(NEW) Camera's Are Watchin' (NEW)

Blizzy · 03-31-2009, 04:48 PM

Yo....this a new track we done....in order....

Satch, Me (bloodshot), Kaos Theory & Reppo

feedback appreciated...

Produced by Kriddi

MagicFX · 03-31-2009, 05:00 PM

satch is on piont here, flow is good for the most part.. I'd rather hear a punch in that somebody run out of breath like he did at the end of his verse tho..

blizzy, you got a good flow, I like how you worked the beat a few times in there. nice job stayin on topic with lyrics... quality sounds good.

3rd cat is probably the most polished to me.. he meshed with the beat the best and had some nice flows.

4th cat.. did his thing, long track to me, could have done with first three verses because with this beat, it got a little repetitive, WuTang can harldy keep my attention
for 4 minutes.

props tho.. all you dudes can flow and write.

Tom Chambers · 03-31-2009, 05:12 PM

dope shit blizzy....me and you.....need to put in work....pause

Fre3dom · 03-31-2009, 05:19 PM

1st guy...is ok.....flow was good....voice is meh...its his accent...just doesnt suit rap at all...but his verse was good...altho the hook was pretty bad

blizzy...ur verse was ok....ur flow is on and off...emotion was there...ur accent throws me off too...wherebouts u from? u sound slightly yorkshire/welsh at times lol..overall u were alrite

3rd verse - flow was dope...his accent was still there but not as present as every1 else so far...his verse was the best

4th - oh god....the accent is bad...def not for rap no offence...lyrics were good...his flow was on and off too...he was good

hook needs to be changed up a bit...the last two lines of it were dope...the rest was repetitive and boring...

overall this track was ok...beat was the best thing about it...that was dope...stau up keep droppin

Blizzy · 03-31-2009, 05:22 PM

props on all feed so far....Tom PM me any idea's or beats....Freedom I'm from Weston (near Bristol)....

Fre3dom · 03-31-2009, 05:28 PM

Oh aiight...bristol accent k...no offence meant by it tho...keep doin ur thing

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 03-31-2009, 05:36 PM

this was a decent drop my dude

beat was nice....

hook was aite...cool

flow's were good to me...off n on espiecally wit tha last guy...his flow started off ruff..but caught back on....emotion is always sumthing different to me wit u uk cats.....so its kinda iffy to me...., lyrics cool.....

check out my two drops relax, n hell boy 2 if u have tha chance

stay up dawg.....

Blizzy · 04-01-2009, 06:10 PM

^props....will peep in abit mate.....

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 04-01-2009, 06:15 PM

Yo hook me up with this beat!

This is sickkkk as fuck.. i like the message ..

Hook is amazingggggg

First verse was dope.. good flow..

Second verse was my fav.. good flow.. lyrics made me zone..

third verse had crazy vocab.. decent flowwww

4th verse had an iffffy flow.. i liked his lyrics..

I have such a dope idea for this beat.. plzzzzzz get me this beat!

youngking187 · 04-01-2009, 06:22 PM

this waz dope fam..keep doin your thing

Blizzy · 04-03-2009, 02:40 PM

PB I'ma try get you the beat....props to king as well....BUMP

Masterpiece · 04-03-2009, 09:12 PM

this is a good song i think the first 3 flows are on point and lyrics were nice...the 4th flow was off and on....im not used to listenin to tracks with dudes that have accents so it was new for me but this was still nice

Blizzy · 04-03-2009, 11:02 PM

^props man....

RodKnee · 04-05-2009, 05:41 PM

Blizzy and Kaos >>>> Satch & reppo.

"even without the fences we're trapped in, Why the fuck am I under surveillence? Am I better off under the pavements" Favourite lines of the track! Kick reppo out

don't hurt me

Rebel INS {CF} · 04-06-2009, 03:41 PM

I love the repition of the hook, the simplicity adds to the theme, repeatin the CAMERAS ARE WATCHING just drills in the idea

I like the way u worked ur verse with that zoom in zoom out kinda flow, dont know if u meant that but it was fuckin tight to me, especially the start

Everyone did their thing, 2nd and 3rd verses were the best Id say, but overall a very good track, in fact, I might go as far as to say the 4th is the standout ... its hard to say haha, suppose thats a sign of a good squad !

