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PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-29-2009, 10:28 PM

Deep ass Shit^^

BTW.. this is a track from my Mixtape "The Mastermind Diaries" due before July 20th..

This is more Knowledge for the Open Minds,
On the streets where we put in that Overtime,
Struggling to make money from these Hopeless Grinds,
To Rocking Chains that ‘Flash like We’re Open Signs’
We might Comatose on Ice,
So it’s “Money, Power, Respect” till we Overdose on Life,
Or you might meet that Holy Ghost tonight,
Every day you slowly roll the Dice,
We do whatever to keep our feet Above the Pavement,
So the Term: “Dope Boy” is an Understatement,
(We Can Never Win)
It’s a Depression, but we’ll ‘Bleed for these Conflict Diamonds’
Hear truth from a Convicts Silence,
We can never let them Fools Reach Us,
In Prison, We learn more than what the School’s teach us…
Some find God & others learn about Conspiracy,
In the Media is where them Smoke & Mirrors be,
Hiding behind the shadows in Obscurity,
Illuminati is about to come certainly.
The Industry is a Fraternal Bloodline,
As Spotless Minds stand under this Eternal Sunshine
In the ‘Mist of an Revolution’
We Murder & more Violence is the Retribution,
& chasing ‘Dead Presidents’ is an Execution,
Overpopulate prisons like it’s a Resolution,
It’s a Pyramid Scheme.

...

youngking187 · 05-30-2009, 01:01 AM

beat is dope...flow waz good for the most part..i think i heard maybe 1 or 2 slips..
lyrical content waz good..the screwed part in the middle wasnt need..IMO..
overall shit cool homie..i see you got better at this shit..
keep grinding and tryna get better fam...stay up my nigg

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-30-2009, 11:34 AM

Good Looking on Feed^^

Fre3dom · 05-30-2009, 12:13 PM

lyrically your very good and your mic presence was kool...problem was that the flow was kinda fucked up...kept going off and on and it sounded like you couldnt catch the beat and sometimes like you were reading off a piece of paper

wasnt feelin the beat much either...but as I said lyrics are good....jus gotta keep workin on that flow fam...keep droppin

Rebel INS {CF} · 05-30-2009, 01:17 PM

Ah Street Corners instru, ILLNESS !

I assume u got that new mic ? Quality is pretty good

Like King said, wasnt really feelin that screwed bit, kinda threw the whole thing off for a while IMO

Pretty nice

Mazarati1986 · 05-30-2009, 02:37 PM

U sound like j.prov just with better lyrics

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-30-2009, 03:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rebel INS {CF}

Ah Street Corners instru, ILLNESS !

I assume u got that new mic ? Quality is pretty good

Like King said, wasnt really feelin that screwed bit, kinda threw the whole thing off for a while IMO

Pretty nice

For those who said i was just a Myspace Rapper.. ^^

At Maza.. Yeah.. Sore Throat.. No Prov

YoungJ · 05-30-2009, 07:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mazarati1986

U sound like j.prov just with better lyrics

lol j.prov

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-30-2009, 07:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungJ

lol j.prov

Who da fuck is J.Prov?

^

Mazarati1986 · 05-30-2009, 10:29 PM

sorry for the error

LMAOOOOO!!! J.PROV?

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-31-2009, 08:49 PM

Up.............

RICH$LOCO · 05-31-2009, 09:11 PM

nice lyricism man good to see someone in here got that it went good with the beat i think but the low semitone voice was not needed i think nice shit though

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-31-2009, 09:45 PM

Good Lookin Richhhhhh^^^^^^

Uppppppppp

Blizzy · 06-01-2009, 09:01 AM

Lyrical content is ILL....we need to collab baby....flow was shaky, felt like you needed to add a couple more syllables to a few lines so they flowed better and what was with the screwed bit? didn't fit at all lol.....anyway stay up PB.....

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-01-2009, 04:52 PM

Yeh.. I'm still tryna master the Flow.. i'm working.. ahha.. hit me up witta collab blizzy.. @ the screwed part.. i like doin shit that people don't like.. iunno..

