[NEW!]YoungKing-"You Can Make It"

youngking187 · 04-15-2009, 03:43 AM

Produced By.Sinema
i know my flow slipped on some parts..
feed neg/pos or whatever yall do..
appreciate it..honestly...

Quote:

(chorus)
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it.
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it

v/1..YoungKing
listen while i take u through the roads of new glory..//
this real niggaz shit,muthafucka true story..//
u never pose to give up,failure doesn’t exist..//
live as if theres no 2mar,and give ya mova a kiss..//
make a wish,dont make it harder then what it is..//
i know that death is easy,and its harder for us to live..//
keep ya held high,and vision greatness at its best..//
youngin have faith,even when u waken up to stress..//
knowledge can be kicked,and can be thrown all away..//
ask a question,god is only one phone call away..//
dont be timid to speak,u aint gotta hide your face..//
practice,total opposite of what iverson would say..//
live ya life,dont let nobody,get in the way of it..//
go to college,and find what u wanna major in..//
i hate to break it down to you,but its for your own rights..//
fuck me????alright then,reincarnate ya own life..//

(chorus)
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it.
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it

v/2..YoungKing
9 times outta 10,things aint goin get handed too you..//
make a move like 2020,expand ya view..//
visualize the greatness,and erase the devestation..//
prey to god,and keep a distance away from satan..//
respect ya people,even if they dont respect you..//
cuz when u get to the gates,u'll get let through..//
honor ya society,give ya neighbors a thumbs up..//
beware of the heartless,thats keepin them gunz tucked..//
and when ya make it,dont forget where u came from..//
dats where u got your name from,ya shame from..//
your respect,knowledge,struggle and ya pain from..//
everything you recieve,better be sure to honor it..//
your faith in god,help u get up out ya mama crib..//
enjoy life,you only got one chance to live..//
do what u gotta do,get married or have kids..//
never backdown from a challenge,just face it..//
cuz..//

(chorus)
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it.
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it

(outro) king
through the ups and down..
he goin make it...she goin make it
we goin make it...
through the smiles and frowns..
she goin make it...he goin make it
we goin make it...
through the ups and down..
he goin make it...she goin make it
we goin make it...
through the smiles and frowns..
she goin make it...he goin make it
we goin make itttt...hahaaaa

(chorus)
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it.
You can make it,you just have too try..//
you can make it

RICH$LOCO · 04-15-2009, 09:21 AM

nice laid back feel to it nice flow didnt really hear u slip and lyrics are dope even though the first verse is recycled it fit this track right. keep doin u homie, nice drop

Witty Qwan · 04-15-2009, 12:03 PM

DAT BOI TREY · 04-15-2009, 03:20 PM

dope fam beat wuz good nice laid back track to vibe to.

C Gilbert · 04-15-2009, 03:56 PM

Tracks nice King
Beat is tight, nice sample you found by sinema
Flow was on and off at some times but majority was on...laid back
Lyrics stuck to the concept. good quality.
Overall nice song, keep doing ya

TheRealProtege · 04-15-2009, 04:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

prolly the worst cover ive ever seen =/

anyways track was aight. nothn special though.

beats been used by everyone. -_-

Witty Qwan · 04-15-2009, 05:17 PM

lmaoooo...took 5 minutes in paint....

rep me

youngking187 · 04-15-2009, 05:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheRealProtege

prolly the worst cover ive ever seen =/

anyways track was aight. nothn special though.

beats been used by everyone. -_-

good lookz protege..appreciate it..
i know this wasnt my best shit..
just threw it out there..ill be droppin
some heat..look out for it homie

Quote:

Originally Posted by C Gilbert

Tracks nice King
Beat is tight, nice sample you found by sinema
Flow was on and off at some times but majority was on...laid back
Lyrics stuck to the concept. good quality.
Overall nice song, keep doing ya

good lookz fam..i appreciate the feed..

Quote:

Originally Posted by DAT BOI TREY

dope fam beat wuz good nice laid back track to vibe to.

good lookz trey..i appreciate it fam..

Quote:

Originally Posted by RICH$LOCO

nice laid back feel to it nice flow didnt really hear u slip and lyrics are dope even though the first verse is recycled it fit this track right. keep doin u homie, nice drop

good lookz fam..i appreciate it..