YUNG STIXX · 04-06-2009, 05:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RodKnee

Blizzy and Kaos >>>> Satch & reppo.

"even without the fences we're trapped in, Why the fuck am I under surveillence? Am I better off under the pavements" Favourite lines of the track! Kick reppo out

don't hurt me

^^I AGREE WiTH THIS NIGGA

GOOD SHIT BLIZZY

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 04-06-2009, 05:44 PM

Ayo Bliz.. ask ya crew if they wanna do a remix to this.. it'll be crazyyyyy

Blizzy · 04-07-2009, 01:00 PM

Props to Rebel, Stixx and Rodknee.....and PB they ain't sure yet but I'll keep you updated on a remix....would it be the same theme?

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 04-07-2009, 05:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blizzy

Props to Rebel, Stixx and Rodknee.....and PB they ain't sure yet but I'll keep you updated on a remix....would it be the same theme?

Yea same theme.. a remix would be dopeeeeeee

YoungJ · 04-07-2009, 05:49 PM

Good shit.......this was a good track

The Genious · 04-07-2009, 05:53 PM

u got it on soundclick man ?? zshare dont play on this pc

Blizzy · 04-08-2009, 01:49 PM

PB I'll see wassup tomoz....Props Prov and ^ I don't have no soundclick account mate sorry.....

RickStyles · 04-08-2009, 09:54 PM

Like the beat, first 3 went in.

Blizzy · 04-09-2009, 01:22 PM

Props^Ricky....never see you round here man lol....

Threyev · 04-10-2009, 09:45 PM

I don't really post in this section but you give me mad feed and I don't really return the favor so I figured I'd peep your shit in here.

The hook was nice, set the mood and established the message, plus had a nice sound to it over the dope beat.

I agree with whoever said the first guy's voice was kinda weird. Not everybody is made for MCing but can still spit (I'm thinkin of Prolyphic right now) but his flow was pretty good and fairly well-written. (I liked that line Everyone's a star but my role ain't as an actor. That was hot.)

You went the hell off, as far as I go. I like how it coincided well with the beat and was the best.

The third guy was also pretty good, although not the same as you. His flow was nice, but I didn't think the overall quality of it was that great.

The last dude had a really strong accent IMO, but that might just be cuz I'm from NY. He also had the weakest verse out of everybody.

All in all this is a dope track and I put it on my ipod.

03-31-2009, 04:48 PM	#1
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	(NEW) Camera's Are Watchin' (NEW) (NEW) Camera's Are Watchin' (NEW) Yo....this a new track we done....in order.... Satch, Me (bloodshot), Kaos Theory & Reppo feedback appreciated... Produced by Kriddi __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

03-31-2009, 05:22 PM	#5
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	props on all feed so far....Tom PM me any idea's or beats....Freedom I'm from Weston (near Bristol).... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

03-31-2009, 05:36 PM	#7
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,578 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	this was a decent drop my dude beat was nice.... hook was aite...cool flow's were good to me...off n on espiecally wit tha last guy...his flow started off ruff..but caught back on....emotion is always sumthing different to me wit u uk cats.....so its kinda iffy to me...., lyrics cool..... check out my two drops relax, n hell boy 2 if u have tha chance stay up dawg..... __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

04-01-2009, 06:10 PM	#8
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	^props....will peep in abit mate..... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-01-2009, 06:15 PM	#9
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yo hook me up with this beat! This is sickkkk as fuck.. i like the message .. Hook is amazingggggg First verse was dope.. good flow.. Second verse was my fav.. good flow.. lyrics made me zone.. third verse had crazy vocab.. decent flowwww 4th verse had an iffffy flow.. i liked his lyrics.. I have such a dope idea for this beat.. plzzzzzz get me this beat! __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito Last edited by PBMaSteRMiNdiN; 04-01-2009 at 06:19 PM.

03-31-2009, 05:00 PM	#2
MagicFX Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: MN Posts: 24 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	satch is on piont here, flow is good for the most part.. I'd rather hear a punch in that somebody run out of breath like he did at the end of his verse tho.. blizzy, you got a good flow, I like how you worked the beat a few times in there. nice job stayin on topic with lyrics... quality sounds good. 3rd cat is probably the most polished to me.. he meshed with the beat the best and had some nice flows. 4th cat.. did his thing, long track to me, could have done with first three verses because with this beat, it got a little repetitive, WuTang can harldy keep my attention for 4 minutes. props tho.. all you dudes can flow and write.

