hey....beat i made for my album

Tom Chambers · 04-16-2009, 07:53 PM

tom chambers why hasn't your mixtapes dropped?

good question person i made up to introduce myself in 3rd person...

i've been working on beats more then rapping lately.............this will be the beat to my first single.....and i wouldn't mind some feedback.....good....bad.....hate....love.....its all welcomed...........

RICH$LOCO · 04-16-2009, 08:09 PM

nicely done i been making beats to but i still recorded all my tracks i got like 10 tracks written im just slowly recording though but if u taking making beat seriously then do ur thing man nice beatsomething simple but dope and the change sounds a bit weird i guess that part is for ur hook but one of the sound sound way too different than the rest but overall its sound nice

i got some original beats too hit me up if u wanna take a look at em

youngking187 · 04-16-2009, 08:16 PM

*hacks toms myspace page and sells the beat on soundclick*

*only gives him 5 percent of what i sell it for*

Tom Chambers · 04-16-2009, 08:18 PM

slow money's better then no money

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 04-16-2009, 08:22 PM

Give me this beat...

J~Souljah · 04-16-2009, 08:24 PM

^^^how much does your girl weigh?...gimmie an estimate

LA-Kid · 04-16-2009, 09:11 PM

Beats pretty clean, sounds like something you would record to aha. But you mixed the sounds well. I see what you were going for, maybe try addin a few more mellow sounds during the verse to make it switch up from being repetitive u feel? good shit tho, especially since u havent been making beats too long, correct?

n try using some different acoustic drums, maybe something that hits a lil harder

Tom Chambers · 04-16-2009, 09:30 PM

^good looks on the feedback

J~Souljah · 04-16-2009, 09:33 PM

^^^how much does ya girl weigh nigga!?!?!??!

scool · 04-17-2009, 06:28 AM

aye nigga you and yo girl need to get a room for real.... I ain't tryna read all into your romantic love life when Im checking ur lil jingles........ *realises thats the only reason chambers posts his myspace all the time*

.... hmm ight then

uh the beat, its good

Lyrikcha · 04-17-2009, 07:06 AM

yea I already told u what I thought bout this shit...its repetitive and boring...U had a good idea but u fucked it up with the repetitiveness and the boringness...smh...

scool · 04-17-2009, 07:24 AM

tell me one thing chambers

why wuld I think bout tomorrow when I'm goonin today???

Witty Qwan · 04-17-2009, 12:27 PM

like a slow mellow beat....i fucks with it

04-16-2009, 07:53 PM	#1
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	hey....beat i made for my album hey....beat i made for my album tom chambers why hasn't your mixtapes dropped? good question person i made up to introduce myself in 3rd person... i've been working on beats more then rapping lately.............this will be the beat to my first single.....and i wouldn't mind some feedback.....good....bad.....hate....love.....its all welcomed...........

04-16-2009, 08:09 PM	#2
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	nicely done i been making beats to but i still recorded all my tracks i got like 10 tracks written im just slowly recording though but if u taking making beat seriously then do ur thing man nice beatsomething simple but dope and the change sounds a bit weird i guess that part is for ur hook but one of the sound sound way too different than the rest but overall its sound nice i got some original beats too hit me up if u wanna take a look at em __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

04-16-2009, 08:16 PM	#3
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	hacks toms myspace page and sells the beat on soundclick only gives him 5 percent of what i sell it for __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-16-2009, 08:22 PM	#5
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Give me this beat... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

04-17-2009, 07:06 AM	#11
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,373 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	yea I already told u what I thought bout this shit...its repetitive and boring...U had a good idea but u fucked it up with the repetitiveness and the boringness...smh... __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

04-16-2009, 08:18 PM	#4
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	slow money's better then no money

04-16-2009, 08:24 PM	#6
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^^how much does your girl weigh?...gimmie an estimate

04-16-2009, 09:11 PM	#7
LA-Kid POYNT BLANK Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: LA Posts: 5,387 Repped: 9 Repped 12 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Beats pretty clean, sounds like something you would record to aha. But you mixed the sounds well. I see what you were going for, maybe try addin a few more mellow sounds during the verse to make it switch up from being repetitive u feel? good shit tho, especially since u havent been making beats too long, correct? n try using some different acoustic drums, maybe something that hits a lil harder

04-16-2009, 09:30 PM	#8
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^good looks on the feedback

04-16-2009, 09:33 PM	#9
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^^how much does ya girl weigh nigga!?!?!??!

04-17-2009, 06:28 AM	#10
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	aye nigga you and yo girl need to get a room for real.... I ain't tryna read all into your romantic love life when Im checking ur lil jingles........ realises thats the only reason chambers posts his myspace all the time .... hmm ight then uh the beat, its good

04-17-2009, 07:24 AM	#12
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	tell me one thing chambers why wuld I think bout tomorrow when I'm goonin today???

04-17-2009, 12:27 PM	#13
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,052 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	like a slow mellow beat....i fucks with it __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

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