped at 87 Times in 44 Posts	^ Easily impressed. All i'm sayin is wait for my bars before u tell me who's guna put a foot in who's ass. I've got that shit written. I had it done days ago. And 72 bars aint even take me an hour all up. But fuck all this brag bullshit it aint about time it aint about none of that shit. Well as far as me recording, it is. I just gotta find the time to do that cause I got other business i'm takin' care off and then we can get at this battle scenario we got brewin' here. __________________

06-03-2009, 07:42 AM	#23
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^don't you got a home studio? :-S

06-03-2009, 07:45 AM	#24
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	oh yea.....and i still find it highly disrespectful that you like....downing ppl's musical opinion/taste just cuz they like this.................

06-03-2009, 08:27 AM	#25
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	karismatik is a fucking faggot and I killed that bitchwigga a long ass time ago lmfaoo i swear to god, me and lyrik bodied that fag

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