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-02-2009, 06:52 PM

UP...............

05-29-2009, 10:28 PM	#1
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	\|PB\| Street Corners \|PB\| \|PB\| Street Corners \|PB\| Deep ass Shit^^ BTW.. this is a track from my Mixtape "The Mastermind Diaries" due before July 20th.. This is more Knowledge for the Open Minds, On the streets where we put in that Overtime, Struggling to make money from these Hopeless Grinds, To Rocking Chains that ‘Flash like We’re Open Signs’ We might Comatose on Ice, So it’s “Money, Power, Respect” till we Overdose on Life, Or you might meet that Holy Ghost tonight, Every day you slowly roll the Dice, We do whatever to keep our feet Above the Pavement, So the Term: “Dope Boy” is an Understatement, (We Can Never Win) It’s a Depression, but we’ll ‘Bleed for these Conflict Diamonds’ Hear truth from a Convicts Silence, We can never let them Fools Reach Us, In Prison, We learn more than what the School’s teach us… Some find God & others learn about Conspiracy, In the Media is where them Smoke & Mirrors be, Hiding behind the shadows in Obscurity, Illuminati is about to come certainly. The Industry is a Fraternal Bloodline, As Spotless Minds stand under this Eternal Sunshine In the ‘Mist of an Revolution’ We Murder & more Violence is the Retribution, & chasing ‘Dead Presidents’ is an Execution, Overpopulate prisons like it’s a Resolution, It’s a Pyramid Scheme. ... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito Last edited by PBMaSteRMiNdiN; 05-31-2009 at 10:19 PM.

05-30-2009, 01:01 AM	#2
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	beat is dope...flow waz good for the most part..i think i heard maybe 1 or 2 slips.. lyrical content waz good..the screwed part in the middle wasnt need..IMO.. overall shit cool homie..i see you got better at this shit.. keep grinding and tryna get better fam...stay up my nigg __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-30-2009, 11:34 AM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Good Looking on Feed^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

05-30-2009, 01:17 PM	#5
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	Ah Street Corners instru, ILLNESS ! I assume u got that new mic ? Quality is pretty good Like King said, wasnt really feelin that screwed bit, kinda threw the whole thing off for a while IMO Pretty nice __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

05-31-2009, 08:49 PM	#11
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Up............. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

05-30-2009, 12:13 PM	#4
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	lyrically your very good and your mic presence was kool...problem was that the flow was kinda fucked up...kept going off and on and it sounded like you couldnt catch the beat and sometimes like you were reading off a piece of paper wasnt feelin the beat much either...but as I said lyrics are good....jus gotta keep workin on that flow fam...keep droppin

05-30-2009, 02:37 PM	#6
Mazarati1986 Banned Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 1,533 Repped: 233 Repped 271 Times in 151 Posts Neg Reps: 101 Neg Repped at 65 Times in 48 Posts	U sound like j.prov just with better lyrics

05-30-2009, 10:29 PM	#10
Mazarati1986 Banned Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 1,533 Repped: 233 Repped 271 Times in 151 Posts Neg Reps: 101 Neg Repped at 65 Times in 48 Posts	sorry for the error LMAOOOOO!!! J.PROV?

05-31-2009, 09:11 PM	#12
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	nice lyricism man good to see someone in here got that it went good with the beat i think but the low semitone voice was not needed i think nice shit though __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

05-31-2009, 09:45 PM	#13
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Good Lookin Richhhhhh^^^^^^ Uppppppppp __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-01-2009, 09:01 AM	#14
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	Lyrical content is ILL....we need to collab baby....flow was shaky, felt like you needed to add a couple more syllables to a few lines so they flowed better and what was with the screwed bit? didn't fit at all lol.....anyway stay up PB..... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-01-2009, 04:52 PM	#15
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yeh.. I'm still tryna master the Flow.. i'm working.. ahha.. hit me up witta collab blizzy.. @ the screwed part.. i like doin shit that people don't like.. iunno.. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

06-02-2009, 06:52 PM	#16
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	UP............... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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