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06-02-2009, 02:06 AM
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Lost My Job - Trip-Sett {Snippet}
i been sittin on dis track awhile now, i really dont even kno if get'em gonna write too...but it depends..ima make his ass write to dis!...
 i wasnet gonna post anymore...but dammit, I CANT HELP MYSELF....  as u can tell by listein to this...tha hook aint done...need to add a part to it...this is just my verse, hook..n outro hook...final version "should" be ready for tha mixtape so leave sum feed people, good, BAD, none, watever.... HEAT, TOM, YLOUIS!.EDiT:C.GiLBERT... ...i got yall on dem colbs....THE REINCARNATION COMIN SOON... holla atcha boi...
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06-02-2009, 02:35 AM
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Fuck you better have my collab to fam haha...ima bout to peep this
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06-02-2009, 02:42 AM
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This joint has potential for sure..if u add what you say u bout to then its a nice track.
Good subject to touch upon...hook was tight/lyrics stayed on concept...flow on point
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06-02-2009, 02:49 AM
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hook sounded nice..lyrical content stuck with the concept..big ups on that..
delivery and flow waz good..emotion waz good..ill be lookin forward too the full track..
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06-02-2009, 12:02 PM
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I Like the Beat & Lyrics.. the Final version should be Dope..
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06-03-2009, 10:49 AM
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^ good looks on tha feed fellas...thanks
bumpin
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06-04-2009, 12:39 AM
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beat is simple but it works...i like the concept since its shit that people are goin through right now...hook sounds nice lyrics were nice...should be a solid drop....lookin for some bangers on your next tape
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06-04-2009, 10:51 AM
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^ good looks homie, thanks for tha feed...
bumpin dis bytch
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06-04-2009, 08:42 PM
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bumpin dis bytch
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06-05-2009, 11:23 AM
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bumpin.........
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06-06-2009, 12:22 PM
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bumpin.........
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06-06-2009, 01:03 PM
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the verse was on point...liked ur emotion alot, u could rap about a field trip to the museum and it would sound dope...lyrics are aight...i wasnt feelin the hook tho, kinda like screechin in my ear but the rest was on point...beat sounded old school...Wheres ur man Nyce at?? he aint been on 2 songs so far...u guys back on the outs again
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06-06-2009, 01:17 PM
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^ naw, i dont think he gonna drop his verse to this....dont kno yet, we got sum other shit in tha tank for tha mixtape...gonna be sum nyce work..
good looks on tha feed my nigga, thanks.. bump
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