[NEW]YoungKing-Hurt

youngking187 · 04-07-2009, 06:44 PM

another unreleased track im not using..been had it
if u remember i let yall here the snippet..
i think this joint couldve been even great
if i would have executed it to its fullest potential..
but ill take all feed...neg/pos or whatever yall do..lol..
if u dont understand something let me know
sorry i couldnt give the lyrics this time..
but its me through the whole track....intro..chorus..both verses..

......check it out..

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 04-07-2009, 06:54 PM

Easily the best shit I heard from you..

Well put together.. dope flow n Lyrics..

9/10

Love this Killah Priest beat

Lyrikcha · 04-07-2009, 07:03 PM

cool track...chorus reminded me alot of 50...beat was basically just background to ur vocals...forgot there was a beat most of the time but this was nice...over all a solid track....keep doin ur thang

u mad slept on...people to busy givin that fag J prov attention because hes so horrible

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 04-07-2009, 07:11 PM

tha hook wasnet hittin for me....

flow was good, lyrics cool...emotion real good to me...

7/10

solid drop dawg...

could u send me dat beat thou pm for me if u dnt mind?...

but stay up homie...keep workin n grindin

C Gilbert · 04-07-2009, 09:07 PM

This is pretty good, best Ive heard from you
Stepped up your flow game I see...lyrics fit the concept
Hooks nice, beats fresh.
Only suggestion is mixing your vocals and the beat better.

Viktor Vaughn · 04-07-2009, 09:36 PM

first ive heard from you, nice song,volume could use a nice boost tho, that beat needs a biggg dB boost, flow is cool,lyrics spot on to,good work, will be lookin out for more music of yours.

youngking187 · 04-07-2009, 10:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Viktor Vaughn

first ive heard from you, nice song,volume could use a nice boost tho, that beat needs a biggg dB boost, flow is cool,lyrics spot on to,good work, will be lookin out for more music of yours.

good lookz on the feed Viktor..
appreciate it..much respect..
1st u heard from me???..where u been at man???..lol..j/k..
good lookz my nigg...

Quote:

Originally Posted by C Gilbert

This is pretty good, best Ive heard from you
Stepped up your flow game I see...lyrics fit the concept
Hooks nice, beats fresh.
Only suggestion is mixing your vocals and the beat better.

good lookz gilbert arenas

..
appreciate the feed my nigg..ill try to mix the vocals better..
much respect fam..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lyrikcha

cool track...chorus reminded me alot of 50...beat was basically just background to ur vocals...forgot there was a beat most of the time but this was nice...over all a solid track....keep doin ur thang

u mad slept on...people to busy givin that fag J prov attention because hes so horrible

good lookz with the feed my nigg..i think that down 4 you track
caught alot of peoples eyes..one of the top viewed tracks as of late..
but i like being the underdog..wait till they here the shit
we goin hit em with...good lookz..u been supporting my shit
and i really respect that..and prov i aint goin speak on that..
he's pretty much gonna commit suicide.

lay off the autotune though prov and make some music..
u makin the board look Bad homie..
let me stop promoting him..

hhboard..
How Its Gonna End

Quote:

Originally Posted by OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK

tha hook wasnet hittin for me....

flow was good, lyrics cool...emotion real good to me...

7/10

solid drop dawg...

could u send me dat beat thou pm for me if u dnt mind?...

but stay up homie...keep workin n grindin

good lookz on the feed jae..ill work to improve my hook game..lol..
much respect appreciate it my nigg..ill send u the beat soon as
i get to my cpu..im out right..probably send it to u 2mar..

Quote:

Originally Posted by PBMaSteRMiNdiN

Easily the best shit I heard from you..

Well put together.. dope flow n Lyrics..

9/10

Love this Killah Priest beat

best shit u heard from me???..word????..damn good lookz pistol
really appreciate that my nigg..ima keep working too deliver..

im on DH track called Amazing and Latin Track called Born Thug..
go drop some feed on them...big ups too them niggaz for wantin
me on there track..anybody wanna collab hit me up..hook/verse/or what ever..

J~Souljah · 04-08-2009, 01:20 AM

wuts ya aim nigga

Blizzy · 04-08-2009, 05:13 PM

substance lyrics fit this beat perfect....i like the chorus alot just could ave been delivered better....flow was off at times and could ave been recorded better but overall....dope shit kingo....stay up

Masterpiece · 04-08-2009, 07:08 PM

this was good king...striaght verses...hook was good could use some work...but i felt this one

RICH$LOCO · 04-08-2009, 08:00 PM

dope shit king deep lyrics and nicely put together beat is simple so it fit perfect prolly ur best shit so far

DAT BOI TREY · 04-09-2009, 10:36 AM

this track is dopee my nigga keep dropin that fire!

youngking187 · 04-09-2009, 06:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DAT BOI TREY

this track is dopee my nigga keep dropin that fire!

good lookz on the feed fam..
appreciate it..ima keep droppin that fire..

Quote:

Originally Posted by RICH$LOCO

dope shit king deep lyrics and nicely put together beat is simple so it fit perfect prolly ur best shit so far

good lookz on the feed fam..
appreciate it....