Masterpiece · 04-15-2009, 07:52 PM

this is a solid track...everything i was gonna say was said already........keep ya head up king

-LATIN- · 04-15-2009, 08:08 PM

NO NO NO NO lol I just finished this song on the same beat!! lol Sinima is a fuckin beast..
But imma check it out and listen to it in a lil while. I just seen the post i was like fuck lol

Lyrikcha · 04-15-2009, 09:32 PM

track is Ok...the emotion I think was a lil off or something caz idk it seemed like u were rappin but it wasnt drawin me in enough...lyrics were cool tho...flow was shaky tho off and on...Sinima yea good choice...decent track...Keep doin ur thang...and yea im a try to get another collab goin

youngking187 · 04-15-2009, 11:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lyrikcha

track is Ok...the emotion I think was a lil off or something caz idk it seemed like u were rappin but it wasnt drawin me in enough...lyrics were cool tho...flow was shaky tho off and on...Sinema yea good choice...decent track...Keep doin ur thang...and yea im a try to get another collab goin

good lookz with the feed my nigg..appreciate it fam..
ill definitely work on gettin everything str8..
just holla at me when u come up with something..
and ima get at u if i come up with something..

Quote:

Originally Posted by -LATIN-

NO NO NO NO lol I just finished this song on the same beat!! lol Sinima is a fuckin beast..
But imma check it out and listen to it in a lil while. I just seen the post i was like fuck lol

lol..its all good my nigg..i aint goin use it for my tape or nothing..
and yea sinema is dope..

Quote:

Originally Posted by DH4LiFe516

this is a solid track...everything i was gonna say was said already........keep ya head up king

good lookz on the feed my nigg..
appreciate it fam..

Witty Qwan · 04-16-2009, 02:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheRealProtege

prolly the worst cover ive ever seen =/

anyways track was aight. nothn special though.

beats been used by everyone. -_-

check it out now...it took twice as long to make

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.......yes that says gunit in the upper right corner

YoungJ · 04-16-2009, 02:46 PM

Good shit...flow was on and off in this shit. Lyrics were cool I didnt like the outro that much but do you son...quality is nice to you came in i was like dam this soundin legit...

youngking187 · 04-16-2009, 03:17 PM

^^^good lookz on the feed..

-LATIN- · 04-17-2009, 07:55 PM

lol Damn soon as ur verse came in i was gonna spit mine lol..
Nah fam this shit was coo ma dude!!!
That Iverson line was coo kid..Keep that shit coming famo

04-15-2009, 09:21 AM	#2
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	nice laid back feel to it nice flow didnt really hear u slip and lyrics are dope even though the first verse is recycled it fit this track right. keep doin u homie, nice drop __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

04-15-2009, 12:03 PM	#3
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,051 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	__________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

04-15-2009, 03:20 PM	#4
DAT BOI TREY Fly $ociety. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: the studio Posts: 745 Repped: 401 Repped 73 Times in 55 Posts Neg Reps: 70 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	dope fam beat wuz good nice laid back track to vibe to. __________________ FIU 09/10 Sunbelt Champions.

04-15-2009, 03:56 PM	#5
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Tracks nice King Beat is tight, nice sample you found by sinema Flow was on and off at some times but majority was on...laid back Lyrics stuck to the concept. good quality. Overall nice song, keep doing ya __________________

04-15-2009, 05:17 PM	#7
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,051 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	lmaoooo...took 5 minutes in paint.... rep me __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

04-15-2009, 07:52 PM	#9
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is a solid track...everything i was gonna say was said already........keep ya head up king

04-15-2009, 08:08 PM	#10
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,888 Repped: 334 Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 54 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	NO NO NO NO lol I just finished this song on the same beat!! lol Sinima is a fuckin beast.. But imma check it out and listen to it in a lil while. I just seen the post i was like fuck lol __________________ NEW MYSPACE NEW GRAPHICS NEW PICTURES NEW MUSIC LATIN RELOADED (COMING SOON) CUT FROM A DIFFERENT CLOTH COMING AUG 26TH

04-15-2009, 09:32 PM	#11
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,372 Repped: 11 Repped 792 Times in 297 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	track is Ok...the emotion I think was a lil off or something caz idk it seemed like u were rappin but it wasnt drawin me in enough...lyrics were cool tho...flow was shaky tho off and on...Sinima yea good choice...decent track...Keep doin ur thang...and yea im a try to get another collab goin __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

04-16-2009, 02:46 PM	#14
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Good shit...flow was on and off in this shit. Lyrics were cool I didnt like the outro that much but do you son...quality is nice to you came in i was like dam this soundin legit...

04-16-2009, 03:17 PM	#15
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^good lookz on the feed.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-17-2009, 07:55 PM	#16
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,888 Repped: 334 Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 54 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol Damn soon as ur verse came in i was gonna spit mine lol.. Nah fam this shit was coo ma dude!!! That Iverson line was coo kid..Keep that shit coming famo __________________ NEW MYSPACE NEW GRAPHICS NEW PICTURES NEW MUSIC LATIN RELOADED (COMING SOON) CUT FROM A DIFFERENT CLOTH COMING AUG 26TH

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