03-31-2009, 05:12 PM	#3
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,278 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	dope shit blizzy....me and you.....need to put in work....pause

03-31-2009, 05:19 PM	#4
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	1st guy...is ok.....flow was good....voice is meh...its his accent...just doesnt suit rap at all...but his verse was good...altho the hook was pretty bad blizzy...ur verse was ok....ur flow is on and off...emotion was there...ur accent throws me off too...wherebouts u from? u sound slightly yorkshire/welsh at times lol..overall u were alrite 3rd verse - flow was dope...his accent was still there but not as present as every1 else so far...his verse was the best 4th - oh god....the accent is bad...def not for rap no offence...lyrics were good...his flow was on and off too...he was good hook needs to be changed up a bit...the last two lines of it were dope...the rest was repetitive and boring... overall this track was ok...beat was the best thing about it...that was dope...stau up keep droppin

03-31-2009, 05:28 PM	#6
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	Oh aiight...bristol accent k...no offence meant by it tho...keep doin ur thing

04-01-2009, 06:22 PM	#10
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	this waz dope fam..keep doin your thing __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-03-2009, 02:40 PM	#11
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	PB I'ma try get you the beat....props to king as well....BUMP __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-03-2009, 09:12 PM	#12
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is a good song i think the first 3 flows are on point and lyrics were nice...the 4th flow was off and on....im not used to listenin to tracks with dudes that have accents so it was new for me but this was still nice

04-03-2009, 11:02 PM	#13
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	^props man.... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-05-2009, 05:41 PM	#14
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	Blizzy and Kaos >>>> Satch & reppo. "even without the fences we're trapped in, Why the fuck am I under surveillence? Am I better off under the pavements" Favourite lines of the track! Kick reppo out don't hurt me __________________ Put me in you

04-06-2009, 03:41 PM	#15
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	I love the repition of the hook, the simplicity adds to the theme, repeatin the CAMERAS ARE WATCHING just drills in the idea I like the way u worked ur verse with that zoom in zoom out kinda flow, dont know if u meant that but it was fuckin tight to me, especially the start Everyone did their thing, 2nd and 3rd verses were the best Id say, but overall a very good track, in fact, I might go as far as to say the 4th is the standout ... its hard to say haha, suppose thats a sign of a good squad ! __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

04-06-2009, 05:44 PM	#17
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Ayo Bliz.. ask ya crew if they wanna do a remix to this.. it'll be crazyyyyy __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

04-07-2009, 01:00 PM	#18
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	Props to Rebel, Stixx and Rodknee.....and PB they ain't sure yet but I'll keep you updated on a remix....would it be the same theme? __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-07-2009, 05:49 PM	#20
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Good shit.......this was a good track

04-07-2009, 05:53 PM	#21
The Genious Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: The Woods Posts: 7 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	u got it on soundclick man ?? zshare dont play on this pc

04-08-2009, 01:49 PM	#22
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	PB I'll see wassup tomoz....Props Prov and ^ I don't have no soundclick account mate sorry..... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-08-2009, 09:54 PM	#23
RickStyles Veteran Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Blackpool Posts: 1,504 Repped: 215 Repped 498 Times in 242 Posts Neg Reps: 55 Neg Repped at 90 Times in 67 Posts	Like the beat, first 3 went in.

04-09-2009, 01:22 PM	#24
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	Props^Ricky....never see you round here man lol.... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-10-2009, 09:45 PM	#25
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	I don't really post in this section but you give me mad feed and I don't really return the favor so I figured I'd peep your shit in here. The hook was nice, set the mood and established the message, plus had a nice sound to it over the dope beat. I agree with whoever said the first guy's voice was kinda weird. Not everybody is made for MCing but can still spit (I'm thinkin of Prolyphic right now) but his flow was pretty good and fairly well-written. (I liked that line Everyone's a star but my role ain't as an actor. That was hot.) You went the hell off, as far as I go. I like how it coincided well with the beat and was the best. The third guy was also pretty good, although not the same as you. His flow was nice, but I didn't think the overall quality of it was that great. The last dude had a really strong accent IMO, but that might just be cuz I'm from NY. He also had the weakest verse out of everybody. All in all this is a dope track and I put it on my ipod.

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