Quote:

Originally Posted by DH4LiFe516

this was good king...striaght verses...hook was good could use some work...but i felt this one

good lookz on the feed..ill def try to improve on my hookz..
appreciate it..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blizzy

substance lyrics fit this beat perfect....i like the chorus alot just could ave been delivered better....flow was off at times and could ave been recorded better but overall....dope shit kingo....stay up

good lookz on the feed..
ima make sure i get that shit down packed...
appreciate it...

get at me wit some feed..!!!!...
or anybody holla at me bout a collab..

youngking187 · 04-12-2009, 01:48 PM

upppppzzzz

Witty Qwan · 04-13-2009, 11:15 PM

for a unrealeased track...this was hella dope...real talk deep shit...good flow n lyrics...like this track

youngking187 · 04-13-2009, 11:54 PM

^^^good lookz on the feed my nigg..
appreciate it...

youngking187 · 04-14-2009, 12:44 PM

get at me!!!!

youngking187 · 04-18-2009, 02:43 PM

bumpppppp..

youngking187 · 04-22-2009, 11:45 PM

uppppppppppz

BucK_MarleY_07 · 05-22-2009, 09:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PBMaSteRMiNdiN

Easily the best shit I heard from you..

Well put together.. dope flow n Lyrics..

9/10

Love this Killah Priest beat

Cosign, this is a Killah Priest beat?

youngking187 · 05-23-2009, 07:22 PM

^^^good lookz homie.

youngking187 · 05-26-2009, 10:22 AM

bumpppppppppp

youngking187 · 05-29-2009, 05:48 PM

upppppppzzz

youngking187 · 06-02-2009, 09:08 PM

bumppppp....

04-07-2009, 06:44 PM	#1
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	[NEW]YoungKing-Hurt [NEW]YoungKing-Hurt another unreleased track im not using..been had it if u remember i let yall here the snippet.. i think this joint couldve been even great if i would have executed it to its fullest potential.. but ill take all feed...neg/pos or whatever yall do..lol.. if u dont understand something let me know sorry i couldnt give the lyrics this time.. but its me through the whole track....intro..chorus..both verses.. ......check it out.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-07-2009, 06:54 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,907 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Easily the best shit I heard from you.. Well put together.. dope flow n Lyrics.. 9/10 Love this Killah Priest beat __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito Last edited by PBMaSteRMiNdiN; 04-07-2009 at 06:59 PM.

04-07-2009, 07:03 PM	#3
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,381 Repped: 11 Repped 795 Times in 299 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	cool track...chorus reminded me alot of 50...beat was basically just background to ur vocals...forgot there was a beat most of the time but this was nice...over all a solid track....keep doin ur thang u mad slept on...people to busy givin that fag J prov attention because hes so horrible __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life Last edited by Lyrikcha; 04-07-2009 at 07:08 PM.

04-07-2009, 07:11 PM	#4
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	tha hook wasnet hittin for me.... flow was good, lyrics cool...emotion real good to me... 7/10 solid drop dawg... could u send me dat beat thou pm for me if u dnt mind?... but stay up homie...keep workin n grindin __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

04-07-2009, 09:07 PM	#5
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	This is pretty good, best Ive heard from you Stepped up your flow game I see...lyrics fit the concept Hooks nice, beats fresh. Only suggestion is mixing your vocals and the beat better. __________________

04-07-2009, 09:36 PM	#6
Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,275 Repped: 941 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	first ive heard from you, nice song,volume could use a nice boost tho, that beat needs a biggg dB boost, flow is cool,lyrics spot on to,good work, will be lookin out for more music of yours.

04-08-2009, 01:20 AM	#8
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	wuts ya aim nigga

04-08-2009, 05:13 PM	#9
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,369 Repped: 691 Repped 347 Times in 160 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 26 Posts	substance lyrics fit this beat perfect....i like the chorus alot just could ave been delivered better....flow was off at times and could ave been recorded better but overall....dope shit kingo....stay up __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-08-2009, 07:08 PM	#10
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was good king...striaght verses...hook was good could use some work...but i felt this one

04-08-2009, 08:00 PM	#11
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,570 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	dope shit king deep lyrics and nicely put together beat is simple so it fit perfect prolly ur best shit so far __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

04-09-2009, 10:36 AM	#12
DAT BOI TREY Fly $ociety. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: the studio Posts: 750 Repped: 406 Repped 73 Times in 55 Posts Neg Reps: 70 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	this track is dopee my nigga keep dropin that fire! __________________ FIU 09/10 Sunbelt Champions.

04-12-2009, 01:48 PM	#14
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	upppppzzzz __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-13-2009, 11:15 PM	#15
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,053 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	for a unrealeased track...this was hella dope...real talk deep shit...good flow n lyrics...like this track __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

04-13-2009, 11:54 PM	#16
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^good lookz on the feed my nigg.. appreciate it... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-14-2009, 12:44 PM	#17
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	get at me!!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-18-2009, 02:43 PM	#18
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bumpppppp.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-22-2009, 11:45 PM	#19
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	uppppppppppz __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-23-2009, 07:22 PM	#21
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^good lookz homie. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-26-2009, 10:22 AM	#22
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bumpppppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-29-2009, 05:48 PM	#23
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	upppppppzzz __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-02-2009, 09:08 PM	#24
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bumppppp.... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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